2020届二轮复习书面表达热点话题押题练(七)　征文投稿 7页

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达热点话题押题练(七)　征文投稿 Ⅰ.作文升格 ‎[题目]　(2019·长沙四校一模)‎ 假定你叫李华，你校英语报English for Teens正在举办以“我最喜爱的上学日(school day)”为主题的英语征文活动。请你写一篇征文向该报投稿，内容包括：‎ ‎1．你在这天要做什么；‎ ‎2．你为什么最喜欢这天。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎[问题作文]‎ ‎①In my opinion, of the fifth school days each week, I like Thursday most, which I have interesting subjects to learn and colorful activities to ②join. In the morning, I have my favourite subject, Chinese, in which Mrs. Chen always give us wonderful teaching. Her reading lessons art such wellorganized that I achieve many every time. Most important, she never makes us embarrassing when we make mistakes. ③After_class_this_day,_together_with_my_friends,_I_go_to_the_English_Corner_of_our_school._There_are_foreign_teachers_but_some_college_students. We talk about that we are interested in freely. As well as making more friends there, I've gained a lot about English.‎ That's my favourite school day!‎ ‎[我来升格]‎ 第一步：规避错误——保基本 上面文中共有10处错误，请改正。‎ 答案：第一句：fifth→five; which→when或which前加on; join后加in 第二句：give→gives 第三句：such→so; many→much 第四句：important→importantly; embarrassing→embarrassed 第六句：but→and 第七句：that→what 第二步：词句靓化——上档次 ‎1．升级词汇①：Personally ‎2．升级词汇②：participate ‎3．把句③合并升级为定语从句 After_class_this_day,_together_with_my_friends,_I_go_to_the_English_Corner_of_our_school_where_there_are_foreign_teachers_and_some_college_students.‎ 第三步：优化结构——争满分 请把上面习作进行合理分段。‎ Personally, of the five school days each week, I like Thursday most, on which I have interesting subjects to learn and colorful activities to ‎ participate in.‎ In the morning, I have my favourite subject, Chinese, in which Mrs. Chen always gives us wonderful teaching. Her reading lessons are so wellorganized that I achieve much every time. Most importantly, she never makes us feel embarrassed when we make mistakes.‎ After class this day, together with my friends, I go to the English Corner of our school where there are foreign teachers and some college students. We talk about what we are interested in freely. As well as making more friends there, I've gained a lot about English.‎ That's my favourite school day!‎ Ⅱ.整篇训练 假定你是李华，某英文报社向即将毕业的高中生征稿，主题是“向成年出发”，请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。‎ ‎1．你的心情；　2.你的人生规划(学业、事业等方面)。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ It won't be long before I become an adult, so I feel very excited as well as a bit nervous.‎ First of all, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to my parents and teachers, without whom I couldn't have made such great progress in my life and study. Secondly, as an adult, I should learn to be independent. Also, it's time for me to take it into consideration what I will take up in the future. I wish to study in a key university to become a lawyer, using what I have learnt to serve our society.‎ Adulthood means hope, challenge and responsibility, and I'm sure I can do well in the future.‎ 书面表达热点话题押题练(八)　表达看法 Ⅰ.作文升格 ‎[题目]　(2019·太原一模)‎ 假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel给你发邮件说他想在美国办个主题为“中国风”的摄影展，想来你的家乡收集素材。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1．表示欢迎；‎ ‎2．提出建议；‎ ‎3．安排接机。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎[问题作文]‎ Dear Daniel，‎ I am ①very glad to know you will be coming to China soon. Regarding your Chinesethemed photography exhibition, but you really don't have to worry about collecting materials②. I will make good preparation for your trip③.‎ I suggest the theme of photography exhibition is from three aspects — ancient architecture, exotic food and tradition culture in Shanxi④. First, you can visit famous tourist attractions to capture the beauty of ancient buildings, use your camera⑤. Moreover, I highly recommend the Food Street in Taiyuan. You will not only satisfy your stomach but fulfill your shots' needs⑥. Last, the Courtyard of Family Qiao is a must attraction. It will tell you more about the Jin business culture⑦.‎ Let me know that you think as well. ⑧Do remember to send me details of your flight so that I can meet you at the airport on time. Looking forward to seeing you soon!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[我来升格]‎ ‎1．①处升级加黑词：more_than_delighted ‎2．改正②～⑤句中错误 第②句：去掉but 第③句：preparation→preparations 第④句：is→be 第⑤句：use→using ‎3．把句⑥合并升级为定语从句：‎ Moreover,_I_highly_recommend_the_Food_Street_in_Taiyuan_where_you_will_not_only_satisfy_your_stomach_but_fulfill_your_shots_needs.‎ ‎4．把句⑦合并升级为原因状语从句 Last,_the_Courtyard_of_Family_Qiao_is_a_must_attraction_because_it_will_tell_you_more_about_the_Jin_business_culture.‎ ‎5．⑧处增加过渡词：In_addition Ⅱ.整篇训练 假定你是李华，正在加拿大参加短期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的杂志上看到一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，但文章里没有注明日期是中国农历，且文中所配图片是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信，指出其中的错误并要求更正。‎ 内容包括：1.指出错误，给出正确信息；‎ ‎2．要求更正；‎ ‎3．赞赏对方介绍中国文化。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：中国农历the Chinese Lunar Calendar；‎ 赛艇rowing boat；龙舟dragon boat ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear editor，‎ I am writing to point out to you some of the mistakes in your recent issue about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival.‎ The Chinese Dragon Boat Festival falls on May 5th in the Chinese Lunar Calendar, not the calendar used around the world. Also, we compete with dragon boats, at the front of which there are dragon heads, not rowing boats. To correct the mistakes may be constructive and thus readers can acquire right information about Chinese culture. However, I quite appreciate your effort to introduce Chinese culture to your people, which will surely bridge the gap between two countries.‎ Thank you for your effort.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua