杭州专版2020中考英语复习第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作07情感表达课件人教新目标版 20页

话题写作（七） 情感表达 第一篇　教材考点梳理 典例分析 【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中做某件事情的经历及感受。常见的与 情感类相关的主题有爱、快乐、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。 　假如你是张凯,以下是你的加拿大笔友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根 据该邮件内容给Tony回复并提出你自己的观点。 From Tony To Zhang Kai Subject How to get on with parents Content Hi, Zhang Kai, How is it going? I am unhappy recently. My problem is my parents. They never stop talking about how I should keep my room clean, study harder or wear proper clothes. They even make me eat an egg and drink milk every morning. None of my friends has such terrible parents. From Tony To Zhang Kai Subject How to get on with parents Content What should I do? How should I get on with my parents? Look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Tony [要求] 1.请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥; 2.文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息; 3.词数:80左右。 【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:通过Tony向朋友抱怨父母对他的不理解以及要求他做一些他不愿 意做的事情提出主题“How to get on with parents”。要注意围绕主题进行 表达。本文可从以下方面展开: (1)提出观点:肯定其父母的做法,并觉得他很幸运。 (2)具体论述:父母要求他所做的一切的目的和原因。 (3)提出建议:要理解父母,并注意怎样和父母相处。 2.本文涉及提建议,注意should,can,try to do等的使用。 3.确定时态:一般现在时。 4.确定人称:第二人称。 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 根据所给提示词补全下列各句。 1.基础句你有如此好的父母。(such) . →升格句我想对你来说有如此好的父母是幸运的。(It's lucky for sb. to…) . You have such good parents. I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents. 【基础写作】 根据所给提示词补全下列各句。 2.基础句你发现你的父母在关心你吗?(care about) . →升格句你难道没有发现你的父母在很多方面关心你吗?(Don't you…? in many ways) . Do you find your parents are caring about you? Don't you find your parents are caring about you in many ways? 3.基础句他们希望你能有好的习惯。(have good habits) . →升格句他们希望你能养成好的习惯。(get into good habits) . 4.基础句吃得好很重要。(It's+adj.+to…) . →升格句对于一个需要大量精力的青少年来说,吃得好很重要。(用who引 导的定语从句表达) . . They hope you can have good habits. They hope you can get into good habits. It's important to eat well. For a teenager who needs a lot of energy, it's important to eat well. 5.基础句每个家庭成员都应该有责任心。(be responsible) . →升格句而且,每个家庭成员都应该有责任心。(what's more) .What's more, every family member should be responsible. Every family member should be responsible. 【连句成文】 Hi, Tony, 　　I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents. You should understand and respect them, and try to do what they ask you to. They have richer life experience and want you to be better. As your parents, they surely hope you become an excellent person. Their advice is helpful to your future. 　　Don't you find your parents are caring about you in many ways? They want you to keep your room clean because they hope you can get into good habits and live comfortably. They ask you to work harder so that you can get a good job in the future. They make you eat an egg and drink milk every morning in order that you can keep healthy. A good body is good for study. For a teenager who needs a lot of energy, it's important to eat well. What's more, every family member should be responsible and do something for the family. So you should do what you can do, such as keeping your room clean and wearing proper clothes. Anyway, if you have any problem, just talk with your parents and share your ideas with them. I hope you can get on well with your parents. 　　Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Kai 拓展积累 【相关短语】 thanks for 因……感谢; make new friends 结交新朋友; look after/take care of 照顾; keep in touch 保持联系; friendly to 对……友好; bring back 带回 【参考谚语】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger.笑一笑,十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors.悲喜常相伴。 3.Laughter is the best medicine.笑是最好的药。 4.Worry kills more men than work. 忧虑比劳累更伤人。 【亮点句型】 学校感受 1.I'd like to thank you for giving me unselfish love and help. 2.You always encouraged me to study harder. 3.Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you said in the end. 4.I'm so thankful to you for your kind help that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future. 家庭感受 1.I'd like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. 2.I'm sure my parents will get on well with each other soon. 3.We should have good habits and try our best to take exercise every day. 4.I'll spend more time staying and communicating with you. 5.When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. 6.I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. 实战演练 　[2019·嘉兴]假如你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者 (volunteer)的广告。请根据该广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目,选择其中一 个,结合自己的实际情况,给项目负责人写一封电子邮件,表达你希望参加这个 项目的愿望,并阐述理由。 Project 1 Place: A small village in the west of China Activities:·teach children English ·visit the old people's home ·work on the farm Project 2 Place: A primary school in the north of Thailand Activities:·set up a small library ·give Chinese lessons ·play games with children [注意] (1)邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息,可适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数:80—100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, 　　I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer . Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, 　　I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer of Project 2. I hope I can help a lot in a primary school in the north of Thailand. 　　I have already made some plans for this project. First of all, I will set up a small library, which can help children get more extra knowledge. Then I will give them some Chinese lessons. The purpose is to let them know more about Chinese culture. In addition, I will play games with them. I am good at playing basketball and football. Maybe I can set up a basketball team for them. If you give me the chance, I will do my best to help them. 　　Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua