高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit4 Section Ⅳ　Writing 4页

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing——如何描述艺术喜好 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 写作任务 假设你是李华，你的朋友对著名主持人倪萍的画作很感兴趣。向你询问有关情况。请你按以下写作要点给回复。‎ ‎1．简要介绍倪萍身份和绘画风格；‎ ‎2．简单评价。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 描述艺术喜好时从逻辑上讲要做到论据充分，论证合理，确保内容直接为主题句服务：从语言上讲要简洁得当，多用书面语，以增强文章的可信度。‎ 一般以现在时和过去时相结合为主。人称一般以第一和第三人称为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 根据所给提示，我们可以将正文分为两个部分。‎ ‎1．简要介绍画家兼主持人倪萍。‎ ‎2．简要说明其绘画风格。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：介绍画家兼主持人倪萍。‎ ‎1．倪萍被认为是中国最著名的女主持人之一，她同样以生动的绘画出名。‎ Ni_Ping,_considered_one_of_the_bestknown_hostesses_in_China,_is_also_famous_for_her_lively_paintings.‎ 第二部分：说明倪萍的绘画风格 ‎2．她采用中国传统的绘画风格。‎ She_adopts_the_traditional_Chinese_style_of_painting.‎ ‎3．我们能从她的绘画中看出她观察自然界很仔细。‎ We_can_tell_by_her_paintings_that_she_observe_the_world_of_nature_carefully.‎ ‎4．人们说她的画赚了很多钱。‎ It_is_said_that_her_paintings_has_made_a_lot_of_money.‎ ‎5．事实上大部分的钱都已经捐出。‎ In_reality,_most_of_the_money_has_been_given_away.‎ 四、连句成篇 ‎ Ni Ping, considered one of the bestknown hostesses in China, is also famous/known for her lively paintings. She adopts the traditional Chinese style of painting. We can tell by her painting that she observes the world of nature carefully.‎ ‎ She never tries to imitate works of famous painters such as Qi Baishi but attempts to express what she feels about nature. Everything in her paintings seems so alive and natural that many people are fond of appreciating them. It is said that some of her paintings have made much money, but in reality most of the money has been given away to the welfare.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 你的笔友Bob在2019年春节期间来中国旅游，看到好多地方都贴着“鲤鱼跳龙门”这幅年画，但他看不懂图画的内容，请你给他简单描述图画内容，并说明中国人喜爱这幅画的理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．参考词汇：鲤鱼carp (单复数同形)；龙门Dragon Gate；湍急的swift；毅力perseverance 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 说明文 时态 一般现在时 主题 艺术喜好 人称 第三人称 结构 第一部分： 引入主题 第二部分：介绍“鲤鱼跳龙门”这幅年画 第三部分：阐述中国人喜欢这幅画的原因 二、词语储备——对接模块词汇 ‎1．traditional 传统的 ‎2．alive 有活力的；有生气的 ‎3．be_fond_of/appreciate 喜欢 三、备用句型罗列——巧用模块句式、语法 完成句子 ‎1．这是一幅传统的中国民间画，被称为“鲤鱼跳龙门”。‎ This is a traditional Chinese folk picture and it is_known_as “Carp jumping over the Dragon Gate”．‎ ‎2．这幅画深受中国人的欢迎和喜爱。‎ This picture is_popular_and_deeply_loved by Chinese people.‎ ‎3．这就是中国人非常喜欢这幅画的原因。‎ This is the reason why_Chinese_people_appreciate_this_picture very much.‎ 句式升级 ‎4．用过去分词短语作定语和非限制性定语从句合并1和2句 This_is_a_traditional_Chinese_folk_picture,_known_as_“Carp_jumping_over_the_Dragon_Gate”，_which_is_popular_and_deeply_loved_by_Chinese_people.‎ ‎5．用表语从句改写3句 That's_why_Chinese_people_appreciate_it_very_much.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级范文：‎ This is a traditional Chinese folk picture, known as “Carp jumping over the Dragon Gate”， which is popular and deeply loved by Chinese people.‎ You can see a red carp jumping over a gate. It looks wonderfully alive. As the legend goes, the carps in the Yellow River wanted to achieve their goals. They tried to jump over the swift river again and again and one finally succeeded and became a real “dragon”．‎ The picture means that you should work hard in order to make your dream come true and it is a symbol of courage, perseverance, and achievement as well as good luck. That's why Chinese people are fond of it very much.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 写作训练 一、假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice对中国艺术感兴趣，写信请你向她介绍中国传统艺术。请依据下列要点，给其写封回信。要点如下：‎ ‎1．介绍传统艺术——年画；‎ ‎2．欢迎Alice来中国体验中国年画的创作。‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 参考词汇：年画Chinese New Year paintings Dear Alice，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours truly，‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Alice，‎ How is everything going? I'm so happy to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese arts from your letter. In my opinion, learning Chinese New Year paintings is the best choice. As is known to us all, Chinese people would like to put up pictures to celebrate the Spring Festival. Chinese New Year paintings cover various subjects, like historical stories, harvests, flowers and birds. As you are good at painting, I believe you can learn the art well quickly. By learning it, you can know more about Chinese culture, and improve your drawing skills.‎ I'm looking forward to seeing you soon in China.‎ Yours truly，‎ Li Hua 二、[2019·大连高一质检]假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信向你了解京剧的有关情况。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1．京剧是中国的国剧；‎ ‎2．京剧有两百多年的历史；‎ ‎3．在国内外享有盛誉。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Tom，‎ I'm very happy to receive your letter. I'm writing to give you a brief introduction of Beijing Opera in response to your request.‎ First of all, Beijing Opera plays an important role in Chinese culture and it's widely accepted that Beijing Opera is considered as China's national opera. In addition, Beijing Opera, which dates back to the Qing Dynasty, has a history of more than 200 years. More importantly, it enjoys a high reputation both at home and abroad.‎ I strongly suggest that you come to China and enjoy Beijing Opera, which will help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture. I'm looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua