【英语】2020届二轮复习短文改错原创试题学案之八 13页

‎2020届二轮复习 短文改错原创试题学案之八 ‎1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ One day last year when I was busy prepare for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice somehow aroused my fear of her. So the other day after a long talk, surprisingly, I feel warmth and was touched. I sudden realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didn’t even notice his love for me. Like my parents and my other relative, my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The dialect may sound unfamiliar with me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us causing by the difference in our languages.‎ ‎2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Amy,‎ ‎    How are you?Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education.Hundred of students took exams for it,but only a few was chosen and I was one of them.Therefore,my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against me going there.They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid what I will feel lonely.They can't imagine a girl so young live alone.They advise me to study in Chengdu instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I persuade them to accept the fact that I had grown up?‎ ‎3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Last week, a chorus competition was holding in our school. Our teacher told us about it on Monday and encouraged us take part in it. After the heated discussion, we both agreed to sing De fending Yellow River. Four days later, the chorus had started in the school hall. We sang with full passion, wearing uniform costume. We were glad to see that all audience applauded warm at the end of our performance. Thanks for our wonderful and inspired performance, we finally won the first prize. We were not only proud of our victory, and deeply impressed by the meaning of cooperation.‎ ‎4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    The time we have is usual limited. However, even an hour is of much valuable. We should make full use of your time to do useful things. As students, we mustn't study hard so as to serve for our society and our nation in the future. But it is pity that there are a lot of people who didn’t know the importance of time. They spend their valuable time smoke and drinking. They don’t realize that wasting time is the same as wasting a part of their life. Remember, don't put off which you can do today until tomorrow.‎ ‎5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    At the beginning of the year 2018, most part of China, including Kunming and Shaoguan, experience the heaviest snow in winter. This unexpected heavy snow made us unprepared and led many problems. The snow blocked city traffic and caused power cuts,make vehicles in streets run slowly and many traffic accidents happen. Besides, some highways were been closed and a lot of flights was canceled or delayed. Therefore, this surprising snow also brought much joy to people. He went out happily and took a good many pictures of the beautiful moments. Children were throwing snowballs or snowmen were seen everywhere. I will always remember this magically snow.‎ ‎6、文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, hopes to stop using fossil fuel (化石能源) completely by 2040. Now the city wants larger lorries what cause more pollution to use bio-fuel, which ‎ are produced from waste. Stockholm is also working with Fortum, an energy company, to take advantage a city-wide heating system, use waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes. However, the city is trying to change people behavior, step by step. On one newly built estate (庄园), people are providing with tablets that show its real-time energy usage. This is to help them good understand how they use and waste gas, water and electricity.‎ ‎7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。  ‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。  ‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。  ‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    My sister was fond of traveling. After graduating, she has been determined to organize for a trip to an old temple. Since transporting fare was expensive, she decided to cycle there not care about the disadvantages. Her stubborn attitude was always her shortcoming. Finally, we gave in as usually ‎ though we preferred to take a train. Her journey was along a river flowing to a high altitude. It frequently had many sharp bends through deep valley, where the water seemed to boil. It was really hard journey. So we also enjoyed great views. At night, I lie beneath the stars, finding the sky so beautiful!‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ One day last year when I was busy  for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice somehow aroused my fear of her. the other day after a long talk, surprisingly, I warmth and was touched. I realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didn’t even notice love for me. Like my parents and my other , my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The dialect may sound unfamiliar me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us by the difference in our languages.