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话题写作
(六)
安全问题
第一篇 教材考点梳理
【
参考谚语
】
1.
Caution is the parent of safety.
小心驶得万年船。
2.
Safety is a commodity.
安全就是商品。
3.
Safety first!
安全第一
!
常用表达
【
话题点睛
】
该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等
,
此类话题常以要点提示的方式来考查。
【
相关短语
】
call the police
报警
; ask teachers for help
向老师寻求帮助
; go upstairs/downstairs
上
/
下楼
; without permission
未经许可
; keep away from
远离……
; how to protect ourselves
如何保护我们自己
; follow the school rules
遵守学校规则
; obey the traffic rules
遵守交通规则
; be strict with
对……要求严格
【
亮点句型
】
安全与自我保护
1.
When we are
in danger
, we should call the police or ask teachers for help in time
so that
we can keep ourselves safe.
2.
Self-protection is
one of the most
important skills, especially for teenagers.
3. It's dangerous
to swim in the river alone, so don't go to the river
without permission.
4. All in all
, we need to learn
how to protect ourselves
and
stay away from
danger.
安全规则及建议
1. We shouldn't
crowd or push each other
when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.
2.
To be safer, we should
keep away from
the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time.
3.
When we're facing an accident, the first and most important rule is to
stay calm
.
4.
Friends can make our life colorful, but we must
be careful
to make friends, especially online.
Ⅰ.
根据汉语意思完成句子。
1.
我们应该尽我们最大的努力来确保我们是安全的。
We should try our best to
we are safe.
2.
我们需要和同学们友好相处。
We need to
our classmates.
基础写作
make sure
get on/along well with
3.
对我们来说
,
多吃健康的食物和遵守交通规则是重要的。
It's important for us to eat more healthy food and
.
4.
我们必须对自己严格要求。
We must
ourselves.
5.
司机立刻打了
120
电话
,
救护车马上就到了。
The driver
120 at once and an ambulance came
.
obey/follow the traffic rules
be strict with
called
in no time
Ⅱ.
用括号内所给的
单词或
短语
,
将下列句子译成英语。
1.
自我保护对青少年来说是最重要的技能之一。
(self-protection)
2.
如今学生的安全变成了我们所有人的焦点。
(focus)
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.
Today students' safety is becoming the focus to us all.
3.
无论你是谁
,
做什么
,
安全是最重要的。
(no matter)
4.
当我们交朋友时
,
尤其是在网上
,
我们应该小心一点。
(be careful)
5.
我们在学校应该遵守校规。
(follow rules)
We should be careful when we make friends, especially online.
No matter who you are and what you do, safety is the most
important.
We should follow the school rules at school.
近几年来
,
校园欺凌
(school bullies)
事件时有发生
,
学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力
,
我们应该珍惜生命
,
注意自己的人身安全
,
做好自我保护。请以“
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
”为题
,
写一篇英语短文
,
谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护
(self-protection)
。
[
提示
]
(1)
不单独游泳
;
(2)
谨慎交友
;
(3)
遇到危险报警或向老师求助
;
(4)
饮食及交通安全等。
典例分析
[
要求
]
(1)
词数
:80-100;
(2)
字迹工整
,
语法正确
,
意思连贯
,
合乎逻辑
,
可适当发挥。
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
【
思路点拨
】
1.
要点提炼
:
主题是“生活中我们怎样自我保护”
,
可从以下几个方面展开
:
不单独游泳、谨慎交友、遇到危险报警或向老师求助、饮食及交通安全等。
2.
本文是提建议类文章
,
注意
should, can
等情态动词的应用。
3.
确定时态
:
一般现在时
4
.
确定人称
:
第一人称为主
【
写作架构
】
【
佳作赏析
】
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
Self-protection is
one of
the most important skills for teenagers. We should try our best to
make sure
we are safe. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions.
First
, summer is coming. We must remember it's dangerous to swim alone in the river.
Second,
we should
be careful
when we
make friends
, especially online. Third, when we are in danger, we should call the police or ask teachers for help in time
so that
we can keep ourselves safe.
Fourth
, we should obey traffic rules.
Besides
, we need to eat healthily and safely.
Last,
we shouldn't crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.
All in all,
we need to learn how to protect ourselves and
stay away from
danger.
【
名师点评
】
1.
文章根据要点提示
,
逐一地阐述了如何保护自己
,
远离危险
,
并做到了适当展开
,
详略得当。
2.
本文结构合理
,
思路清晰。开头
:
引出话题。正文
:
提出自我保护的方法。结尾
:
总结提醒。全文句式多样化
,
简单句和复合句相结合使用
,
使文章错落有致
,
给人良好的阅读体验。
A
[2019
·南充改编
]
近年来
,
学生意外伤害事故频发
,
给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生
,
我们该如何有效地自我保护
,
免受伤害呢
?
我市正在举行以“
How to Keep Safe
”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛
,
请你根据下表提示
,
写一篇短文参赛吧。
实战演练
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights, electric bikes(
电动车
)
…
Swimming
rivers, swimming pool
…
Internet
ID number, code(
密码
), unhealthy websites
…
…
…
[
要求
]
(1)
短文必须包含三个所列要点和一个补充要点
;
(2)
文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名
;
(3)
词数
:80
左右
(
开头和结尾已给出
,
不计入总词数
)
。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
One
possible
version
:
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, knowing how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool.
Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with our friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even the police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
B
[2019
·北京
]
假如你是李华
,
你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动
,
倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报
,
你们班交换生
Peter
给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件
,
告诉他海报上交的时间
,
并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
[
提示词语
] design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture
[
提示
]
(1)When should you hand in the poster?
(2)What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
One
possible
version
:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. Safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school is having Safety Month activities. Our teacher asks us to design posters about safety. I have finished it already and I will hand it in tomorrow. I would like to share my poster with you. On my poster,I made some safety rules, such as never go swimming in the river or the lake alone,be careful on our way to school or home,never eat junk food,go away from dangerous places to protect ourselves and so on. I drew some pictures on the poster as well.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
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