2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练15 10页

‎2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文 短文改错----（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）‎ ‎ 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：‎ 此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。‎ ‎ George,‎ It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______‎ back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______‎ your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______‎ we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington‎ ‎D.C.‎, 79._______‎ where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______‎ of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________‎ another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________‎ work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________[来源:学.科.网]‎ was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______‎ our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______‎ Yours,‎ Mike ‎76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确 ‎ ‎80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew ‎ ‎ 84.trip前a 85.better----more ‎***************************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎4. ‎ 你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。‎ 一些同学认为不应该取消 另一些同学认为应该取消 听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视 听是获取信息的重要途径之一 国际合作日益增多，听说能力应加强 考试中各地收听效果好坏不一、不公平 英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大 今后并非人人都要与外国人口头交流 注意：1．文章的起始句已给出。 2．词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。‎ ‎3．参考词汇：取消—cancel 国际合作—international cooperation ‎ The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled. ‎ Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent. ‎ But others don’t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.‎ ‎***************************************************************结束 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词; ‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ ‎(2019·唐山三模）‎ Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. ‎ In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all. ‎ 答案解析******短文改错 Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some ‎ increasingly people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less like But reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to ‎ merchants false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually ‎ are presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from ‎ delivered which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own what their expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. ‎ In ∧ word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all. ‎ a ‎**********************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎5. 请以My favorite Newspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。‎ 报纸名称及使用语言 ‎21st Century, 英文报纸 出版地点及出版周期 北京，每周一期 版面内容 每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导 特色 图文并茂 目的 学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息 效果[来源:1]‎ 广为人知，深受喜爱 ‎ My Favorite Newspaper ‎ 21st Century is my favorite newspaper. It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week. It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report. There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it. I enjoy reading the paper. I read it to improve my English. I have learnt a lot of new words and useful ‎ expressions. Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music. 21st Century is very popular wiEnglish learners. I do love it.‎ ‎*********************************************************结束 ‎【重庆南开中学高】‎ 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）‎ ‎ 请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。‎ 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。‎ 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ 注意：原行没有错的不要改。[来源:1ZXXK]‎ Dear Mrs. Smith,‎ I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 76． ‎ the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. 77． ‎ After that, you always gave me specially attention and 78． ‎ inspired me to join in activity. As a result, I gradually 79． ‎ got to know other campers. Because the help you gave me 80． ‎ that summer, my .life changed. I gain so much confidence that 81． ‎ I went back to school as new person. My grades improved. I 82． ‎ became active but made new friends. Yesterday, I got a letter 83． ‎ that was said I was admitted to a college. I am proud of it. I just 84． ‎ want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 85． ‎ Yours ‎ Bob ‎ 改错 ‎76．well改为much 77．myself改为me 78．specially改为special ‎79．activity改为activities/在activity前面加the ‎80．because的后面加of ‎81．gain改为gained 82．new前面加a ‎83．but改为and 84．去掉was 85．becoming改为become ‎*************************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：日记 ‎　2．你的一天活动安排如下，请你据此写一篇日记。‎ ‎　　[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]‎ 时   间 地    点 活    动    安    排 ‎8：00‎ 校门口 欢迎美国学生（约50人）到校参加访问 ‎8：30-9：30‎ 图书馆阅鉴室 联欢会（get-together）,交换礼品 ‎9：30-10：30‎ 校园内 参观教学楼、实验楼、校办工厂、游泳池 ‎10：30-11：30‎ 操场 友谊篮球赛 ‎12：00‎ 校门口 美国学生离校 ‎14：00-17：00‎ 几家书店 和几名同学选择、购买了书和磁带 ‎　　交换：exchange vt.‎ ‎　　‎2003年11月25日 星期六 晴 Nov. 25 Saturday fine ‎　　About fifty American students came to visit our school today.‎ ‎　　We gathered at the school at 8 o'clock to give them a warm welcome. Then we had a get-together in the reading room in our library. Our headmaster told them something about our school. And then we talked with each other and exchanged gifts. From nine thirty we showed them around our school. They visited our classroom building, the lab building, the factory run by our school, and the swimming pool. A friendly basketball game started on the sports ground at then thirty. At twelve o'clock all American students left our school.‎ ‎　　In the afternoon my classmates and I went to some shops. We chose and bought some books and tapes.‎ I was busy but happy today.‎ ‎******************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎6. 据调查，中国城市居民的电脑拥有率达30%。很多农村居民对电脑也越来越感兴趣，甚至有的家庭也买了电脑。参考下表写一篇题为“Computers in China”的短文。词数为100左右。‎ 家庭买电脑的目的 中学生使用电脑的情况 类别 比率 因别 比率 孩子学习需要 70%‎ 学习资料查询 30%‎ 家长工作需要 20%‎ 上网、聊天、游戏 60%‎ 娱乐 30%‎ 听音乐、看光盘 20%‎ Computers in ‎China According to a recent investigation, about 30% of the city families have computer. Besides, many village people are more and more interested in computers and some of them even have bought computers. About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study, and some for their work. And even some people bought them for entertainment. The fact how the middle school students use the computers really surprises us. Only about 30% of them use computers to find out useful in formation. About 60% use computers to play games and 20% use computers to watch VCDs or listen to music. In my opinion, we should make better use of our best invention— computers.