江西专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作07情感表达课件 21页

话题写作 （七） 情感表达 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 (1) 要求学生结合自己的经历或者感受进行写作 ; (2) 常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。 　　今天是父亲节。假定你是李华 , 请给你的美国朋友 John 写一封电子邮件 , 谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。 [ 要点 ] • 表述你与父亲之间的感情 ; • 为父亲制作一张卡片 ; • 帮助父亲做点事 ; • 陪父亲散步等。 [ 注意 ] (1) 词数 :80 左右 ; 典例分析 (2) 请不要逐句翻译 , 可适当发挥 ; (3) 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好 , 不计入总词数。 Dear John, 　　 It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it?       What's your plan for Father's Day? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 主题是因为父亲节而想到的自己和父亲的一些事情 , 主要有 : (1) 与父亲的感情 ; (2) 父亲节的计划。 2. 确定时态 : 一般现在时和一般将来时。 3. 确定人称 : 第一人称和第三人称。 【 写作架构 】 【基础写作】 Ⅰ. 写主干句 ( 根据所给提示补全下列各句。 ) 1. 我们应该做一些特别的事情来表达对父亲的爱。 (something) We should do 　　　　　　　　 　 to show our love for our fathers.  2. 无论何时我遇到困难 , 他总是在我身边。 (whenever) 　　　　　　 I 　　　　　　 difficulties, he is always there.  3. 爸爸喜欢在晚饭后带我去散步。 (take … for a walk) My father likes to 　　　　　　　　　 　 after dinner.  4. 周末我喜欢和爸爸下象棋。 (play chess) I like 　 my father on weekends.  something special Whenever meet with take me for a walk playing chess with Ⅱ. 句子升格 ( 按括号中的要求完成句子。 ) 5.Once I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. ( 用 whenever 改写句子 )   6.I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him. He likes playing chess best. ( 用 for 连接两个句子 )   Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it best. 【连句成文】 Dear John, 　　 It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it? 　　 I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. 　　 Today I will make a beautiful card for him with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it best. I'm sure he'll be very happy. 　　 What's your plan for Father's Day? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【 词汇集锦 】 1. 烦恼类 —have problems/trouble; have too much homework; alone; feel lonely; be strict with; feel bored; sleepy; be tired of; nervous; worried; have trouble in doing; feel stressed; angry; shame; sad; unhappy; afraid; be afraid of doing; be afraid to do; drive sb. mad… 2. 愉悦类 —happy; happiness; glad; excited; love; enjoy; be proud of/take pride in; pleasure; be pleased with; amazing; be crazy about; laugh; smile; cheer; surprise… 拓展积累 3. 表达类 —express; expression; feel; feeling; sense; worry about; be worried about; be surprised to do; to one's surprise; Why not do…; Why don't you do…; What/How about doing…; look forward to doing… 【 相关短语 】 thanks for… 因 …… 感谢 ……; make new friends 结交新朋友 ; look after/take care of 照顾 ; keep in touch 保持联系 ; be friendly to 对 …… 友好 ; bring back 带回 【 个人感受 】 1. There may be something unpleasant in our life. 2.I get much help and love from many people in my life. 3.When I have problems with my study, my teachers are so patient and helpful. 4. The person I love most is my mother. 5. How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech! 6. I'd like to talk about my trouble that I'm facing these days. 7. There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. 8.My junior high school is coming to an end . Now I'd like to show my thanks for your devotion these years. 【 个人愿望 】 1.Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. 2.We should learn to smile to others, and it will help us get closer to others. 3. I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier. 4. When I grow up , I will do what I can to make my mother happy. 【 参考谚语 】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑 , 十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors. 悲喜常相伴。 3.Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的药。 4.Worry kills more men than work. 忧虑比劳累更伤人。 A 　 [2019 · 遂宁 ] 　　在成长过程中 , 青少年面临越来越多的烦恼 , 主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 [ 要点提示 ] 1. 导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因 : (1) 学业 ; (2) 与他人相处。 2. 减少压力的措施 : (1) 积极参加课外活动 ; (2) 多与他人交流沟通。 3. 简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。 ( 至少一点 ) 实战演练 [ 注意 ] 1. 文章开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; 2. 文章必须包含所给要点提示 , 要求语句通顺 , 行文连贯 ; 3. 不可逐词翻译 , 应有独自的见解并适当发挥 ; 4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 　　 We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.             Here are two main reasons. One is the problems in our schoolwork. The other is the problems in getting on with other people. However, too much pressure is not good for teenagers' development. So how to deal with the pressure? Taking part in   the after-school activities is a very useful way. Besides this one, more communication often works. 　　 All in all, we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy in bodies and mind. B 　 [2019• 长沙 ] 　　假如你是李华 , 你们班输了上周的篮球赛。 Henry 认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的 , 有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他 , 谈谈你对此事的看法 , 并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。 [ 要求 ] (1)80 词左右 ( 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ); (2) 可适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯 ; (3) 邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Henry, I've learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game.                 It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself. 　　 You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.                 　　 As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 　　 Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua