【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题训练学案 79页

‎2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题训练学案 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎  Dear Peter,‎ ‎     As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.‎ ‎     One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online ‎ shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.‎ ‎     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.‎ ‎  All the best!  ‎ ‎                                                               Yours,                                                                Li Hua ‎1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10.______‎ ‎2.   ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词． ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉． ‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词下面写出修改后的词． ‎ 注意： ‎ ‎   1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分． ‎ ‎    In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn． Some families are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies． ‎ ‎3.   ‎ ‎51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。 ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 ‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。 ‎ Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid saved. ‎ ‎  I was proud with what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.‎ ‎4.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： ‎ ‎(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎(2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 ‎ ‎ Last Tuesday, the Students' Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter saying it's best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they've already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they've devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us. ‎ ‎5.   假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出该加的词。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分 I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we ‎ get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life. So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school. We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time. ‎ ‎6.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。     增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。        删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。     修改：在错的词下划一横线（      ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。     注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；           2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 ‎ ‎     My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.      One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. ‎ Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.      That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! ‎ ‎7.    短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；       (2)只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。 Dear Angela, I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home. My home is at No.58, Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll see our school on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it’s easy for you to reach. As a bus stop is just next to my home, Bus No.23 will direct ‎ take you there. I can’t wait to seeing you in China. Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎8.   ‎ ‎71.英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。‎ It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the ‎ another side of the street.‎ ‎9.   ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.‎ ‎     One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.‎ ‎     That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I ‎ learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!‎ ‎10.   ‎ 下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。 ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎          (2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying. They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The lady is Australian. She wanted to buy a pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took it. She sings high praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English.‎ ‎11.   ‎ 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。‎ 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎    I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.‎ ‎12.   ‎ ‎71. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。‎ ‎   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎   删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ ‎   修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎   注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。‎ ‎         2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎    I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl as well as her classmates were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move . The young man didn’t know how to do . I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her the hospital at once . One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking . I think it is danger to drive very fast .‎ ‎13.   ‎ ‎71.第一节 短文改错（10分）‎ When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare ‎ animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.‎ ‎14.   ‎ ‎71.文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎   删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。