【英语】2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之五（8页word版） 11页

‎2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之五 ‎[一]‎ Over the past half century，using chemical fertilizers become very common in farming. Many farmers welcomed themselves as a great way to stop crop disease and increased production. Recently，however，scientists have been found that longterm use of these fertilizers can cause damage to the land and，even more dangerous，to people’s healthy.‎ With these discoveries，some farmers are beginning to turn to organic farming，that is simply farming with using any chemicals. There is many different organic farming methods. All of them have the same of goal：to grow good food and avoid damage the environment or people’s health.‎ 答案　‎ Over the past half century，using chemical fertilizers become very common in farming. Many farmers welcomed as a great way to stop crop disease and production. Recently，however，scientists have been that longterm use of these fertilizers can cause damage to the land and，even more dangerous，to people’s .‎ With these discoveries，some farmers are beginning to turn to organic farming， is simply farming using any chemicals. There many different organic farming methods. All of them have the same of goal：to grow good food and avoid the environment or people’s health.‎ ‎[二]‎ One day Li Ping was riding in the street when the old man came across the street without noticing her. The old man knocked down. Instead of help him stand up，Li Ping shouted at the old man angrily. The old man said nothing more. Then Li Ping rode away at a high speed. Several minutes late，she remembered her shoes which had been on the backseat of the bicycle，and now they are missing. She hurried back to the place that the accident took place. Much to his surprise，Li Ping found the old man waiting her. She felt really ashamed when the old man handed the shoe back to her.‎ 答案　‎ One day Li Ping was riding in the street when old man came across the street without noticing her. The old man knocked down. Instead of him stand up，Li Ping shouted at the old man angrily. The old man said nothing more. Then Li Ping rode away at a high speed. Several minutes ，she remembered her shoes which had been on the backseat of the bicycle，and now they missing. She hurried back to the place the accident took place. Much to surprise，Li Ping found the old man waiting her. She felt really ashamed when the old man handed the back to her.‎ ‎28．答案　the→an 解析　此处表示泛指，“一个老人”，又由old是元音音素开头，故把the改为an。‎ ‎29．答案　knocked前加was 解析　句意为：老人被撞倒。此处用一般过去时的被动语态，故在knocked前加was。‎ ‎30．答案　help→helping 解析　instead of是复合介词，后面用名词或动名词作宾语，故把help改为helping。‎ ‎31．答案　删除more 解析　句意为：这位老人什么都没说。more在这里是多余的，故删除more。‎ ‎32．答案　late→later 解析　句意为：几分钟之后。故把late改为later。‎ ‎33．答案　are→were 解析　因为叙述的是一件过去的事，故用一般过去时，把are改为were。‎ ‎34．答案　that→where 解析　the place作先行词，在定语从句中作地点状语，应用where引导定语从句，故把that改为where。‎ ‎35．答案　his→her 解析　根据上一句“She hurried back...”可知是“女孩”，故把his改为her。‎ ‎36．答案　waiting后加for 解析　固定搭配：wait for sb.等待某人。故在waiting后加for。‎ ‎37．答案　shoe→shoes 解析　句意为：老人把鞋递给她。鞋是两只，故把shoe改为shoes。‎ ‎[三]‎ I came across a article about a doctor called Lin Qiaozhi on chance. One of her books explained how to cut the death rate from having and caring for babies caught my eye. Then I do some research by raising some question about her. Further reading made me to realize it was hard work and determined as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school. And that made her succeed was her kindness and consideration. She often went lately at night to deliver a baby for a poor family. I was excited and wanted to carry her career.‎ 答案　‎ I came across article about a doctor called Lin Qiaozhi chance. One of her books how to cut the death rate from having and caring for babies caught my eye. Then I some research by raising some about her. Further reading made me to realize it was hard work and as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school. And made her succeed was her kindness and consideration. She often went at night to deliver a baby for a poor family. I was excited and wanted to carry her career.