【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达新创层级4第4讲　读后续写学案 11页

第4讲　读后续写 ‎[谋篇布局]‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[亮点词汇]‎ ‎◎表人物喜乐的词汇 ‎1．满意的表情：a satisfied look ‎2．令人鼓舞的表情：an encouraging expression ‎3．既兴奋又开心：a mixture of excitement and happiness ‎4．流下幸福的泪水：tears of happiness flowing down ‎5．心情愉快：in cheerful spirits ‎6．心满意足，非常幸福：be on the top of the world ‎7．被强烈地吸引：be powerfully attracted to ‎8．因……而高兴：be joyful over/about ‎9．喜爱，对……着迷：be keen on ‎10．快乐至极：be overjoyed with ‎11．欣喜若狂：be wild with delight ‎12．精神高涨：be in high spirits ‎13．为成功而欣喜：be excited with joy at the success ‎14．被她的美貌所吸引：be fascinated by her beauty ‎15．显示出极大的意愿：show a great readiness ‎16．乐得大叫：yell with delight ‎17．使某人心情愉快：brighten one's heart ‎18．使某人安心：set one's heart at rest ‎19．感到鼓舞的：feel inspired/encouraged ‎20．振作精神：keep up one's spirits ‎◎表人物悲忧消沉的词汇 ‎1．强烈的失落感：a strong sense of loss ‎2．怀着沉重的/沮丧的/忧郁的心情：with a heavy/sinking/ sorrowful heart ‎3．惊慌失措：be seized with panic ‎4．情绪低落：be down in spirits ‎5．陷入绝望：fall into despair ‎6．悲痛欲绝：cry one's heart out ‎7．垂头丧气：lose one's spirit ‎8．使某人悲痛：make one's heart bleed ‎9．减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼：ease sb. of his/her pain/trouble ‎10．因某人的死亡而痛心：break one's heart over one death ‎◎表人物怨怒的词汇 ‎1．感到恼怒：feel annoyed ‎2．感到愤怒：feel irritated ‎3．感到泄气：feel discouraged ‎4．感到尴尬：feel embarrassed ‎5．感到困惑：feel puzzled/confused ‎6．感到沮丧：feel frustrated/depressed ‎7．感到恶心：feel disgusted/sickened ‎8．易为琐事而恼火：be easily annoyed at trifles ‎9．对某人的行为感到不满：be displeased at one's conduct ‎10．引起某人的不快：arouse one's displeasure ‎11．不断地抱怨：complain constantly ‎12．气得满脸通红：flame with anger ‎13．勃然大怒：fly into a rage ‎14．对某人勃然大怒：get mad/cross at sb.‎ ‎15．愁眉苦脸：have a worried look ‎16．对抱怨不予理会：ignore/disregard a complaint ‎17．对……表示不满：express/voice a complaint about ‎18．怒气冲冲地跑出房间：run out of the room in a burst of anger ‎◎表人物其他情绪的词汇 ‎1．宽容的精神：a forgiving spirit ‎2．以和蔼可亲的态度：with a kind and goodhumored spirit ‎3．在这些情绪的控制下：under the domination of these emotions ‎4．对……一点也不感兴趣：be not in the least interested in ...‎ ‎5．对……彻底上瘾：be hopelessly addicted to ...‎ ‎6．混合着焦虑与希望的情绪：be mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope ‎7．感到……极为有趣：find ... highly stimulating ‎8．引起强烈的情感：set off strong feelings ‎◎表人物体形的词汇 ‎1．中等身材：an average build ‎2．优美的/匀称的身段：a graceful/shapely figure ‎3．瘦削的/细长的身材：a skinny/slim figure ‎4．发育良好的身体：a welldeveloped figure ‎5．身材魁梧的人：a wellbuilt man ‎6．仪表堂堂：be imposing/dashing/handsome/striking ‎7．(人)体形很好：have a good figure ‎8．改善体形：improve one's figure ‎9．看到月光下有一个模糊的人影：see a dark figure in the moonlight ‎10．显露出她优美的身段：show off her lovely figure ‎◎表人物个性品格的词汇 ‎1．保守的性格：conservative personalities ‎2．缺乏责任感：lack of sense of responsibility ‎3．高素质、有经验的老师：a highlyqualified, wellexperienced teacher ‎4．完美的人：a faultless/perfect person：‎ ‎5．天资高的/聪明的人：a talented/an intellectual person ‎6．有抱负的人：an ambitious person ‎7．脾气好的人：a goodnatured person ‎8．容易相处的人：a person easy to deal with ‎9．有前途的青年：a promising young man ‎10．浪漫的人：romantic figure ‎11．说话直率的人：an outspoken man ‎12．消息灵通/见多识广的人：a wellinformed man ‎13．时髦的妇女：a fashionable lady ‎14．20岁出头的姑娘：a girl in her early twenties ‎15．品格纯洁无瑕的女子：a girl of stainless character ‎16．娴静有礼的淑女：a quiet, gracious lady ‎17．冷酷无情的/心肠冷酷的人：a coldblooded/ hardhearted man ‎18．具有……的美德：with the virtue of ‎19．务实的：be downtoearth ‎20．关于……很无知：be ignorant about ‎21．性格果断：be of a determined character ‎22．乐观和有抱负的：be optimistic and ambitious ‎23．脱颖而出：stand out from the crowd ‎24．有突出的个性：have striking personalities ‎25．