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2015年高三作文专题
2010-2014五年安徽英语高考作文真题
2014
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪
Hi Worried.:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
Yours,
Jamie
One possible version
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don’t have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.Here are three useful tips:
First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exsercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
2013
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括:
1.遵守交通法规;
2.注意举止文明。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数
One possible version
These days, breaking traffic rues and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation required considerable effort on the past of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If a walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and health. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
2012
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文,理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。
注意: 1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数120左右;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:文科 arts;理科:science
Good afternoon, everyone.
Welcome to our school!______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Thanks!
One possible version
Good afternoon, everyone.
Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows.
First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
Thanks.
2011
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience.本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”
为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的一些做法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。
One possible version
My Approach to Difficulties in Learning
As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.
However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also turn to my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.
2010
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中,放弃期中一个兵陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version
We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there’re too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.
As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.
2. 高考高分作文写法指导
从2013年安徽高考英语作文谈如何写出高分作文
《考试说明》在英语作文(书面表达)部分中指出:“根据所给情景,写一篇120个单词左右的书面材料。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等”。同时对考生英语作文的要求是:1)切中题意;Ⅱ)语言准确、得当;
Ⅲ)条理清楚。在高考英语试题中,惟有英语作文最能反映考生综合运用英语能力的素质。它通过限时的简单写作来考查学生的写作水平能否达到中学英语教学大纲所规定的写作要求。同时考查考生的英语表达是否合乎英语习惯能否达到传递信息的目的,能否进行思想交流。在考场中有限的时间内如何写出一篇既能覆盖所有内容要点,又要保证文理通顺,语言准确得当,同时,也是最重要的,还要争取得高分。下面就2013年安徽英语高考的审题构思、学生在作文当中存在的问题以及在平时的作文训练中如何帮助学生写出高分作文提出以下看法和建议,以供参考。
2013安徽高考英语作文题目就是以“讲文明,从我做起”为题目而要求大家进行英语作文。
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括:
1.遵守交通法规;
2.注意举止文明。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数
我认为2013安徽的英语高考作文与往年相比难度有所下降。一看到这个作文命题就会有一股新鲜的气息扑面而来,是一个时髦的话题。因为命题迎合了当下中国兴起的“讲文明、树新风”的高潮,是一次创新性的考查。而且命题老师也考虑到英语作文的局限性,把一个大的话题浓缩到一个学生熟悉的语境当中。是同学们所熟悉的话题,学生们有话可说。但是想要得高分,必须要注意用词精准、避免中式英语、语法结构准确、围绕一个中心意思清楚连贯地表达文章的主题。这样才能写出好文章。那么下面我就谈谈我对这篇作文的写作思路。
首先审题,主题是讲求文明,从我做起。 内容第一点是遵守交通法规,第二点是注意举止文明,要想到用这些内容用英语怎样表达, 在草稿纸上写下来你能想到的一些词语如 civilization, start from / obey the traffic rules / well-behave 然后开始以下几步:
