高考英语作文写作指南如何写好高考作文描写文 5页

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 1 - 高考备考：如何写好高考作文描写文 高考在即，高考作文都是重头戏，如何写高考英语作文描写文，这里用几篇范文讲解描绘人 物、地点、物品或场景以及描述对象的细节，供大家学习参考。 描写文就是用语言文字来描绘人物、地点、物品或场景。描写文一般通过表现感觉的细 节展开，描述人们通过五官所得到的印象与感受。写描写文时要精心挑选能体现所描绘对象 的突出特征的细节，使人读后能抓住其主要特征，如见其人，如见其物，如临其境。 请看下面的例子： 1.描写地点 我们的寝室 [题材] 以“Our Bedroom”为题写一篇不少于 120 词的短文，介绍一下你寝室的位置和内部陈设。 [范文] Our Bedroom Our bedroom, shared by 4 students, is on the second floor of No.3 Students' Dormitory Building①. It is a small room，about 15 square meters, and with white ceiling and green walls. As you enter the room, straight ahead you will see two large windows. Under the left window is my bed, which is covered with a blue sheet. Above mine is Xiaodong's bed. Chen Wei's bed is under the right window, and Zhang Lu lives above him. In the middle of the room, there are two desks and four chairs. A lamp is hung in the middle of the ceiling. Behind the door, there is a built-in closet②, where we put our belongings. [注释] ①No.3 Students' Dormitory Building 学生第三宿舍楼 ②a built-in closet 墙柜 [评析] 本文先介绍了寝室的位置，接着按空间顺序由上至下、由左至右、由外及里——描述了 寝室的布局，结构清晰，语言平实、简洁。 我们的学校 [题材] 下图为北京 101 中学平面图(diagram)，请将此图用英语作具体说明(词数 60-80)，以便 向参观者介绍该中学的校园风貌。A.学校大门 B.图书馆 C.花池 D.实验楼 E.教学楼(四层， 两头为教师办公室) F.食堂 G.操场(校园四周均为树木) [范文] Our School Ladies and Gentlemen, This is the diagram of Beijing No.101 Middle School. It is 720 meters long and 480 meters wide. Its gate faces south. In the middle of the school stands the four-storeyed teaching building with teaching offices at both ends. In front of it lies a flower garden. On the left of it is the school library building, and on the right, the lab building. There is a large playground behind the teaching building. Beside the playground is the dining house. Trees are planted all around the school. How beautiful the school looks! Welcome to visit our school. [评析] 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 2 - 本文按一定的空间顺序，即由整体到部分，由左至右，由前至后地介绍了学校的布局。 文中方位词及倒装句的运用使上下文有机地衔接起来。全文行文连贯，表达清楚。 2.描写人物 表哥——我的榜样 [题材] 我表哥是一个勤奋而细心的学生。他立志长大后当一名科学家。为此，他刻苦学习数理 化和英语。他以伽俐略为榜样，仔细观察周围的事物。为证实自己的某些想法，他总是反复 做实验。他经常失败，但从不失去信心。 根据以上所给内容，写一篇词数为 100 左右的英语短文。 [范文] A Good Example to Me-My Cousin My cousin is a very diligent and careful student. He has made up his mind to become a scientist when he grows up. In order to realize his wishes, he works hard at maths, physics and chemistry. At the same time he studies English hard. Following the example set by Galileo, he observes everything around him carefully. He likes doing experiments and drawing conclusions from them. He never takes anything for granted. He always does experiments again and again so that he can prove his ideas. He has a lot of failures in his experiments, but he is never discouraged. 明亮的灯光 [题材] 根据下列提示写一篇短文，题目自拟，词数 120 左右。 1.每晚我路过我家邻居门前都能看到明亮的灯光; 2.一次我遇到了邻居家的女儿，得知她是一位高考落榜考生，每天，她都在灯下学习到 很晚; 3.又一次与她相遇，她告诉我即使她考不上大学，也不放弃学习，这给了我启示。 [范文] The Bright Light Every night when I passed by my neighbour's room, I could always see the bright light through the window. Late in the night, the light looked especially bright. One night I happened to visit my neighbour. It was almost eleven o'clock. When I entered the room, a thin girl was studying, She was very diligent but failed in the college entrance examination last year. One day we met again and I asked her, "If I fail in the examination, what shall I do?" "Don't think too much of it," she encouraged me. "You know I failed last year. But I want to try again. If I fail this time, I won't give up." Her words shone in my mind like the bright light in her window. [评析] 本文的优点有三：一是文章题目新颖，有一语双关之意，它既明示出邻居家的女孩坚忍 不拔的精神，同时也暗喻了她对我的启示如同一盏明亮的灯。二是文章首尾呼应，开头是实 在的灯光，结尾是以灯光作了比喻。三是运用了直接引语，文章更具感染力。 新东方高考备考：如何写好高考作文描写文 分享到： 栏目关注： 高考语数英联报暑假住宿班（文） 高考语数英联报暑假住宿班（理） 大学 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 3 - 听说读写拔高二级精品 40 人走读班 摘要： 高考在，高考作文都是重头戏，如何写高考英语作文描写文，新东方老师拿几篇范文 讲解描绘人物、地点、物品或场景以及描述对象的细节，供大家学习参考，更多内容请关注 新东方网高考频道。 我们的班长 [题材] 请你根据下述内容，以“Our Monitor”为题，用英文写一篇短文(词数为 80～140)。 在班上李明个儿最高。他为人正直，乐于助人，我们选他当了班长。几个月前，我因病 耽误了两周的课，他帮助我补上。他擅长数学和物理。数学竞赛他得了第一名。他也爱英语， 演剧时，教师和同学都认为他发音最好。他爱踢足球，比赛时他跑得很快。李明是值得我学 习的人。 [范文] Our Monitor If you come among us, you will easily know who Li Ming is. He is the tallest boy in our class. He is honest and always ready to help others. That's why we made him monitor. Several months ago, I was ill. I didn't go to school for two weeks. I was afraid I couldn't catch up with others. Then Li Ming came to help me. He explained the difficult points of the text to me and encouraged me. With his help I caught up with my classmates at last. Li Ming is good at maths and physics. Last term he won the first prize in the maths contest. He is fond of English, too. Once he played a part in a short English play. Both the teachers and students considered Li Ming's pronunciation to be the best of all. Li Ming likes to play football. In matches he runs fast. And at that time we all shout: "Excellent, Li Ming!" Li Ming is a worthy person for me to learn from. [评析] 作者从以下三方面写李明：一是李明对我的帮助;二是李明学习优异;三是李明擅长体育。 