高考英语作文训练讲解 8页

作文训练 评判作文的标准 § 第一档：一塌糊涂（messy）；‎ § 第二档：糊里糊涂（cloudy）；‎ § 第三档：马马虎虎（common）；‎ § 第四档：清清楚楚（clear）；‎ § 第五档：漂漂亮亮（cool）。 ‎ § ‎20分以上作文 踩点扣分 § ‎18分以下作文 踩点给分 ‎ 好作文的标准 § 书写清晰明了，无填涂 § 结构合情合理 § 审题明确 中心突出 § 行文语言流畅准确 不是单纯拼凑 阅卷老师一目了然 ‎ § 句式丰富 使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组 § 内容积极乐观 情感饱满 体现个人良好的价值观人生观 ‎ 作文书写 § 态度决定高度 attitude determines altitude § 传达两种思想 ： 我很认真，我要拿高分 § 五要： 干净，整洁，压线，分三段，g h f y I s 字母重点注意 恰当的大小可以遮丑 § 五不要：添涂，伞型，一逗到底，上蹦下蹿，随意，瘦小挤在一起，硕大无比 § 注意：字母要善于辨认，字母之间有间隔 ‎ 单词之间不能隔太开 忽大忽小 ‎ ‎ 大概一行十一到十三字 ‎ 开头结尾一个单词拼写也不能错 ‎ ‎ 开头结尾三到四行不能有语法错误 作文结构 § 开头 总 对提示语或图片进行解释 阐明观点开门见山。一针见血3~4行 § 中间 分 提出问题 解决问题办法 结果 情绪饱满 10~12行 § 结尾 总 总结观点 收获 前后呼应 感情升华 3~4 行 ‎ 好单词 老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。‎ ‎ (1)Adj.困难的 黯然低分词：difficult 闪光高分词： tough 艰难的 challenging 有挑战性的 ‎(2)Adj.重要的 黯然低分词：important 闪光高分词：vital 至关重要的;essential 必不可少的;significant 有重要意义的;‎ ‎(3)Adj.美丽的 黯然低分词：beautiful 闪光高分：appealing动人的; attractive 吸引人的; charming迷人的;‎ fascinating 迷人的 ‎(4)adj. 不开心的 黯然低分词：sad 闪光高分词：discouraged气馁的; depressed沮丧的; downhearted垂头丧气的; low-spirited意志消沉的; break down 在阅卷老师看来，活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法，如：‎ ‎　(5) v. 参加 黯然低分词：join 闪光高分词：take part in、participate in ‎ ‎(6) v. 使用 黯然低分词：use 闪光高分词：make good use of、 make the best of ‎ ‎(7) v. 拜访 ‎　　黯然低分词：visit ‎　闪光高分词：pay a visit to ‎(8)最常见的换词手段：形容词=of+同根名词 ‎ 黯然低分词：Important 闪光高分词：be of importance ‎ (9) v 帮忙 ‎ ‎ 黯然低分词：help ‎ 闪光高分词：come to one’s assistance ‎ ‎(10) adv ‎ ‎ 黯然低分词：finally ‎ 闪光高分词： at length ‎ 好词汇词组造句 § temporary setback ‎ 不要被暂时的困难所沮丧 Don’t be cast down by temporary setbacks. ‎ § Make great progress ‎ 你越努力 你取得的进步越大 The harder you work, the more progress you will make. ‎ § Be bound to do/ be doomed to do/ be condemned to do ‎ 除非我们不遗余力 我们注定是一个失败 Unless we spare no effort, we are doomed to be a failure .‎ § Obstacle ‎ 任何你遇到的困难将会让你更加坚强 Whatever obstacles you meet with will make you stronger.‎ 英语写作中的句式选择,结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用，总结如下 ：‎ 一 改变时态 例: The bell is ringing now.     一般       There goes the bell.            特殊 ‎ § 事例全部用过去式 ‎ 二 改变语态 例: People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般 )‎ It is suggested that the conference be put off. (特殊)‎ 被动胜过主动，讲述理由时更加客观可信 I believe we will win (一般)‎ I am firmly convinced that our efforts will pay off. (特殊)‎ 三 改变结构 § 不定式 例: she work hard to realize her dream. （一般）‎ ‎ In order to realize her dream, she worked hard. （特殊）‎ 四 使用过去分词 ‎ § Because she devoted all her life to studying, she succeeded. （一般）‎ Devoted to studying, she finally made it. （特殊）‎ ‎· I was inspired by her words and made up my mind to hold on .（一般）‎ Inspired by her words, I made up my mind to hold on. （特殊）‎ ‎· I failed the exams many times and almost gave up. （一般）‎ Having failed the exams in a row, I almost gave up. （特殊）‎ 五 形容词作状语 § I realized the importance of holding on and decided not to give up ‎ Aware of the importance of holding on, I determined not to give up ‎ § Finally, I arrived at the destination ‎ At length, I arrived at the destination, safe and sound / tired but satisfied ‎ 六 使用 v- ing 1. When he arrived，he gave me an e- mail．(一般) ‎ ‎ On arriving/ when arriving, he gave me an e-mail. (特殊 )‎ ‎2. 进入到重点大学是我一直想要的 Being admitted to a key university is what I am longing for ‎3. 每次看到这样的话语，我都忍不住想起小时候 Every time I saw those words, I couldn’t help recalling my memory when I was ‎ young .‎ 七 使用名词性从句             ‎ ‎1. It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up.一般 ‎ The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. 特殊 ‎ ‎2. he is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.一般 What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 特殊 ‎3. 他做了他所能做的事帮我摆脱困境 ‎ He did what he could to get me out of trouble.‎ 4. 从那以后，我不停反思我所做的事情 From then on, I never stopped reflecting on what I had done. ‎ 八 使用定语从句             1. The girl is spoken highly of.. Her composition was well written. 一般 The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊 ‎ ‎2. Honesty, to which teachers attach great importance, plays a significant part in our daily life. ‎ 3 ‎ There was a time when …‎ 4 ‎ Thanks to sb, without whom I couldn’t have got through the hard times ‎ 九 使用状语从句 1. I won’t believe what he says. 