‎ ‎[四]‎ They knew fall had arrived in Canada，for they saw the red maple tree and frost on the ground. At the top of CN Tower，they saw the misty cloud that rise from the great Niagara Falls. There was a pity that they couldn’t go as farther as Ottawa. The train arrived in Montreal in the next morning. They found Montreal was a Frenchspoken country because there were signs and ads on French. They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visited artists in their workplaces besides the water.‎ 答案 They knew fall had arrived in Canada，for they saw the red maple and frost on the ground. At the top of CN Tower，they saw the misty cloud that from the great Niagara Falls. was a pity that they couldn’t go as as Ottawa. The train arrived in Montreal in the next morning. They found Montreal was a country ‎ because there were signs and ads French. They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and artists in their workplaces the water.‎ ‎[五]‎ I’d like to talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival. It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot，so everything went smoothly. I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there，we have much excitement. We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea. But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all. It was a time of joy，light，music and summer parties.‎ 答案　‎ I’d like to about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Australia I had three years with my dance group to participate in international dance festival. It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot， everything went smoothly. I stayed there for two and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there，we much excitement. We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and in the blue sea. But Australian nights were I adored most of all. It was a time of joy，light，music and summer parties.‎ ‎29．答案　talking→talk 解析　考查动词不定式。would like to do sth.想要做某事。故talking改为 talk。‎ ‎30．答案　before→ago 解析　考查副词。three years ago 3年前。故before改为ago。‎ ‎31．答案　international前加an 解析　考查冠词。参加一个国际舞蹈节。international的首字母发音为元音，故international前加an。‎ ‎32．答案　so→but 解析　考查连词。句意为：我母亲很担忧，但是一切进展顺利。前后为转折关系，故so改为but。‎ ‎33．答案　week→weeks 解析　考查名词单复数。week为可数名词，根据前面的two可知应该用复数形式。故week改为weeks。‎ ‎34．答案　have→had 解析　本文主要回忆过去发生的事情，故应用一般过去时。故have改为had。‎ ‎35．答案　删除on 解析　考查介词。spend为及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。故删除on。‎ ‎36．答案　swam→swimming 解析　考查动名词。swimming in the blue sea应该与前面的sunbathing on the beautiful beach并列。故swam改为swimming。‎ ‎37．答案　warmly→warm 解析　考查形容词。此处应该使用形容词修饰名词Australian nights。故warmly改为warm。‎ ‎38．答案　which→what 解析　考查表语从句。本句是一个表语从句，且从句中 I adored most of all缺宾语。故which改为what。‎ ‎[六]‎ Last month I paid a visit the moon with my friend. Before we left，I was told the force of gravity would change three time on our journey. Then we took up. As we left the earth，I became very heavily. Gradually the weight lessen. When I was in space，it was disappeared. We floated weightlessly around in the cabin and I cheered up. When I was on the moon，I ‎ was surprising to find even walking needed a bit of practice now that gravity changed. The returning of the earth was very frightened. We were amazed to watch fire broke out on the outside of the ship.‎ 答案 Last month I paid a visit the moon with my friend. Before we left，I was told the force of gravity would change three on our journey. Then we took .As we left the earth，I became very .Gradually the weight .When I was in space，it was disappeared. We floated weightlessly around in the cabin and I cheered up. When I was on the moon，I was to find even walking needed a bit of practice now that gravity changed. The returning the earth was very .We were amazed to watch fire out on the outside of the ship.‎ ‎[七]‎ Finally，Yong Hui and Wang Peng could began to talk about menus and balanced diets in the peace. They found neither of their restaurants offer a balanced diet. So they decided to combine our ideas and provide a balanced menu with food full energy and fibre. Their balanced diets became such a success that before long Wang Peng became much slim and Yong Hui put on more weigh. After some time the two found that their business cooperations had turned into a personally one. At last they got married and lived happy ever after.