‎ ‎   注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎         2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Something was happened while I was ill. While I was hugging me with pain, my two beautiful dogs lay right beside me. They were squeezed in the sofa so tight that I could hardly move. They were my comfort. While I was in my own little world of sickness, the weather outside becomes warm. People were cutting away the dead brown branch, ready new blooms. I walked outside and to my astonished, my hedge was blooming, due to which my illness seemed to take a turn for the better.‎ Today, I feel so thankful to my health. Maybe sometimes we really need to feel painful, so that we can appreciate the time where we feel good. That is so easy not to care too much how other people feel ‎ or what they are going through.‎ ‎15.   ‎ 短文改错(共10分)‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ ‎    只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Diary,‎ Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make things bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.‎ ‎　　Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir(纪念品) from my past life and my only friend.‎ Yours,‎ Rosemary ‎16.   ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎      2,只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎    Once, when l was a teenager, my father and l were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.‎ ‎    This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.  Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well- behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands.  They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another ‎ performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before. 62.（1）___  （2）___  （3）___  （4）___  （5）___  （6）____  （7）___  （8）___ （9）____  （10）____‎ ‎17.   ‎ ‎81.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（−）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I’m glad to hear the news what you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is the beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler once visits Hangzhou, and was struck by its beautifully scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest city with a long history. It was the capital of several dyn asties. As a result, it has a lot famous temples and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around, attracts a large number of visitors at home ‎ and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during your stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.‎ ‎ (1)_______(2)_______(3)_______(4)_______(5)_______  (6)_______(7)_______(8)_______(9)_______(10)_______ ‎ ‎18.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在却此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： ‎ ‎(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎(2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Dear David, I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can’t stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It’s time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice. ‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply! ‎ ‎19.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： ‎ ‎(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎(2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。 The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of disease caused by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world. Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful. ‎ ‎20.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。 Dear Angela, I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home. My home is at No.58, Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll see our school on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it’s easy for you to reach. As a bus stop is just next to my home, Bus No.23 will direct take you there. I can’t wait to seeing you in China. Yours, Li Hua ‎ ‎21.   文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： ‎ ‎(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎(2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Nowadays Grade Three students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. ‎ ‎22.   文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： ‎ ‎(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎(2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Nowadays Grade Three students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. ‎ ‎23.   ‎ ‎  ‎ 下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ ‎    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（  ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 ‎ ‎    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 ‎ ‎    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 ‎ ‎    注意： ‎ ‎    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 ‎ ‎    Andrew is a 28－year－old American man，which life is very difficult because he born without arms or legs．Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked like a monster．Doing normal things seemed impossibly to him．However，Andrew never gave up，and after many failures，he finally learn to swim，fish and even surf．Most surprising，he completed university and earned the two degrees．Now he is the CEO of two company． ‎ ‎    When asking about the secret of his success，Andrew's answer is：Attitude is altitude．To him，nothing is impossible if you has enough determination to overcome difficulties．He thinks a positive attitude is the key of success． ‎ ‎24.   ‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） ‎ ‎    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ ‎    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 ‎ ‎    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 ‎ ‎    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 ‎ ‎    注意； ‎ ‎    1．