2019届高考英语二轮书面表达高分练兵场：（6）应用文写作-投稿信 10页

应用文写作-投稿信 ‎1、最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿.‎ ‎1.描述这一现象 ‎2.分析其原因及弊端 ‎ ‎3.你认为该如何改变现状 注意:1.词数100左右 ‎2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯.‎ Dear editor,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2、假设你是学生李华,进入高三后你发现很多同学有为了学习不吃早饭,经常熬夜等不健康的生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文。 ‎ ‎1.指出现在部分高三同学生活不健康的现象; ‎ ‎2.结合实际从以下三方面提出具体建议: ‎ a.膳食;  b.体育锻炼;  c.人生态度。 ‎ ‎ 注意: ‎ ‎1.词数100左右; ‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3、最近,你看到某英文报社正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文,对此你很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法,给该报社投稿。‎ 要点提示:‎ ‎1、衣着干净、整齐,保持微笑 ‎2、诚实,开朗,  乐于助人 ‎3、懂得与人合作 ‎4、其他 注意:‎ ‎①词数100左右;②文章的标题和开头已为你写好,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ How to be popular?‎ ‎   Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity?  In fact, it is very simple.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4、在你成长过程中一定有一些对你有帮助,对你很重要的人.假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文给校刊投稿.‎ 内容包括:‎ ‎1.对你很重要的人是谁 ‎2.对你很重要的原因 ‎3.你想如何回报他(她)。‎ 注意:词数不少于100(文章开头已给出,不计入字数).‎ On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I'm in trouble.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5、当今,随着人们生活水平的提高,青少年的肥胖现象越来越严重,很让人担心。请你根据以下情况写一篇文章,给某英文报社投稿。要点如下:‎ 原因 ‎1.长时间看电视玩电子产品;‎ ‎2.缺少运动;‎ ‎3.饮食结构不合理,喜欢吃甜食等垃圾食品;‎ ‎4.学习负担重。‎ 建议 ‎1.多参加体育锻炼;‎ ‎2.远离电子产品;‎ ‎3..多吃健康食品,远离垃圾食品。‎ 要求:‎ ‎1 词数 150 左右;‎ ‎2 文章包含提示的所有信息,避免逐字翻译;‎ ‎3 可以适当发挥,提出自己的观点。参考词汇:青少年肥胖 teen obesity ‎【写作要求】 ‎ ‎1.  作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; ‎ ‎2.  不必写标题。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎6、据悉,高考英语要考人机对话。假如你是李华,请将自己的观点写成一篇英语短文向校报投稿。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 观点明确,层次清楚,传递正能量;‎ ‎2. 词数80左右。‎ 参考词汇:The National College Entrance Examination 高考 man-machine dialog 人机对话 My view on man-machine dialog ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎7、每年八月的第二个星期天是“父亲节”。在此节日前夕,某英语报社以“My plan to celebrate Father’s Day”为题,发布征文启事以增强节日气氛。假如你是李华,请你写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。‎ My plan to celebrate Father’s Day ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎8、假设你是李华,为了庆祝教师节,你班同学布置了教室,请你根据下面提示给校报投稿反映你们的活动。‎ 要点:‎ ‎1.目的是使老师课堂上心情更好,让教室更有家的感觉;‎ ‎2.活动:摆放鲜花、设计板报;‎ ‎3.意义:齐心协力、 共同参与和感恩老师。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数80左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ One possible version ‎    As is often the case,when people are attending meetings,having meals or waiting for buses,you can always find them addicted to their phones,completely ignoring others.‎ ‎    This is really a common phenomenon in our life.The reason is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.However,too much exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of health.Moreover,people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.‎ ‎    As far as I am concerned,people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study.And meanwhile care more about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ ‎    Recently I find that some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not eating breakfast. Although we are under great pressure, it is necessary for us to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.‎ ‎    First, it’s important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying. Second, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens.‎ ‎    In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us during this bitter but sweet year.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ How to be popular?‎ ‎    Most people would like to be popular with others,  but what is the secret to achieve popularity?  In fact, it is very simple.‎ ‎    The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.‎ ‎    I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ ‎    On the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I'm in trouble. Among them, the most important one is my grandma.‎ ‎    In my early years, my parents left home because of their work. Therefore, I lived with my grandma until eleven years old. Besides taking care of my life, she also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life. She is a Chinese teacher. Owing to her help my writing skill is better than most students in my class.I really feel proud of my grandma.‎ ‎    It was my grandma who gave me a happy and rich childhood.As I am growing up, I feel so grateful to her that I will live up to her expectations. Besides,I will certainly set aside as much time as possible to keep her company so that she will not feel lonely. I wish my grandma would live a happy old﹣age life.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ ‎   Nowadays,  with  the  improvement  of  the  standard  of  living,  an  increasing  number  of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns.‎ ‎    There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and computer, students are burdened with so much homework to do , they are getting less exercise than before. Secondly, because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet and oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.‎ ‎     In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As a saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits, vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they are supposed to make a proper time schedule so that they can keep a balance between their exercise and studies.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ My view on man-machine dialog ‎    It's said that English will be tested by means of man-machine dialog in the National College Entrance Examination. Personally, I'm strongly in favor of such a reform.‎ ‎    It goes without saying that we learn English to communicate with natives in writing and speaking. And man-machine dialog is by far the most objective, quick and convenient test method. In turn, fair play sure makes learners become more interested in using English.‎ ‎    Honestly, I'm looking forward to meeting the new challenge.‎ ‎(81 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 这是篇开放性的议论文,要求习作者就高考英语“人机对话” 发表自己的意见;虽说是议论文,但词数要求只有80左右,故习作者只用先摆明自己的观点再讲几点理由来支持即可;为了做到言简意赅,务必在遣词造句上下功夫。‎ 高分揭秘 这篇习作层次清楚——提出问题,表达观点,给出论据,表达愿望,层层递进,说理透彻;言简意赅;行文流畅,过渡自然;词数虽少但使用大量的高级词汇和高级句型使本习作生色不少;本题满分15分,本习作得13分。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎7答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ My plan to celebrate Father’s Day ‎    As the only breadwinner of my family, Father is always busy, tired and stressed, driving a truck. Though he is too busy to shop, or rather, economical, and he wears a T-shirt of years, he manages to satisfy my requirements in study and life. As Fathers Day is around the corner, I'm going to give him a shirt at the party planned by my family that day. And I'm determined to study hard to honor my parents and wish parents worldwide a happy, long life.‎ ‎(85 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 文体和内容分析:‎ 这是篇开放性的作文;习作者要排除无关信息(六月的第三个星期天是“父亲节”,以增强节日气氛),深入挖掘题干中的有效信息(plancelebrate和Father’s Day),根据实际情况或发挥想象,写下自己庆祝“父亲节”的计划。‎ 习作要求分析:‎ 根据题干可知,习作者是以“李华”的名义投稿的,故不可以透露自己的真实信息;鉴于词数要求,习作者在遣词造句方面要十分的考究——言简意赅,不可以拖泥带水。‎ 精彩点评 这篇习作有如下亮点:‎ 一、 本文虽短,但却能传情达意,充分地表达了作者对自己父亲的敬慕之情——在作者眼中,父亲是家里唯一的供养者,他工作繁忙、劳累而紧张,生活节约却想方设法地满足我的生活和学习要求,是个不折不扣的好父亲;‎ 二、 结构严谨,行文流畅——根据前文可知,作者的父亲十分好,故作者决定借节日之际送他衬衫也就是顺理成章的事了 ;古人云:老吾老以及人之老,故在给自己父亲过节的时候,不忘记祝福全天下的父母也是人之常情;‎ 三、 本文靓词、靓句使用得当,增强了习作的表现力。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎8答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎    To celebrate Teachers' Day, we launched an activity. After the heated discussion in advance, we agreed on designing and decorating the classroom. Everyone got involved in the designing activity ‎ as planned. Eventually, it was true that we presented our hardworking teachers with an unusual gift, full of thanks. Surely, they must have been feeling more touching at the sight of the theme wallpaper and the fantastic flowers around. Meanwhile, no one denied that we learned what we couldn't learn in books.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎(83 words)‎ 解析：‎ 审题分析 这是一篇应用文写作——校报上发表稿件,讲述主题活动以一般过去时为主,稿件内容厲于发生在自己身边的人和事情,主要用第一人称,写作要点:1.目的;2.活动内容;3.活动感言。‎ 思路点拨 ‎1. 按照合理的顺序和语言要求.运用合适的关联词、过渡语。‎ ‎2. 建议参考提示要点的顺序安排文章结构 精彩点评 ‎1. 范文开头交代事件的目的。‎ ‎2. 采用精简句式,使得语言简洁。‎ ‎3. 丰富的短语给文章增添浓重的地道表达气息,如in advance, get involved in, agree on, full of thanks等。‎ ‎4. 采用高级表达,如 no one denied that we learned what we couldn't learn in books。‎ ‎ ‎