‎ ‎********************************************************结束 高考英语书面表达讲义：日记 针对训练 ‎　　‎2月4日，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。‎ ‎1组 扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物 ‎2组 宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木 ‎3组 演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性 你的看法 ‎……‎ ‎　　注意：‎ ‎　　1．日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；‎ ‎　　2．日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数；‎ ‎　　3．词数：100词左右。‎ ‎　　4．参考词汇：烟蒂cigarette end ‎ ‎　　February 4, Sunday Fine ‎　　This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.‎ ‎　　___________________________________________________________[来源:1]‎ ‎　　February 4, Sunday Fine ‎　　This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish, such as the waste paper, cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.‎ I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people's health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.‎ ‎********************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎7. 如今，外出旅游已成为时尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游时必备的。请你选择至少最重要的五种物品，并说出理由。字数100字左右。‎ Documents ID card, passport Clothes sweater, coat, walking, shoes ‎ Articles medicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle（热水瓶）‎ Equipment mobile phone, compass Books guidebook, map, magazine Other things camera, CD player, Mp3‎ While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic ‎ and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests. Without it, we may get lost. And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane. What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place. In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.‎ ‎*******************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎8. 目前，重庆的街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此“中学生英语报”组织了一场讨论：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。根据下表所提供的信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。‎ 支持饲养宠物 反对饲养宠物 你的观点 1． 安慰孤寡老人 2． 人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣 1． 造成环境污染 2． 吵闹声，甚至伤人 ‎……‎ 注意：1．词数100左右。2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3．开头语已为你写好。‎ One possible version:‎ Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it’s a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.‎ I like animals, so I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.‎ ‎*********************************************************结束 短文改错----【重庆市外国语学校】[来源:学|科|网Z|X|X|K]‎ 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）‎ ‎ 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：‎ ‎ 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。‎ ‎ 此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。‎ 此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。‎ At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the 76._____‎ subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on 77._____‎ the ground．Before long , he was surrounding with people, who 78._____‎ were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night,‎ ‎ 79______‎ a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please 80._____‎ come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could 81.____‎ be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought 82______‎ back his lottery(彩票) ‎ which won a reward of ＄500,000. Later someone asked the violinist: 83._____ ‎ ‎“ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said, 84._____‎ ‎“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose 85._____‎ honesty, I won’t be happy forever.” ‎ 短文改错：‎ ‎76.第一个at改为on 77.with后加a 78.surrouning改为surrounded ‎ ‎79.word改为words ‎80.mistaken改为mistake 81.why改为what 82.brought改为took ‎ ‎83.reward改为prize 84.don’t改为didn’t 85.if后加I ‎****************************************************结束 ‎1.伴随着社会的发展，人的“个性”也越来越强。新时期的青少年都愿意追求个性，这种行为对他们的人生发展是利是弊？请结合下表中所给内容，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。‎ 正方观点 反方观点 ‎ [来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 你的观点是……[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]‎ 发展个性是开放时代的必然趋势；‎ 追求个性若把握得好，对青少年成人后的工作很有好处。[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 个性不等于任性或是放纵；[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 个性的释放要适时适度。‎ 注意：1.词数：130-170‎ ‎ 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎1. With the development of society, there are more and more teenagers tending to ‎ show their own individuality. ‎ There is no denying that it’s a natural trend for teenagers to develop their individuality in modern society. We should notice that education today pays more and more attention to the individuality development of the students. Also, developing individuality properly is good for teenagers to stand out in their work in the future. ‎ However, individuality doesn’t mean being completely free. There are still laws and rules regulating our behavior, which warns us not to cross the limit. Therefore, individuality should be controlled to a proper extent. ‎ In my opinion, teenage life is an important stage when we develop and improve ourselves. We should spend more time and energy in learning rather than pursuing individuality so that we can meet the challenges in the future. After all, it is not what you look like but what you really master that counts ‎***************************************************************结束 表格提示类 ‎9. 据报道，2019年北京奥运会将选拔约十万志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2019 Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：‎ Dos Don’ts ‎1. 待人礼貌、友好 ‎1．避免不得体的言行 ‎2．坚守岗位 ‎2．不忘履行自己的职责 ‎3．介绍中国历史和文化 ‎3．不损害祖国的形象 如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么。 （内容由考生自己拟定）‎ 注意：1。对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。‎ ‎ 2．字数120左右。短文中已写好了的部分，不计入词数 。 3．参考词汇：形象—— image One Possible Version It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2019 Olympic Games in Beijing. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?‎ Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behaviour. Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty. Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland.‎ If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer, besides the above, I will work hard and creatively, but never be lazy. I will follow the law and disciplining, but never break them.. I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors, and help make the 2019 Olympic Games a great success.‎ ‎****************************************************结束