有诚实的好名声：have an excellent character for honesty ‎26．具有独立的性格：possess an independent character ‎◎表人物动作或心里活动的词汇 ‎1．赞赏的目光：an admiring gaze ‎2．嫉妒的目光：an envious glance ‎3．一项有意义的活动：a meaningful/rewarding activity ‎4．互相谅解，相互理解：mutual understanding ‎5．相信…… ：in the belief that ...‎ ‎6．期待…… ：in the expectation that ...‎ ‎7．面对斗争与改变：in the face of struggle and change ‎8．不顾对……的忧虑：regardless of concerns over ...‎ ‎9．完全一团糟：be completely in a mess ‎10．对某事不存幻想：be under no illusion about sth.‎ ‎11．被认为是权威：be considered an authority ‎12．不愿改变：be reluctant to make changes ‎13．无力改变结果：be powerless to change the outcome ‎14．步态优美地走：walk gracefully ‎15．首次露面：make one's first appearance ‎16．没有履行职责：fail to carry out one's duties ‎17．给某人造成负担：impose a heavy burden on sb.‎ ‎18．服从志愿者组织的指挥：follow orders from the voluntary ‎19．损害高中生形象：damage the image of high school students ‎20．经受起起落落：go through ups and downs ‎21．朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼：cast a hasty glance at sb.‎ ‎22．向某人投以爱慕的目光：cast an admiring glance at sb.‎ ‎23．凝视着某人：look at sb. with a fixed gaze ‎24．爆发出阵阵喝彩声：break into shouts of applause ‎25．收回前言，承认说错：eat one's words ‎26．严厉训斥某人：give sb. a sharp scolding ‎27．就某事发表意见：make a remark on/upon sth.‎ ‎28．说得明白而深刻：say sth. clearly and impressively ‎29．来回踱步：pace back and forth ‎30．以栽培花木为消遣：look upon gardening as a recreation ‎31．在倾盆大雨中走：walk through the pouring rain ‎32．在乡间漫步：wander over the countryside ‎◎表人物日常活动的词汇 ‎1．一件常常发生的事：a frequent occurrence ‎2．一件对身心有益的事情：an occurrence enchanting mental and physical health ‎3．一个艰辛的任务：a painstaking/a laborious task ‎4．值得珍藏的经历：a truly memorable experience ‎5．突然繁荣的房地产市场：a sudden boom in the housing market ‎6．费时的：be timeconsuming ‎7．通知某人某事：inform sb. of sth.‎ ‎8．某人记忆犹新：remain fresh in one's memory ‎9．需要紧急处理：require urgent attention ‎10．回忆高中生活的美好时刻：recall the sweet moment of one's high school ‎11．在会上发表演讲：address a meeting ‎12．叫某人接电话：get sb. on the phone ‎13．接通电话：get through ‎14．拿起听筒：pick up the phone ‎15．跟某人通电话：speak to sb. over the phone ‎16．占线：the line is busy/the number is engaged ‎◎表天气的词汇 ‎1．多雨的季节：a rainy season ‎2．暴风雨之夜：a stormy night ‎3．狂风暴雨：a fierce/heavy/violent storm ‎4．及时雨，好雨：a timely/seasonable rain ‎5．连绵不断的雨：continuous/constant rains ‎6．在茫茫大雨中：in the blinding rain ‎7．在春天温暖的阳光里：in the warm spring sunshine ‎8．在盛夏灼热的阳光下：under the blazing/burning sun of midsummer ‎9．深埋在雪中：be buried in snow ‎10．难以忍受的热：be unbearably hot ‎11．放晴了：clear up ‎12．沐日光浴：bathe in the sunshine ‎◎表地理位置的词汇 ‎1．位置优越的城市：a favorably situated city ‎2．水下面的暗礁：a hidden rock beneath the surface of the water ‎3．一个偏僻的小村子：a small village off the map ‎4．人烟稀少的农村地区：a lightly populated rural area ‎5．在群山环抱的村庄里：in a village among the hills ‎6．离海滨仅咫尺之遥：within a stone's throw of the beach ‎7．位于……最北端：be situated at the northern extreme of …‎ ‎8．位于太平洋沿岸某处：be located somewhere on the Pacific coast ‎[佳作背诵]‎ ‎(2018·浙江6月卷)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.‎ We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.‎ His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.‎ In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._______________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Seeing this, I was surprised. Meanwhile, my horse got frightened, jumped up, and ran around wildly. I held the rope tightly in case I might fall off. My dad was chasing after me, keeping me in sight. Some time later, my horse stopped, panting, and I woke up from panic. Looking around, I saw my father right behind me.