【英语】2019届高考英语二轮复习书面表达考前特训：写作2 9页

写作2‎ ‎1、假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jerry上周来信想了解一下目前中国农村的现状，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1． 国家重视农村发展；‎ ‎2．农村的显著变化（如住房、公路、教育等）；‎ ‎3．邀请Jerry有机会来参观；‎ 注意：‎ ‎1． 词数100左右．‎ ‎2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．‎ Dear Jerry，‎ I'm glad to hear from you last week．‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎2、你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，所以给你写信，希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 中文难学的原因；‎ ‎2. 你的建议及理由；‎ ‎3. 你的祝愿。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右； ‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3、假定你是李华，马上就要填报高考志愿（apply for admission into a university）了，你的外教Adam发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 你打算申请的专业；‎ ‎2. 选择本专业的原因；‎ ‎3. 希望得到专业选择方面的指导。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4、假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国旅游，发邮件向你征求旅游建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 推荐一个旅游城市；‎ ‎2. 给出推荐理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Tim,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5、假定你是李华，已经返回美国的外教Smith先生来信向你借中国四大古典名著中的《三国演义》 (Romance of the Three Kingdoms )。请你给他写一封回信，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1.寄书原因；‎ ‎2.简单介绍这本小说。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎2.可以适增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms 中国古典四大名著 Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature Dear Professor Smith，‎ How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ I’m sure you’ll love the novel once reading it.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎6、假定你是李华,正在加拿大参加短期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的杂志里看到一篇介绍中国端午节的文章,但文章里没有注明日期是中国农历,且文中所配图片是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信,指出其中的错误并要求更正。内容包括:‎ ‎1. 指出错误,给出正确信息;‎ ‎2. 要求更正;‎ ‎3. 赞赏对方介绍中国文化。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3. 参考词汇:中国农历一the  Chinese  Lunar  Calendar ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jerry,‎ I'm glad to hear from you last week. Since you are interested in the current situation of the countryside in China, I'm writing to introduce it to you. (写信目的)‎ In recent years, our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside, making it quite different from the past. (高分句型一) (国家重视农村发展) ‎ Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built, but education has been given more attention and support. (高分句型二)(农村的显著变化)All of these changes have added to the convenience and happiness of the people in the countryside. Therefore, I sincerely invite you to come for a visit. (邀请Jerry有机会来参观)‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua 解析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Jim,‎ It's great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! And you say you find Chinese difficult to learn. Actually, I quite understand you.‎ Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from images. For English, usually, you'll know how to pronounce a word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar, which definitely brings you more trouble.‎ However, any learning takes time. Don't worry. I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters. Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching ‎ Chinese movies can also help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.‎ I wish you every success in learning the language! If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。‎ 第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇书信：你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，所以给你写信，希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：中文难学的原因；你的建议及理由；你的祝愿。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Different from your language（不同于你的语言）；most Chinese characters（多数中国汉字）；how to read Chinese characters.（怎样读中国汉字）；any further questions,（更进一步的问题）等。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ 本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Adam,‎ Thank you very much for your concern about my applying for admission into a university. I'd like to talk about it.‎ The major I plan to apply for is computer programming. There are some reasons for it. Firstly, I have always been interested in computer science, especially the software programming. Besides, I think computer programming can cultivate my logical thinking ability. In the process of programming, I can improve my ability to concentrate, which is needed in doing everything in my life.‎ That's just my personal thinking. I really hope to get your guidance to the choice of major.‎ I'm looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，马上就要填报高考志愿（apply for admission into a university）了，你的外教Adam发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 你打算申请的专业；2. 选择本专业的原因；3. 希望得到专业选择方面的指导。人称使用第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：concern about（关心），major（专业），be interested in（对……感兴趣），guidance to the choice of major（专业选择方面的指导）等。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Tim,‎ Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your trip. ‎ I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you. It is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest. You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning. The next place that you can’t miss is the Great Wall, which is one of the great wonders in the world. The Palace Museum and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting, too. Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you. ‎ I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 解析：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于介绍一个旅游城市的书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①寒假时到中国旅游；②推荐一个旅游城市；③推荐理由。‎ 第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：winter holiday（寒假），capital city（首都），places ‎ of interest（风景名胜），Tiananmen Square（天安门广场）等。‎ 第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。‎ 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear Professor Smith,‎ How is everything going?‎ It has been two years since you returned to the USA. My classmates and I missed you very much. Let me know if only you would come to China again.‎ I know from your letter that you are interested in Chinese classic novels，especially Romance of the Three Kingdoms. It is a historical novel written by Luo Guanzhong, and its background is in the end of the Han Dynasty and the Three Kingdoms period in Chinese history. It is considered as one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. And it has a total of 800 000 words and nearly a thousand dramatic characters (mostly historical) in 120 chapters.‎ I’m sure you’ll love the novel once reading it.‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Hua 解析：‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 审题：人称：以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 时态：以一般现在时为主 提纲：文章主体：要点一：‎ ‎①I know from your letter that you are interested in Chinese classic novels...‎ ‎②I am so glad that you love reading Chinese classic novels...‎ ‎③I know from your letter that you are crazy about Chinese classic novels...‎ 要点二：‎ ‎① It is a historical novel written by Luo Guanzhong and its background is in...‎ ‎② The background of the novel is in the Han Dynasty and the Three Kingdoms period， which including nearly a thousand characters...‎ ‎③Luo Guanzhong wrote the historical novel，with nearly a thousand vivid characters.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎6答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Dear editor,‎ ‎    I am Li Hua, a visiting student from China. In your recent issue, an article about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival left a deep impression on me. I’m much obliged to you for introducing Chinese culture to your people, which will surely bridge the gap between our countries.‎ But I found a flaw in the picture that goes with the article. Actually, we compete with dragon boats, not your familiar rowing boats. That is because dragons are considered as a symbol of the Chinese culture. I sincerely hope you can revise the boat information and thus readers will have a better understanding of China.‎ ‎    Thank you in advance for efforts you will make.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 解析：题目要求假定你是李华，正在加拿大访学。你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信，内容包括：要点如下：1. 赞赏对方介绍中国文化；2. 指出错误；3. 希望更正；4. 词数100左右。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。‎ ‎ ‎