2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练3 10页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文 短文改错---- (2019·河北部分重点联考)‎ Dear Anish，‎ Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________‎ It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________‎ has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________‎ or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________‎ I'm sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________‎ are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________‎ see that there is anything on their website(网址).7.________‎ I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________‎ when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________‎ has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________‎ forward to seeing you again.‎ See you soon.‎ Peter 答案与解析：‎ ‎1．are→is　information是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。‎ ‎2．去掉far　far通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。‎ ‎3．√‎ ‎4．course→courses　根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。‎ ‎5．去掉it　“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。‎ ‎6．particular→particularly　interested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。‎ ‎7．that→if/whether　根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。‎ ‎8．meet前加to　此处是不定式表示目的。‎ ‎9．arrived→arrive　如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。‎ ‎10．or→and　此处是“both...and...”结构，表示“两者都”。‎ ‎*******************************************************结束 短文改错---多余词 多词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。‎ ‎【1】连词多余：‎ ‎*They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning.‎ 解析：连词多余，故此去掉 (that)，原句是状语从句。‎ ‎【2】介词多余：‎ ‎*The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised.(for)‎ 解析：没有宾语，所以去掉for。‎ ‎【3】冠词多余：‎ ‎*Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.‎ 解析：固定短语，catch sight of :偶然看见。‎ ‎【4】系词/助词多余：‎ ‎*My mother was asked : “Have you taken medicine ?”‎ 解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。‎ 短文改错--------------缺词[来源:1]‎ 缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/‎ ‎【1】缺介词 ‎*He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard (in)‎ 解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。‎ ‎【2】缺冠词 ‎*However, the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)‎ 解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。‎ ‎【3】缺连接词 ‎*In one class, I learned^ it rained (why)‎ 解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为：“在一节课上，我知道了下雨的原因”。‎ ‎【4】缺系词 ‎*What ^your favorite sport ? (is)‎ 解析：句子中缺系词，在What加is.‎ ‎***************************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文 ‎(3)(25 min.)‎ ‎(2019·益阳一中月考)假如你是李明，你同学李华来信说自己每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封回信， 信的内容应包括下列要点： ‎ 焦虑症状： 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等 建议：‎ ‎1. 考前制定好合适的复习计划；‎ ‎2. 考试期间正常作息；‎ ‎3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠；‎ ‎4. 其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2. 要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；‎ ‎3. 词数： 不少于120。‎ 参考词汇： 头晕—dizzy(adj.)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】One possible version：‎ Dear Li Hua, ‎ Thanks for your letter. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.‎ Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.‎ First of all, in my opinion, it's important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.‎ Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an ‎ exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.‎ We'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.‎ ‎*********************************************************结束 第***套 第一节：短文改错(共10小题)‎ 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ 参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra happen 去掉to crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, ‎ when and but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎ his badly move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police what arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and ‎ sent policemen wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ ‎ 加he或去掉was ‎**************************************************结束 ‎ （2）‎ 最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据下表的信息，给你班的班主任Mr Edward 写一封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。 ‎ 大多数同学认为 ‎ 部分同学认为 ‎ ‎1.播放音乐能活跃气氛 ‎ ‎1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果  ‎ ‎2.能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳 ‎ ‎2.课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音 ‎ ‎3.它能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受 ‎ ‎3.有时上课后还沉浸在课间的音乐中 ‎ 参考范文 One possible version: ‎ Dear Mr Edward, ‎ Recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fall into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.‎ ‎***************************************************结束 高考英语作文（经典好句）‎ ‎（三）结尾句 ‎1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.‎ 解决这个问题的最有效的方法是……。如果那样的话…… ‎ ‎2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________.