‎ 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：Dear Amy,‎ ‎    How are you?Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have  offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education.  of students took exams for it,but only a few chosen and I was one of them. ,my parents are not happy about it.They are against me going there.They say it is far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid what I will feel lonely.They can't imagine a girl so young alone.They advise me to study in Chengdu instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I persuade them to accept the fact that I grown up?‎ 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Last week, a chorus competition was in our school. Our teacher told us about it on Monday and encouraged us take part in it. After heated discussion, we agreed to sing De fending Yellow ‎ River. Four days later, the chorus had started in the school hall. We sang with full passion, wearing uniform . We were glad to see that all audience applauded at the end of our performance. Thanks our wonderful and performance, we finally won the first prize. We were not only proud of our victory, deeply impressed by the meaning of cooperation.‎ 解析： ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：    The time we have is  limited. , even an hour is of much . We should make full use of  time to do useful things. As students, we  study hard so as to serve for our society and our nation in the future. But it is pity that there are a lot of people who  know the importance of time. They spend their valuable time  and drinking. They don’t realize that wasting time is the same as wasting a part of their life. Remember, don't put off  you can do today until tomorrow.‎ 解析：‎ ‎1. 句意:我们拥有的时间通常是有限的。修饰形容词limited用副词,故把usual改为usually。‎ ‎2. 上下文之间是因果关系,故把However改为Therefore。‎ ‎3. be of value 有价值,故把valuable改为value。‎ ‎4. 与前文的We保持人称一致,故把your改为our。‎ ‎5. 我们必须要努力学习是常识,故把mustn’t改为must。‎ ‎6. serve是及物动词,不需要介词,故#除for。‎ ‎7. It is a pity that..."……是很可惜的。”,pity是可数名词,故在前面加a。‎ ‎8. 本文使用现在时态,先行词是people,故把didn’t改为don’t。‎ ‎9. spend time doing sth.花时间做某事,故把smoke改为smoking。‎ ‎10. 句意:记住,不要把今天能做的拖延到明天。此处表示 “……的东西或事情”,而且在宾语从句中作宾语,故把which改为what。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：    At the beginning of the year 2018, most of China, including Kunming and Shaoguan, the heaviest snow in winter. This unexpected heavy snow made us unprepared and led many problems. The snow blocked city traffic and caused power cuts, vehicles in streets run slowly and many traffic accidents happen. Besides, some highways were been closed and a lot of flights canceled or delayed. , this surprising snow also brought much joy to people. went out happily and took a good many pictures of the beautiful ‎ moments. Children were throwing snowballs snowmen were seen everywhere. I will always remember this snow.‎ 解析：‎ ‎1.根据most可知后面名词用复数形式,故把part改为parts。‎ ‎2.根据At the beginning of the year 2018可知句子用一般过去时态,故把experience改为experienced。‎ ‎3. 句意:这场突如其来的大雪使我们毫无准备,并引起许多问题。固定词组:lead to导致,引起,故在led后加to。‎ ‎4. 句意:大雪阻断了城市交通,导致停电,街道上车辆行驶缓慢,许多交通事故发生。此处是现在分词做自然的结果状语,故把make改为making。‎ ‎5. 句意:一些高速公路关闭。根据句意可知句子用一般过去时态的被动语态,故把some highways were been closed中的been去掉。‎ ‎6. 句意:许多航班被取消或拖延。a lot of flights是句子主语, 复数形式,故把was改为were。‎ ‎7. 句意:这一令人惊讶的雪也给人们带来了很多欢乐。与上文相比可知此处是转折关系,故把Therefore改为However。‎ ‎8. 根据上句的people可知,故把He改为They。‎ ‎9. 句意:孩子们在扔雪球,到处都能看到雪人。此处表示并列, 故把or改为and。‎ ‎10. 形容词修饰名词,故把magically改为magical。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：    Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, hopes to stop using fossil fuel (化石能源) completely by 2040. Now the city wants larger lorries cause more pollution to use bio-fuel, which produced from waste. Stockholm is also working with Fortum, an energy company, to take advantage  a city-wide heating system, waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes. , the city is trying to change behavior, step by step. On one newly built estate (庄园), people are with tablets that show real-time energy usage. This is to help them understand how they use and waste gas, water and electricity.‎ 解析：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ ‎    My sister was fond of traveling. After graduating, she  been determined to organize for a trip to an old temple. Since transporting fare was expensive, she decided to cycle there not  about the disadvantages. Her stubborn ‎ attitude was always her shortcoming. Finally, we gave in as  though we preferred to take a train.  journey was along a river flowing  a high altitude. It frequently had many sharp bends through deep , where the water seemed to boil. It was really  hard journey.  we also enjoyed great views. At night, I  beneath the stars, finding the sky so beautiful!‎ 解析：‎ ‎ ‎