2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练2 10页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（2）附参考范文 ‎【重庆主城八区】调研抽测试卷 第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分) [来源:Z#xx#k.Com]‎ 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：‎ 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：请在答题卡上作答。‎ We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world. ‎ Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, 76. ____________‎ or we don’t always do as we say . 77. ____________ ‎ A species can become endangered with different reasons. 78. ____________[来源:1]‎ But the very important one is their living places are ruined. We 79. ____________‎ cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. ____________‎ where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and 81. ____________‎ they are going to be die out. 82. ____________‎ Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those 83. ____________‎ who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. ____________‎ We should do everything which can be done to change the 85. ____________‎ situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.‎ 第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分) ‎ We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world. ‎ Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, 76. knows ‎ or we don’t always do as we say . 77. but ‎ A species can become endangered with different reasons. 78. for ‎ But the very important one is∧ their living places are ruined. We 79. that ‎ cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. planting ‎ where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and 81. animals ‎ they are going to be die out. 82. be ‎ Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those 83. Another [来源:1ZXXK]‎ who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. their ‎ We should do everything which can be done to change the 85. that ‎ situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.‎ ‎******************************************************结束 请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈“感恩”的意义。‎ When we grow up，we often get a lot of love，support and help from our teachers，friends as well as our parents.However，we seldom express our gratitude to them.Being grateful to others is what we shouldn't forget.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②或者列举生活中一个事例，或者谈谈自己的看法；‎ ‎③词数为120左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 One possible version：‎ As middle school students，not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities.I think expressing our gratitude to people who helped us is one of the good qualities we must possess.‎ Two years ago，my classmate，Wang Wei ran into difficulty because his father was diagnosed with lung cancer.His father's illness added to his family's trouble，so Wang Wei was in danger of dropping out of school.After learning about his bad situation，our head teacher gave him timely help by allowing him to continue his schooling without any tuition.With the help of the teacher and classmates Wang has finished school.Just before this important exam he wrote us a letter expressing his sincere thanks for what we have done.We were deeply moved by his letter.‎ Being grateful to people who helped and supported us is what we are supposed to keep in mind forever.‎ ‎*****************************************************结束 ‎【重庆八中】‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如有错误（每行只有 一个错误），则按下列情况改正：‎ 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜 线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：每行都有一个错误。 ‎ I was a honest child indeed．I didn’t dare to tell lies 76． ‎ because of my eyes often let the secret out ．I remembered 77． ‎ telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on 78． ‎ my father’s face, let alone my mother eyes．I glanced 79． ‎ here and there, up or down, nervously． 80． ‎ ‎ However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to 81． ‎ worry my eyes because everything I wanted to say 82． ‎ was sent by letter．I found myself often tell small lies．I 83． ‎ wrote, “I’m fine in Beijing．I enjoy the food selling at the 84． ‎ university．And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens 85． ‎ or pork to eat．”‎ 短文改错: ‎ ‎76．a改为an 77．删去of 78．hard 改为hardly ‎ ‎79．mother 改为mother’s 80．or改为and ‎ ‎81．have改为had 82．my前加about 83．tell改为telling ‎ ‎84．selling改为sold 85．chickens改为chicken ‎*****************************************************结束[来源:Z,xx,k.Com]‎ 高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作 高考英语作文范文 ‎　　4． 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。‎ ‎　　60％的同学认为 1．不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 ‎　　40％的同学认为 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木 ‎　　注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。‎ ‎　　2．词数：100左右。‎ ‎　　3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee ‎　　Dear Editor．‎ ‎　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．‎ ‎　　Dear editor,‎ ‎　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ ‎　　60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.‎ ‎　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?‎ ‎　　Yours truly,‎ ‎*******************************************************结束 作文（***）‎ ‎ 每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人。请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Popular Student”的英语短文，参加学校网站英语论坛的讨论。 ‎ 受人欢迎的 个性品质 对待集体[来源:Zxxk.Com][来源:Zxxk.Com][来源:1ZXXK]‎ 热心班级活动，具有团队精神，工作负责，……[来源:Z,xx,k.Com]‎ 对待他人 尊重、关心他人，富有同情心，……‎ 对待自己 ‎(请考生按照自己的实际拟定内容，列举至少两点)……‎ ‎ 注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。‎ ‎ 2．词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ Being a Popular Student ‎ We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．‎ ‎ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Being a Popular Student ‎ We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy ‎ popularity．we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．‎ ‎ To be students with high popularity，we are to show respect，concern and sympathy for others．And we should never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．‎ ‎ To be a popular student．we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports,music，paintin9，social services and so on．In time ofssuccess we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep strong—minded．‎ ‎ All in all,popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．‎ ‎*********************************************************结束 作文（***）‎ ‎.请用英语简要地写出《守株待兔》的故事，以刊登在我国对外发行的某英文刊物上。‎ ‎ 词数：不得少于70，不得多于140。‎ 故事大意：宋人有耕者，田中有株(stump)，兔走触株，折颈而死。捡之甚喜，随后弃农而守株。一年后，田地荒芜，终不再获，而身为宋国笑。 ‎ ‎_______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ ____ ___ ________________________ ____________________________ __ ‎ ‎_______________________________ _______________________________ ____________________________ __ ‎ ‎_______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________‎ 参考范文 One day a farmer of the kingdom‎ of ‎Song was ploughing the field. Suddenly he saw a rabbit dash into a stump. The rab- bit broke its neck and died soon. The farmer was very glad that he got a rabbit without any effort. From that day on, he left his ploughing and kept watching by the big tree all day long in hope of getting another ‎ rabbit this way. But a whole year pas- sed and he got none. Looking hack, he saw the field lie waste, overrun with weeds. He became a laughing- stock of Song people.‎ ‎****************.(典型题)**********************结束 下面四幅图描述了格林先生和他的孩子们在周末晚上看电视的情景。尽管他讨厌流行歌曲和乐队队员，由于孩子们喜欢，他不得不迁就。请用英语写一篇短文说明两代人对电视节目的不同喜好。 ‎ 注意： ‎ ‎1．短文须包括所有图画的内容，根据行文要求可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺。 ‎ ‎2． 词数100左右。 ‎ ‎（图1中书上文字：Top of the Pops最新走红流行歌曲；图2中电视上文字：the Gorgons一演唱组名） ‎ 参考范文 One possible version： ‎ Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it . ‎ One evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch Top of the Pops. They told their father it was performed by the Gorgons, a new group. Mr. Green had to give in. The children enjoyed the program very much while Mr. Green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. He didn't listen to them.‎ ‎***************************************************结束 短文改错(‎ 第一节：短文改错(共10小题)‎ 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。‎ 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎ 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police ‎ arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ 参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)‎ I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra happen 去掉to crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, ‎ when and but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t ‎ his badly move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police what arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and ‎ sent policemen wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.‎ ‎ 加he或去掉was ‎*********************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文 ‎　　例1：你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法。请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。‎ ‎　　Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.‎ ‎　　Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.‎ ‎　　However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.‎ ‎　　In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.‎ ‎****************************************************结束 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ ‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：‎ ‎ 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ ‎ 此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ ‎ 此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ ‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ ‎ This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 66. ‎ the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring         67. ‎ Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world          68. ‎ but could make the most delicious dishes．One time, I just 69. ‎ couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner．As I was         70. ‎ about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in        71. ‎ the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It        72. ‎ isn't a good time to do that, dear．' At once I apologize       73. ‎ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You          74. ‎ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．"      75. ‎ 参考答案、、‎ ‎66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook ‎ ‎69.but改为and 70.√ 71.about后加to ‎ ‎72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized ‎ ‎74.me改为myself 75.month改为months ‎************************************************************结束