本章以众多的素材围绕一个人来写，人物形象丰满。 看，这个女孩! [题材] 她爱好体育，尤其是球类运动。她还是我班的尖子生。她还喜欢帮助别人，这样的女孩， 你能不喜欢吗? 请根据上面的中文提示，写一篇以“Look, This Girl!”为题目的短文，词数为 120 左 右。 [范文] Look, This Girl! Look at the girl who is dancing out of the classroom with a basketball under her arm! With short hair and a suit of casual clothes, she is more like a boy. She is fond of playing ball games, such as volleyball, basketball and even football. She likes to climb mountains as well. Don't think she is only good at playing. In fact, she is one of the top students in our class. She plays after she has finished all her lessons. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 4 - She likes to help others. When someone needs help, she always doesn't hesitate. She is such a good girl that we all like her. [评析] 这篇习作使人读起来很轻松。它没有句句严格套用主谓宾或主系表结构，而是使用了祈 使句，介词短语结构等，比如：第一段开头：“Look at the girl who is dancing out of the classroom with a basketball under her arm!”和“With short hair and a suit of casual clothes.”又如第二段的首句：“Don't think she is only good at playing.”从中我们可 以看出，文章的美就在于它的新、奇、活。 3.描写事物 东方明珠电视塔 [题材] 就题目“The Oriental Pearl TV Tower”写一篇 120 词左右的短文。内容包括： 1.1991 年开始建筑，1994 年建成后不久向公众开放，每天有许多人前去参观; 2.矗立在浦东，468 米高，居亚洲第一，世界第三; 3.成为上海文化娱乐旅游(tourism)的中心。 [范文] The Oriental Pearl TV Tower Walk along the beach, and we can see the Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower standing like a giant on the other side of the Huangpu River. It's visited by thousands of people from different parts of the country and the world every day. The Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower, which can be seen from far away, is 468 metres tall. It's the tallest TV tower in Asia and the third tallest in the world. From the TV tower, we can get a clear view of the whole city. Its construction was started in 1991 and completed in 1994. Soon after that, it was opened to the public. Now it has become the centre of the culture, entertainment and tourism in the city of Shanghai. The Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower is the symbol of the rapid development of Pudong in recent years. We're all proud of it. [注释] ①construction n. 建设 ②symbol n. 象征 [评析] 本文对东方明珠电视塔的位置、高度、建造年代等做了详细的介绍，信息丰富，表达清 楚。 我最喜爱的月份 [题材] 写一篇 120 词左右的短文，告诉大家你最喜欢的月份，并说明原因。 [范文] My Favorite Month April is the month that I like best. It is the month that stirs the senses①. The weather in April is neither too hot nor too cold. The trees turn green again and there are flowers everywhere. The buds of March flowers are in full blossom② now and their fragrance③ fills the air. The birds are back from the south and sing happily all day. Everyone feels a sense of renewal. People can take off their heavy coats 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 - 5 - and put on their light jackets. Children, who have been kept in doors all winter, are playing outdoors not. Is there any wonder that April is my favorite month? [注释] ①stir the senses 使感觉敏锐起来 ②in (full) blossom 正在开花 ③fragrance 香气 [评析] 本文第一句为主题句。在展开主题时，作者是按一定的逻辑顺序来进行的。作者先描述 天气、树木等自然环境，继而描述自然环境中的人。在描述自然环境时，作者又是先描述天 气，进而具体到树木、花朵、小鸟等。文章结构清晰、条理分明。 4.描写场景 一场雷雨 [题材] 请描写一场雷暴雨。内容包括下雨前的乌云密布、狂风大作、风雨交加、电闪雷鸣等情 景。词数 150 左右。 [范文] A Thunder Storm Grey clouds gathered fast in the sky. The sky became black. The gathering clouds became thicker and blacker as they spread over our heads. Then suddenly came the wild wind. The wind became stronger and stronger. It turned up the fallen leaves, and bent down the trees. Distant thunder was heard and came nearer and nearer. Large drops of rain began to fall. Flashes of lightening lit up the sky. Now the rain poured down like sheets of water. Strong wind broke the trees. It blew and rained and blew and rained. 北京的夜市 [题材]请你根据以下内容写一篇短文。(字数：80 左右) 北京人喜欢夜市。北京人的夜市有几大特色。 a.食物可口好吃; b.食物丰富且价格便宜; c.年轻人可买到喜欢的时尚衣服; d.夜市的服务好，不要排队，而且主人们通常很友好。 参考词语 夜市 night market 可口的食物 delicious foods 时尚的 fashionable 受到好的服务 to receive a good service 排队 to wait in lines Night Markets in Beijing People in Beijing like night markets. There are all kinds of delicious foods there. At night market, young people can buy their favourite clothes. There're different kinds of clothes there, such as jeans, skirts and coats. They are very fashionable. At night market, people receive a good service, they do not have to wait in lines, and traders are usu