一般 No matter what he says, I won‘t believe. 特殊 ‎ 十 时间状语 四个when / 一…就 Be about to do when it occurred to me that 原因状语 thanks to / due to / owing to ‎ 让步状语 no matter + wh--/ although/ as/ even if ‎ 条件状语 as long as / unless / only if ‎ 结果、伴随状语 thus doing / only to do ‎ 目的状语 in order to / in an attempt to do 十一 使用虚拟语气 1. The ship didn‘t sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the ‎ captain. (一般 ) But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊 ‎ But for the fact that / had it not been for the fact that …‎ 2. It is high time that sb. should do ‎ 十二 使用倒装句型,强调句型 (8个NO)‎ ‎1. Though I‘m weak I’ll make the effort.一般 ‎  Weak as I am, I‘ll make the effort. .特殊 ‎ 2. He finds English is difficult to learn. 一般 So difficult does he find it to learn English. 特殊 3. I have never had such an unforgettable experience in my life. 一般 Never have I had a more unforgettable experience in my life. 特殊 ‎4. His hard work makes a difference. 一般 It is his hard work that makes a difference. 特殊 十三 插入语 § To One’s +n (delight, disappointment, surprise, relief)‎ § To make matters worse / what’s worse § What’s more, / in addition ‎ § In the long run / term § From now(then) on / since then ‎ § Meanwhile, therefore, whereas()‎ § As a consequence / at length ‎ § In a word / in a nutshell/ to sum up ‎ § fortunately / from where I stand ‎ § As a matter of fact / believe it or not ‎ § To put it in another way / in other words 例文 § 结合校园事例 写英语作文 § Many hands make light work. Cooperation is so important that we can never emphasize the importance of it too much.‎ § ‎①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ § ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ § ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ § ‎④词数不少于120左右。‎ Union is strength. Whenever you’re faced with difficulties or in a dilemma, cooperation plays a significant part in getting you out of trouble.‎ ‎ There was a time when I was so proud that I overlooked my peers, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, there was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Fortunately, a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help each other and turn to my friends for help whenever I had difficulty in finishing a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a difference. Now I am getting along well with my friends. Meanwhile, I become more confident.‎ ‎ My experience has taught me that only if we attach great importance to cooperation can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying goes, “United, we stand; Divided, we fall.”‎ 常用习语  1. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。  2. God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。  3. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。  4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。  5. One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。  6. Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。  7. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。  8. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。  9. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。  10. More hasty, less speed. 欲速则不达。 ‎ ‎ 11. Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。  12. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。  13.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。  14. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。  15. Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。  16. well begun, half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。    17. Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。  18. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。   19. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。  20. Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。  21. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。  22. As the tree, so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。   23. Everyone is the architect of his own fortune 每个人都是自己命运的建筑师 ‎24. No cross, no crown. No sweat, no sweet ‎ No pains, no gains 不经历风雨怎会有彩虹 ‎25. Many hands make light work 众人拾柴火焰高 ‎ ‎