每处错误仅限1词； ‎ ‎    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 ‎ Dear Sir， ‎ ‎    I read their advertisement in yesterday's China Daily．I feel I am qualified to the job in your company．I'm 20 year old and in a good health．After graduation from a middle school，I studied English for six years，and I also learn bookkeeping，typewriting and public relations．I do good in operating PC and has a good command of English．I'm interesting in the position of a secretary．I want very much be accepted by your company．I'll work hard until I can be a member in your company． Li Hua ‎ ‎25.   文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。 Last Sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see her after she was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn’t be infected through daily communication and that those who suffering from AIDS shouldn’t be looked down. We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. We promised to see her again before left. In my opinion, the world will become more beautiful if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble. ‎ ‎26.   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Tom, ‎ ‎ I’m an Australian boy of 16 years old, which lives in Sydney. I like Chinese very much, but I want a pen pal in China. At school I like playing football and tennis. Our favorite subject is science because it’s very interesting. I won’t like history, for I think it’s rather boring. I play guitar well, so I join in the school rock band. In the afternoon we usually play football or tennis. We usually got home at about 5:30 pm. For weekends I often go out for a swim, which is really relaxed. Do you like sports and games? What do you like to play? I’m looking forward to get your early reply. Yours truly, Jack ‎ II、(本大题共4小题，共40分)‎ ‎27.   ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ ‎      增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ ‎      删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。‎ ‎      修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ ‎      注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ My father is now in his late forty but he looks young for his age. He is very strict with me, especial in my studies. Besides, I know he loves me deeply in his heart. Once I fail to do well in my math exam, I was afraid that it would make my father angry and disappointing. On contrary, he said I had tried my best and offered him a few words of encouragement. He told me that there is no need to feel bad about one and two failures and the most important thing is to learn anything from failure and never give up. Today is Father’s Day and I want to say thank you for my father.‎ ‎28.   ‎ 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 ‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误；‎ ‎29.   ‎ 下文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改。 ‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 ‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 ‎ 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; ‎ 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 ‎ ‎ ‎ A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags. ‎ In front of a supermarket, five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through ‎ the crowd.. The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones.Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were collected by 700 students from a secondaryschool. On that day, after leaving the food markets, customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn’t need. Several ‎ hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours.‎ ‎30.   ‎ 第一节：短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)‎ 该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。‎ 修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎          (2)只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。‎ In recent years, more and more young people have joined in the NEET group. They neither go to college or receive any training for future work and depend on their parents for a living. Most of us are aged from 16 to 30.‎ In my opinion, it is shameful for the young not to make their own responsibility for their own life. Parents get old, how if someday they can not provide anything? Beside, society may break without the involvement of young people. Be independent is the key to success. The young generation should never forget that.‎ 短文改错16-1-3‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎1.  ‎ ‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎     As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some  examples.‎ ‎     One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example ‎                                                         is                                        used is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came ‎                            you                                                                                                              like on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you from                                                                                                                              others                 widely achieve your purpose in ＾very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.‎ ‎                                        a ‎     You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, ＾you'll know more about our language and culture.