【英语】2019届高考英语二轮复习书面表达考前特训：写作5 11页

写作5‎ ‎1、假如你是李华,你校将于10月8日在学校游泳馆举办全校游泳比赛,请你代表校学生会根据下面提示写一篇书面表达,内容如下:‎ ‎1. 所有同学均可参加,有意者请在9月20日前到学生会办公室报名;‎ ‎2. 请自备泳衣泳裤;‎ ‎3. 前五名获奖同学将代表学校参加广州市中学生游泳比赛。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ NOTICE ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The Students' Union ‎2、假定你是李华,曾在英国一所学校做过交换生。在端午节即将来临之际,请你给当时的同学Peter写封信。内容如下:‎ ‎1.感谢他的帮助;‎ ‎2.邀请他来中国过端午节;‎ ‎3.表达自己的愿望。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3、假如你是李华,最近你在Facebook上更新了几张去年你中秋赏月及跟家人制作月饼的照片。你的美国网友Toby对中秋节非常感兴趣,请你以此为主题,写一封email,给他做个介绍。‎ 要求:‎ ‎1.包括:节日简介、节日意义、节日活动等;‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 词数100左右。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4、假设你叫李华,是新华中学高二年级的学生。暑假来临,你决定勤工俭学。你在晚报上看到一则广告,美乐中餐馆招聘临时服务员,请你根据下面的提示写一封求职信。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.你对这份工作很感兴趣,因为你想勤工俭学;‎ ‎2.个人情况:高二学生;16岁;性格开朗,抗压能力强;去年暑假曾在肯德基上班;‎ ‎3.希望得到这份工作。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数:120词左右;‎ ‎2.可根据内容要点适当发挥,但不要逐条翻译。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎5、每年都有许多人出国旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。‎ 要点如下:‎ ‎1. 尊重习俗; ‎ ‎2. 不高声喧哗; ‎ ‎3. 其它。‎ 注意 ‎1. 词数100左右; ‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 开头语已为你写好。‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎    I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.‎ ‎ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎6、假如你是红光中学的学生会主席李津,不久前在国际演讲比赛(International English Contest)中获得一等奖,奖励为7月5日去美国首都华盛顿(Washington D.C.)和纽约进行为期一周的旅游。你的美国朋友Jack正好在华盛顿,请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件;‎ ‎(1)获奖时的心情;‎ ‎(2)获奖的原因(注重口语练习);‎ ‎(3)你在美国的打算(期待见面,请他带领参观白宫(the White House)等;‎ 注意: 1. 词数: 不少于100词;‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 开头已经为你写好,但不计入总词数;‎ Dear Jack ,‎ ‎    How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to tell you my good news. ‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Jin ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ NOTICE ‎    A swimming competition will be held at our school on October 8th. All students are welcome to take part in the activity. Those who are interested in competing are required to sign up at the office of the Students' Union before September 20th. All competitors need to bring your own swimwear. The top five winners will be awarded prizes. Besides, they will compete in the Swimming Competition of the Senior School Students in the city of Guangzhou on behalf of our school. Please practice as often as you can and try your best.‎ ‎    Good luck!‎ The Students’ Union 解析：‎ ‎【要点翻译】‎ ‎1. 10月8日我们学校将举行游泳比赛。‎ A swimming competition will be held at our school on October 8th.‎ ‎2. 欢迎所有的学生参与此项活动。‎ All students are welcome to take part in the activity.‎ ‎3. 那些对比赛感兴趣的同学需要在9月20日前到学生会办公室报名。‎ Those who are interested in competing are required to sign up at the office of the Students' Union before September 20th.‎ ‎4. 所有比赛者需要自备泳衣泳裤。‎ All competitors need to bring your own swimwear.‎ ‎5. 前五名将获奖。‎ The top five winners will be awarded prizes.‎ ‎6. 他们将代表学校参加广州市中学生游泳比赛。‎ They will compete in the Swimming Competition of the Senior School Students in the city of Guangzhou on behalf of our school.‎ ‎7. 请尽可能经常练习并尽最大努力。‎ Please practice as often as you can and try your best.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎    How are you going? I am writing to thank you for your kind help during my stay in England.‎ ‎    Thanks to your help, my English has improved a lot and my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.‎ ‎    The Dragon Boat festival is coming, which is an important traditional festival for the Chinese. It falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month. People eat Zongzi and race dragon boats in memory of the greatest poet Quyuan, who is a patriot and died for his country. Would you like to come to experience Chinese culture? I can also show you around some places of interest. I am sure you will have a happy time here.‎ ‎    I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：本文属于感谢信。感谢信的写作格式一般分为三段。第一段表达感谢之情并说明原因。信的开头应问候对对方,并对对方的关心和提供的帮助表示由衷的感谢。第二段邀请对方来中国过端午节,在此段中对端午节作个简单的叙述。第三段表达自己的愿望。亮点分析:本文格式正确,内容完整,行文连贯。以简单句为主,同时运用了两处非限制性定语从句,如(…., which is an important traditional festival for the Chinese.和…Quyuan, who is a patriot and died for his country.),一处名词从句(I am sure you will have a happy time here.)。同时还运用了许多较高级词汇,如thanks to, in memory of, show sb. around some ‎ places of interest, Would you like to do…,look forward to your reply等,为文章增添了亮点。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Hi Toby,‎ ‎    How are you doing these days? I am glad thal you showed great interest in my pictures about the Mid-Autumn Festival.‎ Now let me tell you something about it.