Step1. 根据作文的要求,在一分钟之内进行brainstorm,想一下生活中有哪些行为违反遵守交通规则 以短语或句子的形式写在草稿纸上 1. run red lights (Do not be hurry when reds signals occur.) 2 zebra crossing (be cautious at crossroads.) 3.overspeed同样的方式想一下在生活中不文明举止有哪些 如1.Spitting 2. littering 3.making noise (Do not make chaos on the way) 4.smoking in public 5.Lend others a helping hand if someone is in need.这样做是为了在写Body part 这一部分进行内容筛选,使文章更有条理性。
Step 2. Plot . 因为作文给了一个题目是On the way to school 因此可以设定一个在上学路上的情节,把这两方面结合起来去写。使得内容充实。
Step 3. Opening paragraph 好的开头是成功的一半,作文当中也不例外。一个好的开头,给阅卷老师一个好印象。能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球。比如A nation’s civilization starts from its citizens.就是一个非常好的句子。
Step 4. Body part 这部分也要有Topic sentence 。还要有Supporting 句子来支持,并借助一些句型提升作文的档次。要让阅卷老师在索然无味的“白开水”当中去欣赏你的“柠檬茶”。而且要注意句子链接要紧凑。过渡词的恰当使用使得文章浑然一体。但是应注意避免词语的重复。如遵守最好不要总是用obey ,可以换他的同义词如abide/ observe等。红灯转换成绿灯用switch 这个词就比较恰当。同时从句、 时态、非谓语动词、倒装句 强调句的运用要准确。因此提醒学生一定要用自己有把握的句式,不要弄巧成拙。
但要切记长句有风险,使用需谨慎。句子越长,结构越复杂,表达就越容易失控。中学生驾驭长句的能力有限,如果达不到一定的火候,就容易犯错误。我的个人建议是,没有金刚钻别揽瓷器活,如果没有十足驾驭长句的把握,倒不如把长句拆分几个短句,也可以去收到异曲同工之妙。
Step 5.总结段,和开篇段一样,尽可能展示自己的亮点,起到画龙点睛的作用,既总结全文又回应主题,画上一个圆满的句号。比如可以写Only when we all behave well can we have a civilized society
完成了以上分析,最后就可以开始着手去写这篇文章了。学生对文章主题的理解和把握也有他们自己独特的想法,可以按照自己的理解写出自己的文章,只要符合文章要求,踩点到位,有自己的亮点能展示展现自己的英语水平、达到新课程标准的都是一篇好文章。
书面表达在英语考试中分值25分,很多同学得分不高,为赋新词强说愁,是很多学生写作文时最容易犯的通病。这些学生喜欢卖弄一些高级词汇和复杂结构,误以为高级词汇和复杂结构越多,作文就会显得越有档次。于是在写作文时,就一门心思地堆砌辞藻,刻意制造复杂句,把简单的问题复杂化,结果弄巧成拙,不是造成行文晦涩难懂,就是有故意炫耀之嫌,给阅卷老师留下班门弄斧的坏印象。得分不高的原因有以下几个原因:
1. 吃不透高级词汇的用法、表达高级,但词不达意。句子越长,越容易失控。平时重视不够,忽视平时练习,写作时时间匆匆应付。
2掌握一定的词汇和句法,但是到考试时想不起来用了。
3.考试时间分配不合理,前面的题目用时过多,后面的作文只能敷衍两句、甚至有些同学没有时间完成作文。
4.书写潦草,不规范,卷面不干净。给人一种敷衍了事的感觉。
以上原因主要是平时练习不够、语法句式不能深入脑海,不能熟练到拿来就用的程度。。
那么在平时的教学当中我们应怎样训练学生的书面表达呢?
1.平时要多背范文,多积累好的句式以及文章或话题的模板。如so ...that 、 倒装、强调句、非限定性从句、非谓语形式等等。熟练掌握这些加分句子才能在考试用好用对。比如下表是表达…重要性的简单表达和高级表达。
简单表达
高级表达
Education is important.
Education is of much importance.
The work he does is important.
The work he does is absolutely vital.
A good diet is important for us.
A good diet is essential for everyone.
Education is important to our future.
Education is critical to our future.
Money is the only thing that’s important to him.
Money is the only thing that matters to him.
First impressions are very important.
First impressions really do count.
Parents are important in children’s learning
Parents play an important role in children’s learning.
Children’s education is very important for Chinese parents.
Chinese parents attach much importance to children’s education.
2.经常做汉译英的练习,并注意一句多译。争取熟练掌握一些高级句型,写出出彩的句子。如: a. This is such an interesting book that everyone wants to read it. b. This is so interesting a book that everyone wants to read it. c. This book is so interesting that everyone wants to read it. d. So interesting is the book that everyone wants to read it. 在这四个句子当中,很明显d句最高级,阅卷老师会更喜欢。
3.平时练习作文时,各种话题都要有所准备,这样在考试作文中不会被内容所受限而无话可说或临时构思会耽误时间。把你要写的内容先用汉语写出10句话,然后想每一句话怎样写出彩,然后再加上过渡词就是一篇好文章了。另外一定不要求写作文的的量数多
,把一篇文章反复修改、多次写也有利于作文的提升,建议让老师或同学读读,让他们指出一些错误和改进的建议。
4、限时练习作文,要求学生在规定的时间内完成作文。
5、要求学生写完后要自己检查一下,避免一些低级错误。平时也可以把学生作文抄在黑板上,全班一起改作文,可以纠正一些典型错误。
6.最后要求学生书写工整、规范、美观。常言道:“字好文一半”。这种说法在高考英语书面表达中虽然有些言过其实,但书的好坏,卷面的整洁与否直接影响考生的成绩,却是不争的事实。这点其实很重要,高考阅卷是扫面试卷然后在电脑阅卷,所以书写和卷面要赢得阅卷老师的好印象。这点也是学生自己平时多加注意就可以做好,标准很简单:clean and clear.