‎ ‎                                                                                                    and ‎ All the best!  ‎ ‎                                                               Yours,                                                                Li Hua ‎        2.  ‎ ‎ In my village a lot of children have left school for many different ．Some families are  poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents  do not think it  to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than ​ let them go to school．I feel worried  this．I think every  should have the opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary  us to care about the children，because one day they will play  important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from  off their studies．‎ ‎        3.  ‎ ‎1第一句把usually改为usual ‎2第二句把while改为when ‎3第二句把hear改为heard ‎4第四句把shocking改为shocked ‎5第四句故去掉the ‎6第四句把peoples改为people ‎7 第五句把but改为and ‎8第七句把his改为my ‎9第七句在saved的前面加was ‎10 第八句把with改为of ‎        4.  ‎ ‎【小题1】第一句中的shall→should或去掉shall ‎ ‎【小题2】第一句中的specially→special ‎ ‎        5.  did---do         6.  My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted ∧ teach me about ‎ ‎                                                                      to   animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.                                  came       One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My                                        having   uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly      immediately                          at        None ‎ ‎  the arrows was flying down at us from the sky —  they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but          ‎ were                                删除were或looked                and    fortunately no one was injured.      That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about                                                               an gravity!            7.  ‎ 略 ‎        8.  ‎ ‎   It was^ quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a ‎           a                                                                                    reading couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her ‎                hours                            heard                                                                                              their Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady ‎                                                                                               But said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have ‎                                                                      invite been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my ‎                                                                                                                                      happily husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the another side ‎                                                                                                                                                           other of the street. ‎ ‎        9.  ‎ ‎ My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted ∧ teach me about ‎                                                                              to animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.‎ ‎                                          came ‎      One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles ‎                                                 having immediatejumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the immediately                              at            none arrows was  flying down at us from the sky —  they were looked like rain! We ran to escape ‎       were                                      删除were或looked  ‎ butfortunately no one was injured.‎ and ‎     That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about ‎                                                                                 an gravity!‎ ‎        10.  ‎ This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to ‎ a ‎ ‎                                             shoe                                                                                                                              talking    ‎ salesgirl.But the ‎  salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying.They both looked worrying. I went up to help them. The ‎ ‎                                             what                                                                          worried  ‎ lady is∧Australian. ‎ ‎            an      ‎ She wanted to buy a pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she ‎ ‎                                                                                                                                   ‎ ‎                    删除much took it. She sings high ‎      them       sang   ‎ ‎ praise for my spoken English. All of them expressed their thanks to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English.‎ ‎                                            Both                                                                                                                         freely ‎        11.  ‎ ‎ I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I ‎                                                                                        on                                                       giving teach them, play with them, ^watch them growing up. I am ‎ always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to ‎ ‎                                             and                                                                                 am                                              it be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take ‎ ‎                                                  knowledge                                     well good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.