‎ ‎    The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. It is not only popular in China, but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries, such as Japan and North Korea. People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion,luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to reunite with their family. They will also eat mooncakes, which arc round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside. And I hope some day we can celebrate it together.‎ ‎    Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎【要点翻译】‎ ‎1. 节在每年农历八月十五。‎ The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year.‎ ‎2.它不仅在中国很流行,而且许多其他亚洲国家,诸如日本和朝鲜也庆祝该节曰。‎ It is not only popular in China, but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries,such as Japan and North Korea.‎ ‎3.人们相信月亮是团圆、运气和财富的象征,在这个特定时刻对心爱的人表达良好祝愿也是一种风俗。‎ People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a cuslom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particular time.‎ ‎4.在那一天人们通常回家和家人团圆。‎ On that day people usually go back home to reunite with their family.‎ ‎5.他们也吃月饼,月饼里有肉、蛋、坚果和其他东西。‎ They will also eat mooncakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.‎ ‎6.我希望有一天我们一起庆祝该节日。‎ I hope some day we can celebrate it together.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎    I'm writing to apply for the temporary position as a waiter in your restaurant, which I saw in an advertisement in the evening paper. I'm 16 years old, a student of Senior Two in Xinhua Middle School. The summer holiday is coming, so I would like to find a job during July and August.‎ ‎    Last summer vacation, I worked as a waiter at KFC, where I learned how to cooperate with others. I'm outgoing and can work well under pressure. Besides, I'm really interested in the job.‎ ‎    I would be very grateful if you could offer me the job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎【要点翻译】‎ ‎1.我写信申请你饭店的临时服务员,我在晚报的广告上看到的这条消息。‎ I'm writing to apply for the temporary position as a waiter in your restaurant, which I saw in an advertisement in the evening paper.‎ ‎2.我16岁,是新华中学高二年级的学生。‎ I'm 16 years old, a student of Senior Two in Xinhua MiddleSchool.‎ ‎3.暑假要来了,因此我想在七八月份找份工作。‎ The summer holiday is coming, so I would like to find a job during July and August.‎ ‎4.去年暑假我在肯德基当服务员,在那儿我学会了如何和别人合作。‎ Last summer vacation, I worked as a waiter at KFC, where I learned how to cooperate with others.‎ ‎5.我性格开朗,抗压能力强。‎ I'm outgoing and can work well under pressure.‎ ‎6.我对这份工作很感兴趣。‎ I'm really interested in the job.‎ ‎7.如果你能提供给我这份工作,我将不胜感激。‎ I would be very grateful if you could offer me the job.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear Editor,‎ ‎    I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.‎ ‎    Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.‎ ‎    In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act.‎ ‎    Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给要点,以“文明出国旅游”为主题给报社专栏编辑写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.尊重习俗;2.不高声喧哗;3. 其它。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型,是学生们比较熟悉的,所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。‎ 写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚,结构清晰,要点全面。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式,增强了文章的连贯性。如不定式表目的、定语从句、宾语从句、和倒装句的使用;for sightseeing and relaxation、civilized tourist、it is necessary to、等词汇和First, Also, More importantly连接词等。‎ 考点:应用文作文 ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jack,‎ ‎    How is everything going on with you? I’m writing this letter to tell you my good news.‎ ‎    Yesterday I was told that I won the first prize in the International English Speech Contest. I was so glad that I wanted to tell you that I will go to America on 15th July to pay a visit to Washington D.C. and New York for a week as an award for the first place. And I’m happy that I have focused on learning oral English and practiced a lot.‎ ‎    As you live in Washington, I want to know if it is convenient for you to show me around the White Palace. I would appreciate it if you can help me.‎ ‎    I’ m looking forward to seeing you in Washington.‎ Yours Sincerely Li Jin 解析：‎ 第1步:审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件,要求考生给美国朋友Jack写一封邮件说明获奖的心情、原因及在美国的打算。‎ 第2步:组织要点。(1)获奖时的心情:非常高兴;(2)获奖的原因:注重口语练习;(3)你在美国的打算(期待见面,请他带领参观白宫(the White House)等;‎ 第3步:根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句,关键词为win the first prize、be so glad 、go to America on 15th July、an award for the first place、focus on learning oral English、show around the White Palace等;特别要注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。‎ 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎ ‎