‎ 任何事情都有它的两个方面，AAA也不除外，一方面……另一方面…… ‎ ‎3. My experience tells me that to ______________ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.‎ 我的经验告诉我……需要一个细心而又坚持不懈的过程，并且在这个过程中你最好遵守这其中涉及的规则。 ‎ ‎4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.‎ 总体上来说，这是我们认识到……的重要性的紧急时刻了。 ‎ ‎5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.‎ 因此，我们应该对……采取许多有效的措施 ‎ ‎6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.‎ 通过分析这些数据，我们可以得到那样一个……的结论 ‎ ‎7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 一句话来说，整个社会应当对……的问题给予密切的关注。只有以这种方式才能在将来…… ‎ ‎8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.‎ 以我的观点来看，我们应当对……的重要性给予重视 ‎ ‎9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.‎ 但是……和……具有它们自己的优势。举个例子，然而。对比这两者，我更喜欢…… ‎ ‎10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point (of……) lies in ______________.‎ 以我的观点来看，……就像……如果，它将非常有效。无论……重点在于…… [来源:1ZXXK]‎ ‎11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.‎ 他们的观点正确吗？我认为，第一个观点看起来……。对于第二个观点，…… ‎ ‎12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believe that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.[来源:学#科#网]‎ 一个普遍的说法是……。依我来看真正的观点不是……而是……我相信只要……我们将会……所以我的观点是…… ‎ ‎13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.‎ 以我的观点来看，所有方面都部分正确。当我们……‎ 时，我们应当考虑问题的所有方面，并且做出正确的决定。‎ ‎14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.‎ 一己之见，我认为……。作为结果，我相信一个光明的未来在等待着我们，因为…… ‎ ‎15. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.‎ 人们逐渐认识到……的重要性，他们开始付出最大努力来……我们相信…… ‎ ‎16. All in all, we cannot live without ______________. But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.‎ 总之，我们不可能离开……来生活。但是同时对于即将出现的问题我们必须寻找新的方法来解决。 ‎ ‎[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎17. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.‎ 随着社会的发展，……所以……是急切并且必要的。如果每个人心甘情愿的为社会做出贡献，这将会好上加好。 ‎ ‎18. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not ，In general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.‎ 很难说……是好还是坏，一般情况下，它在很大程度上取决于……的情形。然而，从个人观点来看我发现…… ‎ ‎19. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.‎ 对于这样的情形将有效的行动坚持到底是必要的。 ‎ ‎20. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.‎ 毋庸置疑的，对于……的问题我们必须给予特别的关注 ‎ ‎21. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.‎ 但是……和……都有缺点，举例说……选择哪一个？……或什么？在做出自己的决定时细心的考虑是必要的。 ‎ ‎22. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.‎ 通过上面的讨论，我们将理智的得到……的结论。 ‎ ‎23. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.‎ 毋庸置疑，如果我们忽视这个问题，无论怎样……将会将给我们置于危险之中。 ‎ ‎24. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.‎ 我们应该从一个更宽广的角度出发以另一种眼光看待这个问题，否则，我们不能…… ‎ ‎25. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.‎ 作为结论，我们应当了解……的问题，并且反对……只有以这种方法…… ‎ ‎26. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can ‎ make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]‎ 虽然它受很多方面的影响，仍然有许多方法可以使情形变好。最重要的是……另一种方法是……另一种方法是…… ‎ ‎27. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.‎ 许多情形已经别提供在这里了，它们都有一定意义，但是所有的都不够充分，这个问题应当更进一步的研究。‎ ‎28. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.‎ 很清楚的，完成……的任务需要很多的精力。 ‎ ‎29. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.‎ 在我们达到最终目标前我们还有很长的路要走。但是一旦我们走上了路，到达这个目标的机会是很大的。 [来源:Z+xx+k.Com]‎ ‎30. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way, because I believe ______________.‎ 但是对于我，我更愿意以积极的方式看待这个问题。因为我相信…… ‎ ‎31. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.‎ 如果我们不能采取有效的方法，我们将无法控制这种趋势，并且一些不理想的结果将会不加预料的到来，所以我们必须做的是…… [来源:学&科&网Z&X&X&K]‎ ‎32. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.‎ 然而，这个图表可能不能预料未来的全部情形。我相信…… ‎ ‎33. From the graph it is evident that ______________.‎ 从这个图表中我们可以看出……是显然的。 ‎ ‎34. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.‎ 将所有的因素考虑进来，我们将得到……的结论。 ‎ ‎35. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.‎ 通过上述的原因，我强烈的推荐…… ‎ ‎36. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.‎ 通过对这些我刚刚概述的因素的研究，我相信…… ‎ ‎37. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.‎ 因此，不难得出……的结论。 ‎ ‎38. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.‎ 认识到……的事实，将引导我们得出……的结论。 ‎ ‎39. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.‎ 长话短说，我建议这个状态对于……是更好的因为…… ‎ ‎40. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.‎ 考虑过这个问题很多次后，我最终得出……是我真的想要做并且值得做的事的结论 ‎ ‎41. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.‎ 对于……的观点很大程度上取决于……的事实 ‎ ‎42. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.‎ 现在通过紧密的检验，不难得出……的结论。 ‎ ‎43. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages. ‎ 通过上述讨论，你可以得出你的优先选择。个人而言，我认为……具有很多优势。 ‎ ‎44. On the one hand, it has helped China ______________. On the other hand, it has increased China’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.‎ 一方面，它帮助中国……另一方面，它提升了中国的……并且，同时为本地的发展做出了贡献。 ‎ ‎45. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.‎ 依我来看，解决这个问题有两种方法。一种解决方法是……另一种值得采取的是…… ‎ ‎46. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.‎ 依我来看，我相信上述提到的优点超过缺点。 ‎ ‎47. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.‎ 对于我来说，……是一个胜利并且是我经过可行的考虑的重要的事情。 ‎ ‎48. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.‎ 对于我来说，我趋向于采取……，对于……更进一步说…… ‎ ‎49. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________. ‎ 如果我在……和……中做出选择，我更可能优先选择……对于我……‎ ‎***********************************************************结束