高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit5 Section Ⅳ　Writing 4页

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing——如何写新闻报道 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 写作任务 星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英文报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：‎ ‎1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；‎ ‎2．活动的过程；‎ ‎3．你对这次活动的评论。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数120左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 该习作要求写一篇新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。新闻报道和新闻评论有时候是结合在一起的，所以在讲述事实之后，可以发表作者的评论。‎ 新闻报道的语言偏正式，要求具体、准确、精炼。人称可以用第三人称或第一人称。在时态方面，叙述事件用过去时，评论常用一般现在时。‎ 二、谋篇布局 新闻报道往往分四个部分来写。‎ 第一部分：标题。‎ 第二部分：导语。大体交代新闻事件，主要包含新闻事件的时间、地点、人物、事件及缘由等。‎ 第三部分：主体。描述事件过程。‎ 第四部分：结语。总结全文或发表评论。‎ 三、组织语言 高考中新闻报道的标题通常已给出或省略，因此同学们大多只需写出其他部分即可。‎ 第二部分：导语。大体交代新闻事件，主要包含新闻事件的时间、地点、人物、事件及缘由等。‎ ‎1．To_help_us_students_keep_fit (为帮助我们学生保持健康), our school organized a(n)．.. on...‎ ‎2．Hundreds_of_us_took_part (我们数百人参加了) in it.‎ 第三部分：主体。描述事件过程。‎ ‎3．At 8 a．m., we_arrived_at_the_foot_of_Daqing_Mountain (我们到达大青山脚下) and began the journey with_great_excitement (带着兴奋的心情)．‎ ‎4．沿途的风景很美。‎ The_scenery_along_the_way_was_wonderful.‎ ‎5．All_the_way (一路上) we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.‎ ‎6．我们在阳光下欢呼雀跃。‎ We_jumped_and_shouted_with_joy_in_the_sunshine.‎ 第四部分：结语。总结全文或发表评论。‎ ‎7．This activity was really good for us and we_all_learned_a_lot_from_it (我们都从中学到很多)．‎ ‎8．During the activity we_enjoyed_nature_to_the_fullest (我们尽情享受大自然)．‎ ‎9．另外，我们也能够培养我们的友谊。‎ Besides,_we_were_able_to_develop_our_friendship_as_well.‎ 四、连句成篇 To help us students keep fit, our school organized a mountainclimbing activity on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.‎ It was a nice day. At 8 a．m., we arrived at the foot of Daqing Mountain and began the journey with great excitement. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When someone fell behind, others would come and offer help. At around 11 a．m., we reached the top. We jumped and shouted with joy in the sunshine.‎ This activity was really good for us and we all learned a lot from it. During the activity we enjoyed nature to the fullest. Besides, we were able to develop our friendship as well.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 假设你是校英语报的小记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，报道上周你校举行的志愿者活动。‎ 时间 活动 上周六 参观希望小学 ‎1．开联谊会 ‎2．帮忙打扫卫生 ‎3．听校长讲一些贫困生的故事 上周日 在学校操场举行募捐活动 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 新闻报道 时态 一般过去时 主题 参观希望小学 人称 第一、三人称 结构 首段：导语，扼要地揭示新闻的核心内容 中段：主体，用充足的事例来表现事实 尾段：结语，表示感受 二、词语储备——对接模块词汇 ‎1．clean_up 打扫 ‎2．hardworking_students　 刻苦学习的学生 ‎3．raise_money_for...　 为……筹钱 ‎4．give_sb._a_hand/help_sb.　 帮助某人 ‎5．as_a_result 　 结果 三、备用句型罗列——巧用模块句式、语法 完成句子 ‎1．校长告诉我们一些刻苦学习的学生的故事。‎ The head teacher told us some_stories_about_some_hardworking_students. ‎ ‎2．那些学生家境贫困。‎ Those students are from_very_poor_families.‎ ‎3．做一名志愿者并且给予他人帮助是很了不起的。‎ Being_a_volunteer_and_giving_others_a_hand are really great.‎ ‎4．这是我的信念。‎ This is my_belief.‎ 句式升级 ‎5．用定语从句合并1和2句 The_head_teacher_told_us_some_stories_about_some_hardworking_students_who_are_from_very_poor_families. ‎ ‎6．用it作形式主语合并3和4句 It_is_my_belief_that_being_a_volunteer_and_giving_others_a_hand_are_really_great.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文：‎ Last Saturday we visited a hope school in order to know more about some other children's life.‎ After arriving there, we had a party with the students there. We also helped them clean up their classrooms. The head teacher told us some stories about some hardworking students who are from very poor families. And in order to raise money for them, we held a big sale in our school playground the next day. The activity was so successful and about 5, 000 yuan was raised.‎ It is my belief that being a volunteer and giving others a hand are really great. As a result, I would like to help more people in future.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 写作训练 一、假定你是学校英语周刊的通讯员。请根据以下要点为你所在城市举办的歌唱比赛(Singing Contest)写一篇报道：‎ ‎1．时间：10月26日—30日；‎ ‎2．参加选手主要为本市市民和外籍友人；‎ ‎3．活动目的：为地震灾区儿童募捐；‎ ‎4．活动形式：选手演唱参赛曲目，并以自己的方式去街头筹集善款，最后由评委和观众(audience)对其综合素质评分，选出最佳选手。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文： ‎ Singing Contest ‎ From October 26 to 30, a singing contest was held in our city. People who took part in this contest were mainly the locals and some foreigners from the U．K., the U．S. and Australia.‎ ‎ The main purpose of this activity was to raise money for children in the earthquakehit area. Contestants sang their prepared songs and collected as much money as possible in any way in the street. Finally, judges and the audience marked each one according to their performances. The singer who got the highest scores was selected as the best singer. This contest was not only a simple way to pick out the most excellent singer but also a meaningful activity for our society.‎ 二、1月1日，高一(3)班的学生志愿者李月和张华去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫卫生、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100词左右的新闻报道。内容包括：‎ ‎1．时间、地点、人物、活动；‎ ‎2．老人们的反应；‎ ‎3．简短评论。‎ 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出。‎ Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper 参考范文： ‎ Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On New Year's Day，Li Yue and Zhang Hua，students from Class Three，Grade One，went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed，and respectfully，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then，they started working at once，cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.After everything had been done，they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave，the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.‎ Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.‎ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper