高考英语二轮复习考前三个月专题六书面表达分类突破四半开放作文 3页

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。分类突破(四)　(半)开放作文解题指导写(半)开放性作文，考生首先要读懂所给的提示，弄清情况和要求，然后抓住关键词句，进行记叙、解释、说明、议论，再根据要求加以合理想象，并用通顺的语言表达出来。要具体做到：1．认真审题，把握要求，找准关键句，提炼主题。2．依据主线，草拟提纲，梳理文章脉络。3．定位人称，确立时态，遣词造句组篇章。(半)开放作文人称的使用较为灵活，考生应根据文章提示准确定位人称，然后将重点放在文章的遣词造句上，尽可能运用自己熟悉的表达形式来灵活表达。实战演练假如你是李华，最近你所居住的城市(北京)的雾霾严重影响了人们的生活。请根据写作要点给报社写一篇稿件反映这一问题。写作要点：1.雾霾带来的危害；2．你的建议。注意：词数100左右。参考词汇：雾霾smog构思要点　请写出要点提纲范文赏析　欣赏并背诵满分作文Asweallknow，smoghasalwaysbeenaseriousprobleminBeijing，whichhasdonegreatharmtoourdailylife.Recentlyithasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Theheavysmoghascausedmanytrafficaccidents，whichhasbroughtgreatsadnesstomanyfamilies.Inthestreet，youcanseemanypeoplewearmasks.Butunluckily，manyoldpeopleandbabiescan’tescapesufferingfromillnesscausedbysmog.Therefore，itisveryurgentforustotakemeasurestoreducethesmog.Itisveryvitaltoeducatepeople，especiallyfactoryownerstoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.Moreover，peopleshouldgotoworkbybusorbikeinsteadofdrivingeveryday.Andmediashouldcalloncitizenstoworktogethertodosomethingtosavetheairthatwecan’tlivewithout.作文升级　依据括号内提示改写满分作文3 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。①众所周知，雾霾一直是北京的严重问题；用主语从句)，whichhasdonegreatharmtoourdailylife.Recentlyithasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Theheavysmoghascausedmanytrafficaccidents，②(使许多家庭陷入悲伤；用现在分词短语作结果状语)．Youcanseemanypeoplewearmasks，③(这在大街上很普遍；用非限制性定语从句)．Butunluckily，manyoldpeopleandbabiescan’tescapesufferingfromillnesscausedbysmog.Therefore，④(必须采取紧急措施来减少雾霾；用被动语态)．Itisveryvitaltoeducatepeople，especiallyfactoryownerstoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.Moreover，⑤(建议；用主语从句)peopleshouldgotoworkbybusorbikeinsteadofdrivingeveryday.Andmediashouldcalloncitizenstoworktogethertodosomethingtosavetheairthatwecan’tlivewithout.答案①ItisknowntoallthatsmoghasalwaysbeenaseriousprobleminBeijing②bringinggreatsadnesstomanyfamilies③whichiscommoninthestreet④urgentmeasuresshouldbetakentoreducethesmog⑤itissuggestedthat对点训练学校英文报社正在进行题目为“MyFavoriteProverb”的征文活动。请根据图中谚语(proverb)写一篇英语短文，给英语校报投稿。要点如下：1．你的理解和看法；2．举例说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．题目已给出，不计入总词数。MyFavoriteProverb3 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。参考范文MyFavoriteProverb“Practicemakesperfect！”ismyfavoriteproverb，whichhasinspiredmetoachievegreatsuccess.Asweknow，theproverbmentionedaboveisverysimpletounderstand.Whateverwedo，wecannotdoitwellattheverybeginning.However，themorewepractice，thebetterwewilldoit，justastheproverbillustrates.WhenIbegantospeakEnglish，Iusedtomakemistakes.AndIwantedtogiveitup.Itwasmyteacherwhoencouragedmetokeepiton.“Practicemakesperfect！”wasrepeatedaroundme.Later，notonlycanIspeakEnglishinpublic，butalsoIcantalkwithforeignersfluently.Suchismyfavoriteproverb，asimplebutaneffectiveone.3