‎ 答案 Finally，Yong Hui and Wang Peng could to talk about menus and balanced diets in the peace. They found neither of their restaurants ‎ eq f(offer,offered) a balanced diet. So they decided to combine ideas and provide a balanced menu with food 或 energy and fibre. Their balanced diets became such a success that before long Wang Peng became much and Yong Hui put on more .After some time the two found that their business had turned into a one. At last they got married and lived ever after.‎ ‎[八]‎ As is often the case，when people are attending to meetings，having meals or waiting for buses，you can always find them addicting to their phones，completely ignoring others.‎ This is a really common phenomena in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore，too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover，people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.‎ As far as I am concerned，people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study. Meanwhile，care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.‎ 答案 As is often the case，when people are attending to meetings，having meals or waiting for buses，you can always find them to their phones，completely ignoring others.‎ This is a really common in our life.The reason is smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and in ‎ touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.，too much exposure to phones bad for people in terms of health. Moreover，people involved in phones fail to communicate well with around them.‎ As far as I am concerned，people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study.‎ Meanwhile，care about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.‎ ‎28．答案　删除to 解析　attend参加，为及物动词，故删除to。‎ ‎29．答案　addicting→addicted 解析　你总是会发现他们痴迷于手机。be addicted to对……上瘾。故将addicting改为addicted。‎ ‎30．答案　phenomena→phenomenon 解析　这在我们的生活中是一个很普遍的现象。phenomena为复数，故将phenomena改为phenomenon。‎ ‎31．答案　why→that 解析　这是因为智能手机可以被用来玩游戏等。本题考查固定句型：the reason is that...意为“……的原因是”。故将why改为that。‎ ‎32．答案　kept→keep 解析　此处为and连接的两个并列的动词不定式。故将kept改为keep。‎ ‎33．答案　Therefore→However 解析　然而过多使用手机对人们的健康有害。故将Therefore改为However。‎ ‎34．答案　are→is 解析　too much exposure to phones作主语，谓语动词应用单数。故将are改为is。‎ ‎35．答案　these→those 解析　此处应用those指代周边的那些人。故将these改为those。‎ ‎36．答案　在help和their work之间加with 解析　就我个人认为，人们应该使用手机来帮助其工作和学习。help with sth.帮助某事。‎ ‎37．答案　much→more 解析　与此同时，多多关注他们的家人和朋友，而不是手机。由than可知用比较级，故把much改为more。‎ ‎[九]‎ Zhinü，whom was the granddaughter of the Goddess of Heaven，visited the earth secret. While in earth she fall in love with the herd boy Niulang. After the Goddess of Heaven knew that her granddaughter was married with a human，she became very angry and made the weaving girl to return to Heaven. Finding that Zhinü was heartbroken，her grandmother final decided to let the couple across the Milky Way to meet once a year. People in China hope that the weather will fine on that day，because whether it is raining，it means that Zhinü is weeping and the couple won’t be able to meet.‎ 答案 Zhinü， was the granddaughter of the Goddess of Heaven，visited the earth .While earth she in love with the herd boy Niulang. After the Goddess of Heaven knew that her granddaughter was married a human，she became very angry and made the weaving girl to return to Heaven. Finding that Zhinü was heartbroken，her grandmother decided to let the couple the Milky Way to meet once a year. People in China hope that the weather will fine on that day，because it is raining，it means that Zhinü is weeping and the couple won’t be able to meet.‎ ‎[十]‎ Many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth. The more famous of these animals are dinosaurs. They lived in the earth tens of millions of years ago，long before humans came being. Their future seemed securely at that time. There had many different kinds of dinosaurs. The number of them used to living in China. Nobody knows for sure why and how dinosaurs disappeared from the earth in so a short time. According to a UN reports，some 844 animals and plants have been disappeared in the last 500 years.‎ 答案 Many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth.The famous of these animals are dinosaurs.They lived the earth tens of millions of years ago，long before humans came being.Their future seemed at that time.There many different kinds of dinosaurs. number of them used to in China.Nobody knows for sure why and how dinosaurs disappeared from the earth in a short time.According to a UN ，some 844 animals and plants have been disappeared in the last 500 years.‎