最后,要想在高考中写出高分英语作文,不是一朝一夕的事,只有我们在平时重视了,付出了努力和劳动,在考试时我们才会胸有成竹,胜券在握,做到人无我有,人有我优。才能写出让自己满意并赢得阅卷老师青睐的高分作文。
3. 高考英语作文预测模拟题
第六模块 书面表达
1
(2014届浙江省象山普通高中高三第一次模拟)
假设你叫李华。你的英国朋友Andrew下月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。
现在,请你用英语回一封信,按以下各点答复。
1.建议骑自行车上学;
2. 自行车是学生常用交通工具;
3. 骑自行车的一些好处;
4.骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
Very happy to hear from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________ _______________________
Hopefully, what I’ve mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Andrew,
Very happy to learn from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months. As for the question about the transportation to and from school, I’d like to recommend your riding a bicycle. Here are some reasons.
Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot. Next, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school, no matter who busy the traffic could be. Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you’re off it. In this way, you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you’re here.(112 words)
Hopefully, what I’ve mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time
in our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2
(2014届湖北省襄阳四中、龙泉中学、荆州中学高三10月联考)
请根据以下提示,结合一则人生励志故事,用英语写一篇短文。
Regardless of what happened yesterday and what may or may not happen tomorrow, the present moment is where we are.
注意:
①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为120左右。
One possible version:
Regarded as a lecture master, Nick Vujicic, without arms and legs by birth, is the very person I’ve been admiring.
Disabled as he is, he has proved to the world that he can live as rich and full a life as a normal person. He never sat around feeling sorry for himself, nor did he worry about his future. On the contrary, owing to his optimism and perseverance, not only has he succeeded in caring for himself and playing sports, but he also graduated with distinction and completed a double degree. What amazes and inspires me most is that he is keen on delivering speeches and has even started a non-profit organization, Life Without Limbs, to help others like him attain their ambitions.
On his life journey, Nick has sought after the best himself despite his disabilities. Similarly, We are what we are, not what we were or what we will be. Cherish the present, develop our limitless potential, and we’ll also lead a more meaningful life.
3
(2014届广东广州执信、广雅、六中高三9月三校联考)
假设你所在小区的物业管理中心就目前存在的问题张贴告示,如下所述:
告示
亲爱的业主:
目前,小区饲养宠物的人越来越多,宠物粪便随处可见,且难以清除。为防止含有有害细菌的粪便传播疾病,所以就此提醒宠物应受到严格限制,且宠物主须牢记:1
、须到相关部门办理宠物饲养许可证;2、须在宠物年满四个月后的30天内为其接种疫苗,并在一年内再次接种疫苗。
物业管理中心
2013年9月11日
【写作内容】
1、描述目前小区出现的问题;
2、物业管理中心的提醒;
3、宠物主须牢记的两点;
4、张贴此告示的目的。
【写作要求】
1、开头与结尾已给出;
2、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
提示词:vaccinate给…接种疫苗
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre
One possible version:
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
Since there are so many pets in our community,we can see pet waste everywhere,which is so hard to remove.For this matter,we require pets should be strictly restricted and that the following details also kept in heart.Firstly ,you should license your pet at the relative authority.Secondly,you have to have your pet vaccinated within 30 days after it reaches four months of age and revaccinated within one year.To prevent pet waste containing harmful bacteria from spreading diseases,we have sensible reasons to do so.
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre
4
(2014届天津市六校高三上期第一次联考)
假设你是李华。最近,你校学生会组织开展了“构建低碳校园”活动。请你围绕“节约资源,低碳生活”的主题,根据以下提示,用英语写一封倡议书。
日常出行时怎样减少碳排放;
在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食;
在寝室和教室如何节约水、电。
注意:
词数:不少于100词;
倡议书的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;
可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth. ____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
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Dear fellow students, let’s start right now and spare no effort to do every little thing we can from now on!
One possible version:
Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth.
I think it is everyone’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal. Here is what I think we should do: First of all, we should walk or ride bikes instead of riding in cars or school buses to reduce the amount of pollution. Secondly, when we eat the food in the school cafeteria, we should eat up what we buy and not waste the food. Thirdly, it is important for us to save electricity and water. We should not leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Instead, we should turn off lights as soon as we leave the classroom and dormitories.
In a word, if we can make small changes in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth!
Dear fellow students, let’s start right now and spare no effort to do every little thing we can from now on!
Li Hua
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(2014届甘肃省部分普通高中高三目标诊断)
假定你是是的业余气象员李华,请你在晚上6∶00根据电台天气预报节目中得知的天气情况,通过广播用英语向全体学生作天气预报,并提出忠告。要点如下表:
项目 时段
午夜—凌晨2∶00
明天早晨
上午
天气情况
大风、降温5℃—8℃
阴有小雪
……
要求与忠告
离开教室时关好门窗;起床时多穿衣服,注意保暖,以防感冒。
注意:1.必须包括所给的要点,但不可逐条翻译;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 词数100左右。
One possible version:
May I have your attention please, everyone? It’s now 6 o’ clock in the evening Here is the
weather report.
