2020届北师大版高考一轮复习必修三学案：Unit9SectionⅧ(自修课)Writing—报告 3页

Section_Ⅷ (自修课)Writing—_报告_‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 一、基本结构 报告的写作可分为以下几个步骤：‎ ‎1．按照报告的题头格式，写出报告的呈交人和接收人，报告日期和报告主题。‎ ‎2．正文一般由以下四部分组成：‎ ‎(1)简要介绍所报告的对象的基本情况及写作目的。‎ ‎(2)介绍所报告的对象的好的方面。‎ ‎(3)介绍所报告的对象的不好的方面或欠缺之处。‎ ‎(4)最后总结并提出改进的建议或自己的观点。‎ 二、增分佳句 ‎1．The aim of this report is to ...‎ ‎2．On the one hand, there are some advantages about ...‎ ‎3．On the other hand, there exist several problems/disadvantages about ...‎ ‎4．On the other hand, some things exist not so good.‎ ‎5．On the other hand, I find these things disappointing.‎ ‎6．However, there are many things which could be improved.‎ ‎7．In conclusion ... need to do something to ...‎ ‎[题目要求]‎ 现在有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包，这一现象引起了很大关注。现在请你根据如下内容写一篇英文报告：‎ ‎1．父母经常翻看孩子的日记或书包；‎ ‎2．不同人对这种现象的不同看法；‎ ‎3．你自己的见解。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右。‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 ‎1．确定体裁：本文是一篇报告；‎ ‎2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；‎ ‎3．确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。‎ 二、构思 第一部分：提出问题。‎ 第二部分：孩子和家长的想法。‎ 第三部分：表达自己的想法。‎ 第二步：核心词汇想周全 ‎1．frequently　　　　　 频繁地 ‎2．be_fed_up 厌烦，讨厌 ‎ 3.argue_about 争论 ‎4．be_sensitive_to 对……敏感 ‎5._responsibility 责任 ‎6．benefit 有益于 ‎7._impression 印象 ‎8．a_hearttoheart_talk 心贴心的交谈 第三步：由词扩句雏形现 ‎1．现在一些家长经常查看孩子的书包或日记，这使得他们很厌烦。‎ Now, some parents look_into_their_children's_school_bags or read their diaries frequently, and it_makes_their_children_fed_up.‎ ‎2．他们认为父母没有责任这么做，因为人人都有权利为自己的隐私保密。‎ They think their parents have_no_responsibility_to_do_so,_for_everyone_has_his_right_‎ to_have_his_own_secret.‎ ‎3．另一些人认为：他们想了解自己的孩子是因为他们关心自己的孩子。‎ Others think they want to know their children because_their_parents_care_about_them.‎ ‎4．我认为：与父母心贴心的交谈是解决这个问题的好办法。‎ As far as I'm concerned，we should have a hearttoheart talk with parents, which_is_a_good_measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.‎ 第四步：句式升级造亮点 ‎1．用非限制性定语从句改写句1‎ Nowadays,_some_parents_look_into_their_children's_school_bags_or_read_their_diaries_frequently,_which_makes_their_children_fed_up.‎ ‎2．用强调句型改写句3‎ Others_think_it_is_because_their_parents_care_about_them_that_they_want_to_know_their_children.‎ ‎3．用不定式作主语改写句4‎ As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_to_have_a_hearttoheart_talk_with_parents_should_be_a_good_‎ measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.‎ 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 Nowadays,_some_parents_look_into_their_children's_school_bags_or_read_their_diaries_frequently,_which_makes_their_children_fed_up.People_have_been_arguing_about_this_topic_for_a_long_time.‎ On_the_one_hand,_some_students_are_sensitive_to_this_phenomenon_and_they_think_it_has_annoyed_them_and_affected_the_relation_between_them_and_their_parents._They_think_their_parents_has_no_responsibility_to_do_so,_for_everyone_has_his_right_to_have_his_own_secret.‎ On_the_other_hand,_others_think_it_is_because_their_parents_care_about_them_that_they_want_to_know_their_children_and_this_may_benefit_their_better_development,_although_it_may_make_a_bad_impression_on_them.‎ As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_to_have_a_hearttoheart_talk_with_parents_should_be_a_good_measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.‎