‎ ‎                     them                                                                                                                       come ‎        12.  ‎ ‎  I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl as well as her classmates were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The was                                                                  when young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off ‎                                                                     but his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move . The young man didn’t know how to do .‎ ‎                                             badly                                                                                           what I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her^ the hospital at once .‎ ‎                                           ‎ ‎                                                 arrived                      to One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking .‎ ‎                  policemen I think it is danger to drive very fast .‎ ‎                 dangerous ‎        13.  ‎ think-thought ‎ in countryside-in the countryside ‎ or- and ‎ on the development-with the development ‎ have been shown-have shown ‎ seriously-serious ‎ airs-air ‎ Much-Many ‎ found-find ‎ your-our ‎ ‎        14.  ‎ ‎1. 第一句 was 去掉 ‎ ‎2. 第二句 me→myself ‎ ‎3. 第三句 tight→tightly ‎ ‎4. 第五句 becomes→became ‎ ‎5. 第六句 branch→branches ‎ ‎6. 第六句ready 和new之间加for ‎ ‎7. 第七句 astonished→astonishment ‎ ‎8.  第八句 to→for ‎9.   第九句where→when ‎10. 第十句That→It ‎        15.  ‎ ‎1.删除 far；‎ ‎2.move改为moved；‎ ‎3.other改为another；‎ ‎4.classmate改为classmates;‎ ‎5.or 改为 and；‎ ‎6.bad 改为worse;‎ ‎7.of school中间加my；‎ ‎8.tiring改为tired；‎ ‎9.sleep改为asleep；‎ ‎10.is改为are。‎ ‎        16.  ‎ 略 ‎        17.  ‎ ‎81.   I’m glad to hear the news what you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is ‎                                 that the beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said ‎ that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler a                                                                                       Italian once visits Hangzhou, and was struck by its beautifully scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest city ‎     visited                                 beautiful                                        cities ‎  with a long history. It was the capital of several dyn  asties. As a result, it has a lot famous temples ‎                                                                                               of and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around,‎ ‎                                                               and ‎ attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during your ‎                                     ‎ ‎ stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.‎ ‎                                          seeing ‎        18.  ‎ ‎【小题1】stay改成 staying ‎ ‎【小题2】how改成why ‎ ‎        19.  ‎ ‎【小题1】seriously---serious ‎ ‎【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉 ‎ ‎        20.  five-minutes 改为five-minute         21.  ‎ ‎【小题1】general改成generally ‎ ‎【小题2】followed改成following ‎ ‎        22.  ‎ ‎【小题1】general改成generally ‎ ‎【小题2】followed改成following ‎ ‎        23.  ‎ Andrew is a 28－year－old American man，life is very difficult because he  born without arms or legs．Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked like a monster．Doing normal things seemed  to him．However，Andrew never gave up，and after many failures，be finally  to swim，fish and even surf．Most ，he completed university and earned  two degrees．Now he is the CEO of two ．‎ ‎    When ​ about the secret of his succss，Andrew's answer is：Attitude is altitude．To him，nothing is impossible if  has enough determitmtion to overcome ‎ difficulties．He thinks a positive attitude is the key  success．‎ ‎        24.  ‎ Dear Sir，‎ I readadvertisement in yesterday's China Daily．I feel I am qualifiedthe job in your company．I'm 20 old and in good health．Alter graduation from a middle school．I studied English for six years，and I alsobookkeeping，typewriting and public relations．I do  in operating PC and  a good command of English．I'm  in the position of a secretary．I want very much  be accepted by your  company．I'll work hard  I can be a member in your company．‎ Li Hua             ‎ ‎       ‎ ‎        25.  ‎ ‎ 【小题1】a—an 【小题2】flower--flowers 【小题3】see--seeing 【小题4】to--with 【小题5】mustn’t—couldn’t 【小题6】去掉who/加上are 【小题7】加上upon 【小题8】promise--promised 【小题9】left--leaving 【小题10】去掉the ‎ ‎        26.  ‎ ‎ 【小题1】which------who 【小题2】but------and/so 【小题3】Our------My 【小题4】won’t------don’t 【小题5】play 和guitar之间加the 【小题6】把jion in中的in去掉 【小题7】got------get 【小题8】For------At/On ‎ ‎ 【小题9】relaxed------relaxing 【小题10】get------getting ‎ ‎        27.  ‎ ‎1. ... in his late forty ...           forty → forties ‎ ‎2. ... especial in my ...          especial → especially ‎ ‎3. Besides, I know ...              Besides → However ‎ ‎4. Once I fail ...                  fail → failed ‎ ‎5. ... angry and disappointing.    disappointing → disappointed ‎ ‎6. On contrary ...                contrary前加the ‎ ‎7. ... offered him a few...        him → me ‎ ‎8. ... one and two ...            