There will be a strong wind from this midnight to two early tomorrow morning and the temperature will drop by 5℃—8℃ . It’s going to be cloudy and there may be light snowfalls tomorrow morning. Therefore, make sure that all the windows and doors are closed when you leave the classroom tonight in case they might be broken by the strong winds. You see, it’s getting colder and colder, so I’d like to remind you that you should put on more clothes when getting up the following morning to protect yourself from cold. That’s all Thank you a lot.
Here’s Li Hua reporting.
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(2014届甘肃省部分普通高中高三目标诊断英语(二)
假定你是李华,你校与美国一所友好学校决定通过网络开展跨文化交流活动(Cross Cultural Communication Project)。请你用邮件与美方联系,谈谈自己的设想,征求对方意见。
交流内容要点如下:
1.自我介绍;
2.饮食文化差异;
3.中学教育;
4.语言学习体会。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hi Mark,
Hope all is well.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Hi Mark,
Hope all is well. I’d like to take this opportunity to share my plan with you on our Cross Cultural Communication Project.
To be practical, we can have four aspects in our communication. First, a brief self introduction is needed. Then, as students in both sides are interested in foreign students’ life, food culture sharing will surely be the most popular. In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries. Last but not least, exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides.
That’s all. I’m open to your suggestions and expecting your plan. Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(2014届浙江象山普通高中高三第二次模拟)
象山某高中举办了一次“看电影”的活动。其中,高三(1)班的李华同学对电影《Tiny Times》里的一句话:“We are still efforts in the depths of despair(绝望), and this effort be little stars in universe(宇宙)”十分有感觉。请仔细体味这句话,并结合自己的具体事例,根据下列要求写一篇100—120词的读后感。
写作要求:1、针对摘录句来谈谈你的理解。
2、以李华的身份,简述自己的亲身经历。(要符合这句话的意思)
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入词数总数
Last week, our school held a movie activity. The movie ,named Tiny Times, made me impressed, especially a word in the movie let me unforgettable:“We are still efforts in the depths of despair, and this effort be little stars in universe.”
One possible version:
In my opinion, we should try our best to realize our goals even though there is little hope .The efforts seem to be the lights in the darkness, leading the way to hope and success.
I used to be a shy girl in my primary school. I was weak in English at that time, especially for spoken English. So I was afraid to answer the teacher’s questions during English classes. After I entered my dream middle school, something changed. I started to read many interesting English stories and my English teacher was patient to help me a lot. I studied hard in class and practiced by watching English films and listening to English songs in my free time. Little by little, I found it more and more interesting to learn English. I could even talk with my classmates fluently in English and I was not shy any more. At last, I got high grades in English and I had confidence to do it better in the future.
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(2014届河北省唐山一中高三第二次调研考试)
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英文短文:
1.看电影的好处
2.读原著的好处
3.我的看法及理由
注意:1.词数100~120,文章题目和开头已给出(不计词数)
2.参考词汇:(the) original work 或(the) book in the original(原著)
重要要求:
1.注意书法,书法分4分;
2.句式要求:文中要有一句话使用从句、倒装或者强调句;有一句话使用非谓语。每句话3分,共计6分,请考生在自己作文中的这两句话下面下划线,如果全文无下划线的句子,则以0分记入作文总分;
3.作文内容分:15分。
Film or book, which do you prefer
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
One possible version:
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
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(2014届吉林省吉林市普通中学高三开学摸底考试)
假如你是美国的Mike,你的朋友张平打算到国外留学,他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信:
1. 语言能力是基础
2. 适应能力很重要
3. 兴趣爱好被看重
4. 要有社会责任感
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Zhang Ping,
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Yours,
Mike
One possible version:
Dear Zhang Ping,
I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.
This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.
Yours,
Mike
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(2014届江苏南京高三9月学情调研)
请根据以下表格所提供的内容,写一篇短文。
时间
2013年5月27日
地点
市区一十字路口红绿灯路口处
经过
一位妇女带着小女孩闯红灯过马路还辱骂交警,半小时后,女儿返回给交警递上一封道歉信
你的看法
就此事提出自己的看法(至少两点)
你的作文应包括以下内容:
1.简述此事;
2.就此事谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。
注意:
1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013.
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One possible version:
A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2013. Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.
People with bad manners can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.
Luckily, we are also surrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.