‎ Paragraph 2：‎ We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We couldn't get back along the original track. We immediately thought of the police. My father telephoned the police station, but it couldn't get through. It was so far away that there was no signal. Just then, Uncle Paul came riding with a group of people. He laughed with joy when he saw us safe. He said he had installed a satellite positioning system under my horse's belly. Through it, he knew that we had got lost and where we were.‎ ‎[语篇演练]‎ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。‎ I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains. So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign “Going Out of Business Sale”， I marched into the crowded store. Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale.‎ All of a sudden, there, at the back of the store sat a canoe(轻舟) exactly like my husband's dream Supremo NumeroUno，whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years. My heart beat wildly. I pushed my way through the crowds, and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag. There it was, with the manufacturer's suggested price at $6，750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR $750 AS IS. Must be a mistake. $6，000 off? Salesman. I had to talk to a salesman. I spotted a young fellow with a “Hi. I'm Mathew”. “Mathew. Tell me about this El Supremo canoe. What's wrong with it? Why is it only $750？”‎ ‎“Oh. There's nothing wrong with it. It's brand new. We're closing the store. It's on clearance like everything else. I'll go check.” A few minutes later he came back and said, “I'm sorry ma'am. Someone made a mistake on the sale tag. It should be $4，750 for the whole package.”‎ I felt tears well up in my eyes. “Oh well”， I said sadly. “Of course, it ‎ was too good to be true. This is exactly like my husband's dreamboat. I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag. He's going to be 62 years old Friday. Had to retire early for his health. It's been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving $10 every week for years to buy one just like this. I promise I won't buy anything, but it's just an old man's silly dream, you know. Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired，” my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.‎ Paragraph 1：‎ I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma'am？”_____________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ ‎“Ma'am. There's something you should know. This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him._________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Paragraph 1：‎ I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me. “Do you ‎ have $750 plus $25 for delivery, ma'am？” “Yes. Yes. That's about all I have，” “Well then, you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe. We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday.” I started to cry. My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque. ‎ Paragraph 2：‎ ‎“Ma'am. There's something you should know. This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him. He always promised to retire one day. Said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe.” He swallowed hard. “My Grandpa died, suddenlike, just last week. He was only 68 years old. I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe. You just have to make sure he uses it a lot, okay? Promise？” “I promise，” I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband.‎