呼和浩特专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作03假日旅行课件 23页

话题写作（三） 假日、旅行 [ 话题来源 : 七上 M6, 七下 M6 、 M10, 八上 M4, 八下 M3 、 M8, 九上 M1 、 M2] 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 针对的话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游日记、旅游路线等。 【 典型例题 】 [2019 · 黄石 ] 　　假如你是国际学校的学生李华 , 你的同学 Tom 写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排 , 请给 Tom 回一封邮件 , 告知你的计划 , 并邀请他来黄石游玩。 [ 内容包括 ] 1. 读几本好书 ; 2. 参加社会实践活动 ; 3. 帮父母做家务 ; 4. 和朋友一起锻炼 ; 5. 邀请 Tom 。 典例分析 [ 注意 ] 1. 词数 :80 左右 ; 2. 可适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯 ; 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息 ; 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好 , 不计入总词数。 [ 参考词汇 ] 有意义的 meaningful; 经典文学作品 classic literature works; 社会实践活动 social practice activities Dear Tom, 　　 I’m very happy to hear from you.   　　 　　　   _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 本文对 Tom 询问暑假安排的邮件进行回复 , 并邀请 Tom 来黄石游玩。可以提炼出两个要点 : (1) “我”的暑假安排 : 读书、社会实践、做家务、锻炼 ; (2) 邀请 Tom 来游玩。 2. 时态 : 一般将来时。 3. 人称 : 第一人称和第二人称。 【 写作架构 】 【 基础写作 】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 我会在暑假期间做四件有意义的事情。 (meaningful things) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________.  (make + n. + adj. ) 2. 基础句 首先 , 我计划读一些经典文学作品类的书。 (plan to do sth.) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ .  (without doubt, 定语从句 ) I will do four meaningful things during my summer vacation Four things will make my summer vacation meaningful First, I plan to read several classic literature works Without doubt, the first thing that I plan to do is to read several books, especially some classic literature works 3. 基础句 它会让我学到很多。 (make sb. do sth.) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ .  (broaden one’s horizons) 4. 基础句 如果你能来黄石的话我会很高兴。 (if 条件句 ) __________________________________________________________________________. → 升格句 _________________________________________________________________ .  (drop in at sp.) It will make me learn a lot It will broaden my horizons I will be glad if you can come to Huangshi I will be glad if you could drop in at Huangshi 【 连句成文 】 Dear Tom, 　　 I’m very happy to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me for my plans for the summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, four things will make my summer vacation meaningful. 　　 Without doubt, the first thing that I plan to do is to read several books, especially some classic literature works. As we all know, classic literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation. Young people will certainly benefit a lot from reading classics. Second, I will spend a month taking part in social practice activities. I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. Meanwhile, I will help my mom do housework every day and I will do exercise with my friends in the morning. 　　 I will be glad if you could drop in at Huangshi. I will show you around some places of interest. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【 导入主题句 】 1. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while traveling. 2. It’s so famous and beautiful that it attracts thousands of tourists to go sightseeing there. 3. It may be one of the reasons why so many people are attracted by the city. 拓展积累 4. It must be a good chance to enjoy the beautiful scenery of nature and meanwhile get relaxed. 5. We have organized a bus trip to the countryside where we can breathe fresh air and enjoy a peaceful life. 【 文章的发展句 】 1. I personally advise you to learn about Chinese culture before you come here. 2. They may think that students graduating from junior middle school are too young to look after themselves in a foreign country. 3. As for me, wanting to spend enough time visiting the places I like, I prefer to travel alone. 4. The subway is one of the most convenient ways to travel in our city. 5. I want to mention in particular that I’ll keep away from any dangerous place like deep rivers or remote mountains. 【 文章的结尾句 】 1. Only in this way can you enjoy your summer holiday happily. 2. Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also open up our eyes to the outside world. 3. I hope I’ll have a very wonderful summer holiday and become an excellent myself! 4. The memorable experience will play an important role in helping me grow as a person. 5. There, you can lie under the stars, enjoying the quiet night. A 　 [2019 · 泰州 ] 　　为丰富初三学生课余生活 , 上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示 , 用英语写一篇短文 , 介绍此次活动 , 并谈谈自己的感想。 [ 活动内容 ]1. 上午游览人民公园 : 欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念 ; 2. 下午参观市民广场 : 观看图片展 , 了解祖国和家乡 70 年巨变。 [ 你的感想 ] 1. 师生情深 , 感谢老师和同学的帮助 ; 2. 倍受鼓舞 , 决心勤奋学习报效祖国 ; 3. …… ( 考生自己发挥 ) 。 实战演练 [ 要求 ] 1. 词数 :100 左右。开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 2. 所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息 , 并可作适当的发挥 ; 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 [ 参考词汇 ] 市民广场 Civic Square 　　 In order to enrich Junior 3 students’ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : In order to enrich Junior 3 students’ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. We were all happy to have a chance to know more about our city. Everyone had a meaningful day. In the morning, we visited People’s Park in our city. We enjoyed the beautiful view there. Moreover, we had a song and dance party. Most of us took a lot of photos to remember the exciting moments. In the afternoon, we watched the picture show. Many great changes have taken place in our country and city. It’s amazing for us to know about these changes. I will finish my middle school soon. Thank teachers and classmates for giving me so much help.I decide to study hard to work for our country. Our city is so beautiful that it is well worth visiting. Welcome to our city and enjoy yourselves here. B 　 [2019 · 北部湾 ] 　　暑假将至 , 你校 English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动 , 题目为“ My Plan for Summer Holiday ”。请你根据以下提示 , 用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 [ 写作要点 ] 1. 学习计划 ; 2. 运动计划 ; 3. 娱乐计划 ; 4. 你的愿望。 [ 写作要求 ] 1. 内容必须包括所给要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使行文连贯 ; 2. 语篇完整 , 语句通顺 , 语法正确 , 书写规范 ; 3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名 ; 4. 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数。 My Plan for Summer Holiday 　　 Summer holiday is coming. __________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ One possible version : My Plan for Summer Holiday 　　 Summer holiday is coming. I’m happy to make a plan for it. 　　 First, I’ll prepare myself well for the challenging learning in senior high school. I think reviewing what I’ve learned and reading more can help me with that. Second, I will spend some time playing sports to keep healthy and strong. I believe I will be stronger than before after the holiday. Third, I hope to read more books, watch some interesting movies and travel abroad with my family to relax. What’s more, I’m going to volunteer in the old people’s home. 　　 I hope I will do something meaningful in the coming holiday. And I’m sure I can make my plan come true.