高考英语二轮复习优化训练短文改错2含解析 7页

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 1 - 高考英语二轮复习优化训练：短文改错 A 短文改错 (2014·荣成模拟) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 I traveled on the 8:00 a. m. train from Glasgow to London King’s Gross on last Thursday. I was quite angry with the service of your company. The train didn’t come on time. It was forty minute late when it left Glasgow. A man at the station minutes apologized to us, but he didn’t give us some reasons for the delay. We then had any further delays on the way. As∧result, I missed my plane, which made me a disappointing. The service on the train was very poor. The trip spent more than disappointed took five hours or only soft drinks were sold. Besides, something is wrong with the air but was conditioner and it became extreme hot. Because of your good service, I feel extremely poor/bad you should make up for my loss. B 短文改错 (2014·沈阳模拟) 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 2 - 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 When I first learn to write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main learned problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into everything English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and a putting down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself put talking on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little myself story and showed∧to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. it read All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. Words 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 3 - their mother take them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.” 答案： My friend Dick was seven years old, and her his sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take took them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city ∧ to buy some new clothes. They played for a an hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely nice cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece pieces to your sister. But remembering remember to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one＼ piece to the other person，” answered his aunt. Dick thought up and this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but and said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.” 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Man is creative and powerful. During the long history of human beings, the world has been complete changed by man with new invention and huge projects. However, comparing with man, nature is certainly more powerfully. Disasters such as earthquakes, typhoons, volcanoes happen so frequently, which make us believe everything that man creates it can be destroyed by nature and many of them can never be recovered. What's worse, man's damage nature will cause fewer terrible natural disasters. No matter which is more powerful, man or nature must treat each others as friends and live in 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 4 - peace. 答案： Man is creative and powerful. During the long history of human beings, the world has been complete completely changed by man with new invention inventions and huge projects. However, comparing compared with man, nature is certainly more powerfully powerful . Disasters such as earthquakes, typhoons, volcanoes happen so frequently, which make makes us believe everything that man createsit＼ can be destroyed by nature and many of them can never be recovered. What's worse, man's damage ∧ to nature will cause fewer more terrible natural disasters. No matter which is more powerful, man or and nature must treat each others other as friends and live in peace. 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) Ladies and Gentlemen， May I pay your attention, please？Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr White, he is from America. And he is now leaving Beijing to America by Flight 2748. But we were told that Mr White forgot his passport as well his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed. The manager of the hotel has just telephoned to tell him about it. The manager has been sent his secretary to bring the passport and the wallet here, and she will come sooner. Will Mr White go to gate of our airport and wait for your passport and wallet? She will arrive at about ten minutes. 第一句：pay 改为 have 第二句：he 改为 who 第三句：to 改为 for 第四句：forgot 改为 left; well 后加 as 第五句：him 改为 us 第六句：去掉 been; sooner 改为 soon 第七句：to 后加 the 第八句：at 改为 in 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) In my village a lot of children were leaving school for various reason. Some families are too poor to send their children to school, and they have to earn money to support their families. Many parents do not think it useless to send their children 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 5 - to school. They would rather let their children to stay at home. I feel worried this. I think every child should have a chance to go to school.We should pay many attention to the education of children, for we will play an important part in our socialist construction in the future.Ways must be found prevent children from leave off their studies. 第一句： were→are; reason→reasons 第三句： useless→useful 第四句： 去掉 to 第五句： worried 后加 about 第六句： a →the 第七句： many→more; we→they 第八句： found 后加 to; leave→leaving 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in the years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out only to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. 第一句： a→the 第二句： sudden→suddenly 第四句： hotter→hot; is→was 第六句： out→out of 第七句： drop→drops 第八句： house 前加 the 或 my 第十句： loudly→loud 第十一句： 去掉 When; broke→broken 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 6 - 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) September 11, 2011 SundaySunny Today is Sunday.I didn't get up early as usually.In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a movie. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3 p．m., we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to our school and played the football.After that, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher, Mr Zhao，come into the school. He told us we had made great progresses this term.He also suggested they read more and wrote more.We promised him that we would follow his advice. 第二句：usually 改为 usual 第三句：do 改为 did 第四句：classmate 改为 classmates 第五句：And 改为 But; had 后加 been 第六句：去掉 the 第七句：while 改为 when 第八句：progresses 改为 progress 第九句：they 改为 we; wrote 改为 write 第十句：would 改为 will 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) I think there is no easy way to succeed in teaching a new language.A good memory is a great help. However, it is not much use learning by heart long lists of words and its meanings. We must learn by using language.“Learn through practice” is a piece of good advice for those which are learning a new language. Practice is very important. We must practise to speaking and writing the language so much as we can. We learn to swim by getting onto the water and swim. And we learn to speak a new language by speaking it and not by being telling about it. 第一句：teaching→learning 第三句：use→useful; its→their 第四句：language 前加 the 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 7 - 第五句：which→who 第七句：去掉 to; so→as 第八句：onto→into; swim→swimming 第九句：telling→told