and → or ‎ ‎9. ... learn anything from ...      anything → something ‎ ‎10. ... say thank you for ...        for → to ‎ ‎        28.  ‎ ‎51.difficulty改为difficult ‎52. hardly改为hard ‎53. asking改为asked ‎54.let her to中去掉to ‎55.think改为thinking ‎56.all 改为both ‎57.same前加the ‎58.tests 改为test.‎ ‎59.so改为or ‎60.does改为did ‎        29.  ‎ ‎(1)to think 改为 think ‎(2)walk 改为 walked  ‎ ‎(3)less 改为 more 或去less  ‎ ‎(4)wore 改为 worn ‎ ‎(5)customer 改为 customers ‎ ‎(6)all others 改为 others 或all the others  ‎ ‎(7)after 改为 when/on/upon  ‎ ‎(8)we 改为 they ‎ ‎(9)hundreds 改为 hundred  ‎ ‎(10)for 改为 in/within ​ ‎ ‎        30.  ‎ ‎​‎ ‎       ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎1.  ‎ 文章介绍随着网络的迅速发展，出现了一些新的词汇。‎ ‎1. are ----is。one of the most popular ‎ words后面的谓语是单数。‎ ‎2.use----used。Dianzan和use是被动关系。‎ ‎3. we ---- you。这篇文章主要使用第二人称。‎ ‎4. liked ---like。这篇文章主要使用一般现在时。‎ ‎5. on---- from。使用短语come from来自。‎ ‎6. other ---others。这里泛指“其他人”用others。‎ ‎7.wide ----widely。修饰动词used用副词。‎ ‎8. in后加a。in a very short time在一段很短的时间里。泛指“一段很短的时间”用不定冠词。very是辅音音素开头的单词。‎ ‎9.去掉will。if引导的时间状语从句，用一般现在时代替一般将来时。‎ ‎10. you’ll前加and。使用句型：祈使句+and/or+简单句。而且两句话是顺承关系。用and连接。‎ ‎2.  ‎ 略 ‎3.  ‎ ‎1第一句句意：上周六，我像往常一样去图书馆。像往常一样as usual。故把usually改为usual。‎ ‎2第二句句意：大约中午时分，我正在在湖边读书，就在那时，我突然听到有人哭着喊救命。when就在那时，相当于at then，而while是“在…期间”的意思。故把while改为when。‎ ‎3第二句中，由于是描述过去的事情，应该用一般过去式，故把hear改为heard。‎ ‎4第四句中，表示人感到震惊用-ed形容词，故把shocking改为shocked。‎ ‎5第四句中，抽象的远处用in distance，故去掉the。‎ ‎6第四句中，people是集合名词，后面不用加s，故把peoples改为people。‎ ‎7 第五句中，“took off my coat”与“jumped into the water quickly”不是转折关系，是顺承关系，故把but改为and。‎ ‎8第七句中，根据句意，应该是“让我安慰的是”，故把his改为my。‎ ‎9第七句句意：小孩得救了。kid与save是动宾关系，应该用被动语态，故在saved的前面加was。‎ ‎10 第八句中，“以…为骄傲”应该是be proud of，故把with改为of。‎ ‎4.  ‎ ‎【小题1】第一句中的shall→should或去掉shall ‎ advise后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，即谓语动词要使用“should＋动词原形”的形式，should可以省去，即删去shall也正确。 【小题2】第一句中的specially→special something是不定代词，形容词可以作后置定语修饰不定代词，但是副词不可以修饰不定代词。 【小题3】第二句中的it前加to respond是不及物动词，若要跟宾语，后面需要加to。 【小题4】第三句中的best前加the 最高级前面通常要加定冠词。 【小题5】第三句中的appreciations→appreciation 此处appreciation表示“感激”，属于不可数名词，不可数名词没有复数形式。 【小题6】第四句中的will去掉 some...others...属于表示列举的固定句型，前后的时态应该保持一致，根据上句的“Some choose...”，可知此处应用一般现在时。 【小题7】第六句中的which→what which引导名词性从句时有疑问含义what引导名词性从句时可以没有疑问含义，相当于sth.that...，在本句中相当于the things that...；也可以有疑问含义，此时与which的区别在于是否有范围限制。 【小题8】第六句中的bring→bringing devote sth.to doing sth.属于固定搭配，表示“投入时间/努力/金钱等在……上面”，其中to是介词，后跟动名词形式。 【小题9】第七句中的mean→means 动名词作主语，谓语动词需用单数形式。 ‎ ‎ 【小题10】第七句中的us→ourselves 作宾语的代词为主语本身时，需用其反身代词形式。 ‎ ‎5.  ‎ 去周末学校补习在我们学生们中非常流行。好的周末学校有优秀的教师，他们能够帮助提高我们的学习成绩，此外，我们还可以认识很多来自别的学校的学生，了解他们的校园生活。但是不好的方面是，周末学校的学习会增加我们的课业负担，所以对此人们要慎重考虑。 【小题1】did---do。考查动词时态。So did many of my classmates.整篇文章都使用一般现在时，再根据主谓一致的原则，把did改为do。 【小题2】which—who/ that 。考查关系代词。which help us improve our studies.该定语从句的先行词是teachers，所以应该用表示人的关系代词，把which改为who或者that。 【小题3】another—other。考查不定代词。we get to know students from another schools。根据schools和后句中的their可以判断此处是指其他学校，another只修饰单数名词，故把another改为other。 【小题4】去掉of。考查介词。and learn about their campus of life.。此处是名词campus修饰名词life，故去掉their。 【小题5】so—but。考查连词。So every coin has two sides.根据上下文意思可知此处表示转折，故把so改为but。 【小题6】lesson----lessons。考查名词单复数。Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. ‎ 根据文章内容和动词take，可以判断主语应该是复数名词，故把lesson改为lessons。 【小题7】pay----paying。考查非谓语动词。pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects。动词原形不能做主语，故把pay改为动名词paying。 【小题8】their ----our。考查物主代词。pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.根据上文可知文章用的是第一人称，指的是我们学生们，所以把their改为our。 【小题9】very ----too。考查副词。We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.从句意可知此处表示“太……而不能”，故把very改为too。 【小题10】make 后加the。考查冠词。and make best use of our time. best是最高级，前面应该有定冠词the，故在make后加the。 考点：考查短文改错。 ‎ ‎6.  ‎ ‎    （1）wanted后加to     试题分析：固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事；to是不能省略的，不定式to do sth. 做want的宾语。故 wanted后加to。     考点：短文改错-缺词     （2）come改为came ‎ ‎     试题分析：根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，所以用came。故come改为came。     考点：短文改错-错词     （3）have改为having试题分析：本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中做状语。故have改为having。     考点：短文改错-错词     （4）immediate改为immediately试题分析：本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped，在句中做状语。形容词immediate不能做状语。故immediate改为immediately。      考点：短文改错-错词     （5）on改为at     试题分析：固定搭配shoot..at…，不能使用介词on。at表示瞄准的对方或者方向。故on改为at。     考点：短文改错-错词     （6）Neither改为None     试题分析：代词neither表示两者都不……；而本句中没有提及两者，应该是有很多的鸟。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。故Neither改为None。     考点：短文改错-错词     （7）was改为were试题分析：本句的主语是复数名词arrows，所以谓语动词使用复数形式were。故was改为were。     考点：短文改错-错词     （8）去掉were或者looked ‎ ‎     试题分析：本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like：看起来像；要么使用be like…：像……一样。故去掉were或者looked。     考点：短文改错-多词     （9）but改为and      试题分析：我们四处逃跑，很幸运的是没有人受伤。根据上下文语境可知该句表达的是并列关系。故but改为and。     考点：短文改错-错词     （10）a改为an     试题分析：后面的形容词impressive是以元音音素开始的，所以用an。故a改为an。     考点：短文改错-错词 ‎ ‎7.  ‎ 略 ‎8.  ‎ 第一处：quiet前加a                   因为这里泛指一个晴朗的下午，用不定冠词，quiet是辅音音素开头的单词。‎ 第二处：read 改为reading        这里是非谓语动词作伴随状语，因为I和read是主动关系，用现在分词作伴随状语。‎ 第三处：hour 改为hours           hour是可数名词，和a couple of搭配用名词复数。‎ 第四处： hear 改为heard          ‎ ‎ 这是回忆一个下午的事情，用一般过去时。‎ 第五处：her 改为their                句意：我看见12个女子穿着她们的星期天的服饰。指代the ladies’，用their。‎ 第六处：so 改为but                  上句说：我们希望不迟，下文说：找到你家不容易。两句话是转折关系。‎ 第七处：inviting 改为invite       这里是词组：be kind to do sth。‎ 第八处：去掉for                        ask sb into the room 请某人进入房间。‎ 第九处：happy改为happily      修饰动词talk用副词。‎ 第十处：another 改为other      街道有两边，一边是one，另外一边是特指。用the other。‎ ‎9.  ‎ ‎1. wanted后加to；考查want的用法：want to do sth；‎ ‎2. come改为came；考查时态，全文讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时；‎ ‎3. have改为having；考查非谓语动词，动词have和主语we之间有逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用动词ing形式；‎ ‎4. immediate改为immediately；考查副词的用法。此处修饰谓语动词jump up，故用副词immediately；‎ ‎5. on改为at；考查动词短语；shoot at对准...射击；‎ ‎6. Neither改为None；考查代词用法，此处表达的是一个也没有，是多个，不是两者都不，故把Neither改为none;‎ ‎7. was改为were；此处考查谓语动词单复数，主语the arrows是复数，所以谓语动词用复数形式，was改为were；‎ ‎8. 删除were或者looked；看起来像可以用look like,或者be like都可以；‎ ‎9. but改为and；此处考查并列连词，并列关系用and，转折关系用but，此处是并列关系，故把but改为and；‎ ‎10. a改为an；impressive是以元音开头的句子，故前面要加an. ‎ ‎10.  ‎ ‎1. 鞋店的英文应为the shoe shop，直接用名词shoe修饰名词，不用shoe的复数形式。‎ ‎2. notice sb doing sth表示“注意到某人正在做某事”，此处表示“我注意到一个外国女士正在和一个销售小姐讲话”。‎ ‎3. 此处为宾语从句，从句中缺宾语，用what连接，表示“销售小姐不明白外国人说的什么”。‎ ‎4. -ed形容词修饰人，-ing形容词修饰物，此处修饰人的表情，指“看起来忧虑”，故用-ed形式。‎ ‎5. Australian表示“澳大利亚人”，这里主语是the lady，为第三人称单数，所以是“一个”澳大利亚人，用不定冠词an。‎ ‎6. 此处有very修饰，much为多余，故删去。‎ ‎7. 由句意可知，拿走的是一双鞋，为复数，故应用them指代。‎ ‎8. 全文为过去时态，故用sing的过去式sang。‎ ‎9. 此处指salesgirl和Australian lady两个人，故用both，而不用all。‎ ‎10. 此处用副词freely（随意地；自由地）修饰express。‎ ‎11.  ‎ 短文大意：这篇短文讲述的是作者想成为一名老师，但甚至成为一名教师不是那么容易，所以作为学生现在要努力实现梦想。‎ 第一处：在讲台上用介词on the platform，故把in改为on。‎ 第二处：and连接两个并列的动词，standing和give，做of的宾语，give形式应与standing形式一致。故把give改为giving。‎ 第三处：三个以上连续的动作，最后一个动作用and连接，故此处加上and。‎ 第四处：根据短文时态是一般现在时，可知此处是时态错误，故把was改为am。‎ 第五处：It is+形容词+to do sth.句型中it是形式主语，英语中只有it做形式主语。故把there改为it。‎ 第六处：knowledge是不可数名词，故把knowledges改为knowledge。‎ 第七处：此处修饰动词teach，英语中用副词修饰动词，故把good改为well。‎ 第八处：此处表示照顾上文提到的your pupils，应该用代词them代替，故把it改为them。‎ 第九处：英语中though和but不能连用，故此处把but去掉。‎ 第十处：make sb. do sth.让某人做某事，用不带to的不定式作宾语补足语，故把comes改为come。‎ ‎12.  ‎ ‎ 短文大意：这篇短文讲述的是作者今天下午回家的路上看到一起交通事故，一辆摩托车由于速度太快撞到了正在过马路的女孩。‎ ‎1：此处是固定搭配，“on my way home”在回家的路上，home做副词，在此前不需要加to，所以去掉to。‎ ‎2：此处考察主谓一致。主语后跟有“as well ‎ as”引导的短语，谓语动词应该和主语a girl保持一致，所以把were改为was。‎ ‎3：此句句意是：一个女孩和她的同学正在斑马线上过马路，这时一辆摩托车向她开过来。“be doing...when...”句型中when译为“这时”，是从属连词。所以把after改为when。‎ ‎4：此处考查连词。根据句意可知前后两句是转折关系，所以把and改为but。‎ ‎5：此处考查词性。此处表示严重受伤，badly严重地，做副词，修饰动词was hurt，而bad是形容词，所以把bad改为badly。‎ ‎6：根据句意可知，年轻人不知道该做什么，应该用what to do做宾语，what做do的逻辑宾语，所以把how改为what。‎ ‎7：本短文介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时态，此处arrive应该用过去式arrived。所以把arrive改为arrived。‎ ‎8：表示“送某人去某地”应该用send sb. to sp.，所以此处加上to。‎ ‎9：one of 后面跟可数名词复数，所以把policeman改为policemen。‎ ‎10：It is + 形容词+to do sth.是固定句型，dangerous形容词，在句子作表语，所以把danger改为dangerous。‎ ‎13.  ‎ think-thought; 根据上文讲的是小时候，故选择一般过去时。 ‎ in countryside-in the countryside; 在农村是固定搭配。 ‎ or- and;并列关系选择and。 ‎ on the development-with the development;随着...的发展with the development。 ‎ have been shown-have shown; 研究表明是主动，无需用被动。 ‎ seriously-serious;修饰名词problem用形容词。 ‎ airs-air;空气不可数。 ‎ Much-Many;动物可数应用many来修饰。 ‎ found-find;must情态动词后加动词原形。 ‎ your-our;人称代词前后保持一致，整篇文章都是第一人称。‎ ‎14.  ‎ ‎1.第一句    happen是不及物动词， 不能用被动语态。‎ ‎2. 第二句   根据句意:我拥抱我自己，需要用反身代词。‎ ‎3. 第三句   修饰动词squeeze 需要用副词。‎ ‎4. 第五句    回忆生病时发生的事，用一般过去时。‎ ‎5. 第六句   branch是可数名词，应该用复数。‎ ‎6. 第六句   be ready for sth. 固定词组。‎ ‎7. 第七句   to one's astonishment 固定词组结构，令某人吃惊的是，需用名词。‎ ‎8.  第八句  feel thankful for sth. 因为某事而感谢，感激用for。‎ ‎9.  第九句   the time先行词表时间，后面的关系词需用介词加关系代词或者直接用关系副词，所以只能用when。‎ ‎10 第十句   it 代替动词不定式短语，作形式主语。‎ ‎15.  ‎ ‎1.far 前面已经有具体的350miles,不能重复使用。‎ ‎2.和last week连用，用过去式moved。‎ ‎3.other其余的 ，应该是失去一个工作，幸运地又找到另一个(another)工作。‎ ‎4.爸爸有了新工作意味着我要和我的同学们说再见了。同学应该是复数classmates。‎ ‎5.向同学、学校还有其它的一切，应该用and。‎ ‎6.To make things worse常用插入语，意为"更加糟的是"。‎ ‎7.应该是我的学校。‎ ‎8.我累了，修饰人，应该用过去分词tired。‎ ‎9.和fall连用，系表结构应用asleep。‎ ‎10.和you连用，主谓一致，应该用are。‎ ‎16.  ‎ 略 ‎17.  ‎ what---that， 此处是that引导的同位语从句；‎ the--a， 此处是泛指； ‎ Italy--Italian， 形容词修饰名词； ‎ visits--visited，once曾经，所以用一般过去时；‎ beautifully---beautiful, 形容词修饰名词；‎ city--cities，one of 后加名词复数形式；‎ a lot 后加of，a lot of 许多，大量；‎ or--and,并列关系用and；‎ at去掉，国内外固定搭配 at home and abroad；‎ see--seeing,look forward to中to是介词，后加动词ing形式。‎ ‎18.  ‎ 这是作者写给David的求助信，作者经常考试作弊，感觉内疚，但是自己又改不了，所以向David征求建议。 【小题1】stay改成 staying，句意：最近我感觉很内疚，晚上睡不着觉，这里是现在分词做伴随状语。 【小题2】how改成why ，从后面的it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams，可知是问原因。 【小题3】seldom 改成often，句意：我经常考试作弊。 【小题4】me改成myself，主语是I，宾语应该是myself。 【小题5】answer是可数名词， 改成answers。 【小题6】考查词组；refer to my notebooks参考笔记。 【小题7】so 改成and，有时看笔记抄东西，是并列关系。 【小题8】do改成 does 主语是动名词cheating，谓语是单数。 【小题9】take改成took或前加should，It’s time +从句的句型，从句中用虚拟语气，sb should do或sb did。 【小题10】it后面加if ，句型I would appreciate it if…，如果…我会很感激…。 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎19.  ‎ 如今环境污染日益严重。不仅人们没有干净可饮用的水，而且由于树木遭到砍伐，一些动物也灭绝了。人们的健康受到了空气，噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更美好的生活，作者呼吁到了人们该治理污染，保护环境的时候了。 【小题1】seriously---serious。The environment pollution is more and more seriously today.。系动词is后应该跟形容词做表语，所以把seriously改为serious。 【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉。We have no clean water to drink it。此处是不定式做定语，不定式的动词和被修饰的名词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，故去掉it。 【小题3】trees---后加are。And when trees cut down。此句中tree和谓语cut down之间是被动关系，应该用被动形式，在cut前加are。 【小题4】was -- is。There was more and more dirty smoke in the air.。根据语境可知此处是说现在的情况，应该用一般现在时，把was改为is。 【小题5】affecting---affected。People’s health has been greatly affecting by air,。根据句意可知此处是现在完成时的被动形式 ，把affecting 改为affected。 【小题6】disease----diseases。Many people have died of disease caused by pollution.。disease是可数名词，应该用复数形式，把disease改为diseases。 【小题7】the----a。In order to live the better life,。 固定短语：live a….. life“过着……的生活”，所以把the改为a。 【小题8】what----which。what saves money and reduces ‎ pollution.。此处是非限制性定语从句，what不引导定语从句，改为which。 【小题9】so -- as。Use things so long as possible. 固定短语：as …..as possible“尽可能”，把so改为as。 【小题10】 cut---- cutting。we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down.固定短语：stop sb from doing sth“阻止某人做某事”，所以把cut改为cutting。 考点：考查短文改错。 ‎ ‎20.  ‎ ‎【小题1】五分钟，应该说five-minute。 【小题2】这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，且关系词在从句中作地点状语，故用where。 【小题3】一般现在时中，且主语为第三人称单数，所以lie 改为lies。 【小题4】这里含有一个省略了that的定语从句，根据句意，定语从句中要用一般现在时，所以needed 改为 need。 【小题5】300米应该说300 meters。 【小题6】在右边，应该说on the right。 【小题7】在……的尽头，应该说at the end of。 【小题8】and连接两个并列的句子。 【小题9】用副词修饰动词。 【小题10】want to do sth.是固定用法，意思是想做某事。 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎21.  ‎ 文章介绍高三的学生普遍面对很多压力。提出一些减压的方法。 【小题1】高三的学生普遍面对很多压力。修饰be faced with用副词：general改成generally 【小题2】下面的建议可能会帮助减少它。Following“接下来的” 【小题3】首先要知道是什么导致压力。What做主语谓语用单数：lead改成leads 【小题4】确定不太高的目标。这里是定语从句：what改成which/that 【小题5】考查词组“in other words”换句话说： another改成other 【小题6】偶尔找时间放松。这里用祈使句：finding改成find 【小题7】考查词组：go swimming去游泳 【小题8】和别人交朋友。Make friends with sb.和某人交朋友 【小题9】your classmates, your teachers, your parents 是并列关系，your parents前面加and 【小题10】考查词组“in trouble”有困难，去掉the 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎22.  ‎ 文章介绍高三的学生普遍面对很多压力。提出一些减压的方法。 【小题1】高三的学生普遍面对很多压力。修饰be faced with用副词：general改成generally 【小题2】下面的建议可能会帮助减少它。Following“接下来的” ‎ ‎ 【小题3】首先要知道是什么导致压力。What做主语谓语用单数：lead改成leads 【小题4】确定不太高的目标。这里是定语从句：what改成which/that 【小题5】考查词组“in other words”换句话说： another改成other 【小题6】偶尔找时间放松。这里用祈使句：finding改成find 【小题7】考查词组：go swimming去游泳 【小题8】和别人交朋友。Make friends with sb.和某人交朋友 【小题9】your classmates, your teachers, your parents 是并列关系，your parents前面加and 【小题10】考查词组“in trouble”有困难，去掉the 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎23.  ‎ 略 ‎24.  ‎ 略 ‎25.  ‎ ‎ 试题分析：本文主要讲述了作者去医院看望艾滋病病人的一件事。告诉我们艾滋病病人会受到歧视，以及日常接触不会感染艾滋病。号召我们一起关爱这些不幸的人。 【小题1】a—an ‎ 考查冠词。不定冠词a和an的区别在于：在以元音音素开头的单词前用an，本句中的AIDS是以元音音素开头的，故把a改成an。句意为：上个星期日，我们去看望一个住院的艾滋病病人。 【小题2】flower—flowers 考查名词。flower是可数名词，根据前面的some可知，需要用复数形式。故把flower改成flowers。句意为：我们给她带了一些鲜花和水果。 【小题3】see—seeing 考查非谓语动词。动词avoid之后需要用动词的动名词形式担当宾语，故把see改成seeing。 【小题4】to—with 考查固定短语。本题考查短语：be infected with，意为：感染上…。句意为：在她感染上HIV病毒后，很多人开始避免看到她。 【小题5】mustn’t—couldn’t 考查情态动词。根据句意：一名医生告诉我们HIV病毒不会通过日常交流感染。而mustn’t意为禁止，所以把mustn’t改成couldn’t，意为不会、不能。 【小题6】去掉who/加上are考查定语从句或非谓语动词。本题有两种改法。第一种：去掉who，此时suffering担当后置定语，修饰those，表主动承受。第二种：在who之后加上are，担当定语从句的谓语动词。 【小题7】加上upon 考查短语。本题考查固定短语：look down upon，意为：瞧不起。本题为被动语态，此时一定要注意不可遗忘介词upon，故本题需要加上upon。句意为：那些得了艾滋病的人也不应该被瞧不起。 【小题8】promise—promised 考查时态。根据上文可知，作者讲述的是上个星期日的事情，故用一般过去时，把promise改成promised。句意为：我们在离开前答应她以后还回来看她。 ‎ ‎ 【小题9】left—leaving 考查非谓语动词。介词before之后应该用ving形式，故将left改成leaving。 【小题10】去掉the 考查冠词。考查短语：in trouble，意为：处于不幸中。在这个短语里，不可以用冠词，故去掉the。句意为：如果我们所有人都彼此热爱、帮助那些不幸的人，那么这个世界会变得更加美好。 ‎ ‎26.  ‎ ‎ 试题分析： 【小题1】which------who 考查非限制性定语从句，an Australian boy是先行词，指人，用who，故把which------who。 【小题2】but------and/so 我非常喜欢汉语，所以我想交一个中国笔友。此处表示递进或因果，故把but------and/so。 【小题3】Our------My 我最喜欢的科目是科学，故把Our------My。 【小题4】won’t------don’t 我不喜欢历史。是一般现在时态，故把won’t------don’t。 【小题5】play 和guitar之间加the “弹吉他”英语的表达方法是play the guitar，故在play 和guitar之间加the。 【小题6】把jion in中的in去掉 句意是：所以我加入了学校的乐队jion后跟团队、组织等，表示加入某个组织或团队。故把jion in中的in去掉。 【小题7】got------get 根据句意可知此处是一般现在时态，故把got------get。 ‎ ‎ 【小题8】For------At/On固定搭配“在周末”at/on weekends，因为是开头，要用大写，故把For------At/On。 【小题9】relaxed------relaxing 句意是：去游泳这件事是令人放松的。故把relaxed------relaxing。 【小题10】get------getting固定搭配look forward to后面用doing做宾语，故把get------getting。 考点：考查短文改错 ‎ ‎27.  ‎ ‎1.第一句中，“在某人四十多岁的时候”应该用“in one’s forties”。故 forty → forties； ‎ ‎2.第二句中，尤其是，特别是especially。故especial → especially； ‎ ‎3.“要求严格“与”他内心深爱着我“是转折关系，故Besides → However； ‎ ‎4. 描述曾经发生的一件事用一般过去时，故第四句把fail → failed； ‎ ‎5. 感到失望的disappointed。故第四句把disappointing → disappointed； ‎ ‎6.相反on the contrary。故第五句在 contrary前加the； ‎ ‎7. 第五句中，根据上下文可知应该是给“我“一些鼓励的话。故把him → me； ‎ ‎8. 一两个one or two。故第六句把one后面的and → or； ‎ ‎9. 第六句后面分句的意思应该是：最重要的就是从失败中学到一些东西，永不放弃。故把anything → something； ‎ ‎10. 对某人表示感谢say thank you to sb.。故最后一句把 for → to。 ‎ ‎28.  ‎ ‎51.该句里difficult做the test的宾语补足语，其中结构为find sth +形容词。故把difficulty改为difficult。‎ ‎52. try hard to do sth 努力做某事，hardly几乎不。故把hardly改为hard。‎ ‎53. 该句中ask作谓语，因此需要用ask的过去时asked。故把asking改为asked。‎ ‎54. let sb do sth 为固定结构，故不用to。故let her to中去掉to。‎ ‎55. 该句中after为介词，之后需用动词的ing形式。故把think改为thinking。‎ ‎56.根据语篇，文章中只涉及到作者和他朋友两个人，故用both，而all指代范围为三者或者三者以上。故把all改为both。‎ ‎57. same前通常加定冠词the。故在same前加the。‎ ‎58. 此处只涉及到前文提及的chemical test，不涉及其他的测试，故用单数。故把tests改为test。‎ ‎59. 两句之间的关系不是因果关系，故不能用so，而用or（否则）表警告。故把so改为or。‎ ‎60. 整篇文章讲述的是一件过去的事情，动词要用过去时。故把does改为did。‎ ‎29.  ‎ ‎(1)多词。考查固定结构make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，sb.后跟动词原形作宾语补足语，故to think 改为 think。 原答案只提供了九处错误，本处的错误没有找出。‎ ‎(2)错字。考查时态。and连接两个并列的谓语动词，第一个谓语动词为过去式wore，第二个谓语动词walk也要用过去式，故walk 改为 walked。 ‎ ‎(3)多词/错字。根据语境可知，这次表演号召人们使用布袋代替塑料袋，故less 改为 more 或去less 。‎ ‎(4)错字。考查非谓语动词。此处要表达“被表演者穿在身上的塑料袋”，plastic bags 和wear之间是动宾关系，要用过去分词作后置定语，故wore 改为 worn。‎ ‎(5)错字。考查名词的复数。此处应为复数概念的“顾客们”，故customer 改为 customers。‎ ‎(6)多词/缺词。考查固定搭配some...others...一些......另外一些......；some... all the others...一些......其余的......。故all others 改为 others 或all the others 。‎ ‎(7)错字。根据语境，此处应为“一离开食品超市”或“当离开食品超市时”，而不是“离开食品超市后”，故after 改为 when/on/upon 。‎ ‎(8)错字。考查代词。根据语境，顾客们被要求上交他们不需要的塑料购物袋，要用they指代customers，故we 改为 they。‎ ‎(9)错字。考查单复数。当“百、千、万”等被数词或several 等修饰时，hundred、thousand 等要用单数形式。故hundreds 改为 hundred 。‎ ‎(10)错字。考查介词。根据语境，此处为“在两小时内”，要用介词in或within，故for 改为 in/within。‎ ‎30.  ‎ ‎1.参加某组织，成为其中一员，用join。故第一句中把joined后面的in 去掉。‎ ‎2.neither…nor…或者…或者…。句意：他们要么上大学，要么接受培训。故把or改为nor；‎ ‎3.“他们要么上大学，要么接受培训”与下文“他们依靠父母生存”是转折关系。故第二句把and改为but；‎ ‎4.根据上下文串联，可知第一段最后一句句意为：他们中大多数都是16到30岁。故把us改为them；‎ ‎5.承担责任take responsibility。故第二段第一句把make改为take；‎ ‎6.由代词their可知后面的live应该用复数。故第二段第一句把life改为lives；‎ ‎7.第二段第二句句意：父母在老去，要是有一天他们不能提供任何东西了该怎么办呢？what if…?意为“要是…该怎么办？”故把how改为what；‎ ‎8.besides除此之外。故把Beside变为Besides；‎ ‎9.第二段第三句句意：除此之外，没有了年轻人的参与社会就会衰退。衰退break down衰退，瓦解，毁掉。故在break后面加down；‎ ‎10.动名词作主语。故把Be改为Being。‎