【英语】2018届二轮复习2000---2011年上海市高考英语英语书面表达范文学案（8页） 9页

‎2018届 二轮复习 2000---2011年上海市高考英语英语书面表达范文 ‎2011年上海高考作文及范例 假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。‎ 启事 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。‎ 有意者请来信告知：‎ ‎1） 你个人的基本情况；‎ ‎2） 你对申请项目的基本设想；‎ ‎3） 项目经费的使用计划。‎ 联系方式: 2011hope@icf.org ‎ 2011 ‎ Version A Dear Sirs，‎ ‎ Hello！ I’m Li Ming， a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As I’ve always been interested in charity， I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2，000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas.‎ ‎ My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage， I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive， I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly， we will set out for  primary schools， which are selected and contacted in advance， to carry out our program.‎ ‎ As to how to allocate the money， I’d like to use 1，000 for textbooks， and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.‎ ‎ I am looking forward to your reply， thanks！‎ ‎ Yours，‎ Li Ming Version B Dear World Child Foundation organizers， 　　My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged. 　　Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so that we wouldn’t end up embarrassing those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions. 　　At the end of the day, our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world? 　　We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience. 　　Yours Sincerely, 　　Jerry Lu ‎2010年上海高考作文及范例 ‎ 下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：‎ ‎●描述图片里学生上课的场景 ‎●比较你同时期的上课情况 ‎●简单谈谈你的感受 · ‎ As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.‎ ‎    Compared with the class performance in local China, the difference is quite obvious. We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way. ‎ ‎    I ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? Why class performance of Chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students? Possible reasons can be listed as follows. Most important of all, education system in China is the key reason. The first day we become the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class. We put our hands back and stay quiet in class. Lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class. Teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles. Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers. ‎ ‎ The second point to be mentioned is that Chinese students hold different attitudes toward study. In our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way. We behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner. ‎ ‎  As a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish. Taking what has been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a leaner or a quiet listener.‎ 问题: 题目强调了入学新生，能不能从刚入学时，我们还对上课充满热情，然后和高中时的课堂沉闷情况相比较，从而发现问题？‎ ‎2009年上海高考作文及范例 某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：‎ ‎1、你感兴趣的课程 ‎ ‎2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么 ‎ ‎3、为什么想学这些内容 ‎ 实在没找着范文啊！‎ ‎2008年上海高考作文及范例 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎·你是否会参加比赛 ‎·你做出该决定的具体理由 Version 1:‎ A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.‎ Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.‎ For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.‎ Version 2:‎ Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.‎ There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates. ‎ For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.‎ ‎2007年上海高考作文及范例 以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容：‎ 1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；‎ 2、 该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。‎ A Present for Father’s Day The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.‎ Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.‎ ‎2006年上海高考作文及范例 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。‎ 南方大学 北方大学 学费 ‎8000元/年 ‎5000元/年 招生人数 ‎20人 ‎10人 优惠政策 无 加20分 Version A Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north. The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south. This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family. Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.‎ Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers. Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university. Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only. However, I have ‎ been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.‎ Version B Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking. It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter. However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted. What counts is the reputation it has. Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.‎ Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted. The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points. So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.‎ ‎2005年上海高考作文及范例 古人云：“天生我材必有用” 请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。‎ Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.‎ Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn't do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what? He has set up a recycling factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: "There must be a use for my talent."‎ ‎2004年上海高考作文及范例 ‎ 老师要求你负责班级墙报（wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。‎ Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.‎ Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.‎ However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…‎ No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing,‎ ‎ study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.‎ Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187) ‎ ‎2003年上海高考作文及范例 ‎ 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。‎ 受信人：徐海青 寄信人：黄平 写信日期：2003年六月八日 ‎ June 8, 2003‎ Dear Xu Haiqing,‎ You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.‎ Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.‎ A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.‎ I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)‎ ‎2002年上海高考作文及范例 ‎2002年的作文题提供了一幅图片，图片上女儿在学骑自行车。奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车，深怕女儿摔着了。图片下面有一行字：你们让我骑好吗？‎ 简述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。‎ Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.‎ ‎ We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.‎ ‎ We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future? ‎ ‎ For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.‎ ‎ The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219 words) ‎ ‎2001年上海高考作文及范例 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。‎ ‎ Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.‎ ‎ First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.‎ ‎ Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces. ‎ ‎ Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words)‎ ‎2000年上海高考作文及范例 ‎ 1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想 ‎ An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.‎ One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.‎ She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of ‎ the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.‎ A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words) ‎ www.ht88.com ‎