2019届高考英语作文名师指路模板07求助信 11页

‎07求助信 ‎ ‎ 模板①‎ Dear ______ ,‎ I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）. ‎ I look forward to a favorable reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Ming 模板②‎ Dear________,‎ ‎ My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).‎ Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).‎ I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 常用句型：‎ ‎（做某事有困难） ‎ ‎1.I have trouble in doing sth. ‎ ‎2.I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3.Doing sth is another terrible headache for me. l ‎ 常见困难： ‎ ‎【生活方面】 ‎ 与人相处 ‎ get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.‎ 和我的同学/新老师/父母相处 ‎ 把握时间 ‎ arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. ‎ 安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情 ‎ 明确目标 ‎ know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. ‎ 知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活 ‎ ‎【学习方面】 ‎ 不懂语法 ‎ have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.  ‎ 进步太慢 ‎ find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time. ‎ 精力有限 ‎ can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid. ‎ 典例 ‎ 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：‎ ‎1.对病人的简单介绍；‎ ‎2.目前的困难；‎ ‎3.希望得到捐助。‎ 联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear friends,‎ I’m very sad to tell you that_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】‎ 该写作根据要求可分为三部分来写，即先说明王强患病的情况，再简单介绍王强目前所处的困境，最后写出求助要求和帮助方式。可用第一人称写，时态可以一般现在时为主。‎ ‎【范文赏析】‎ Dear friends, ‎ I’m very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness "leukemia". He has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers, tried every means to save him.‎ Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.‎ So your help is badly needed. Let’s do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night.‎ Yours truly, ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【范文亮点】‎ 该范文结构合理，层次分明，语言表达地道，行文流畅。内容涵盖了所有的要点，运用了较多的高级语法结构和词汇，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句等。‎ Writting1‎ 假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张， 甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：‎ ‎1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；‎ ‎2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右， 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Charlie,‎ How are you getting along?‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ 假设你是学生李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：‎ ‎1.求助事由；‎ ‎2.求助内容；‎ ‎3.表达感激。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数120左右；‎ ‎2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Bob,‎ I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Bob,‎ I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. When it comes to papercutting, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction.‎ As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.‎ I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ Writing 3‎ 假如你叫李华，上高中快一年了，发现自己还是不能适应高中的学习生活。现在请你就目前的情况给自己初中时最信任的老师写一封求助信，信的重要内容如下：‎ ‎1.高中生活基本情况：‎ ‎( 1 )有9 门课程；‎ ‎( 2 )每天作业时间4—5小时，课外活动时间少；‎ ‎( 3 )睡眠时间不足，上课有时感到疲劳；‎ ‎( 4 )考试压力大，家长期望高。‎ ‎2.你目前遇到的最大问题以及现在的感受并希望得到建议。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.内容应包括以上所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2.词数120左右。信的开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇： 压力 pressure; 家长的高期望 high expectations from parents Dear Mr. Li,‎ I'm Li Hua. Do you remember me ?                                                                 _________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ All the best.‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua. Do you still remember me ? How are you now ? I am writing to you, asking for your help because I find I’m not very used to the senior high school life.‎ We have nine subjects which are more than I had in junior high school. Every day I have to spend four to five hours doing my homework, so there is little time left for after-school activities. I hardly have any time to do what I want. Besides, I sometimes feel sleepy in class because I don’t have enough sleep. The great pressure of exams and high expectations from my parents often make me even more tired.‎ The biggest problem I meet now is my maths, which is more difficult than that in junior high school. I don’t know how to improve it. So I hope I can get some advice from you.‎ ‎ All the best.‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院,目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant),需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：‎ ‎1.对病人的简单介绍；‎ ‎2.目前的困难；‎ ‎3.希望得到捐助。‎ 联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear friends,‎ I’m very sad to tell you that ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear friends, ‎ I’m very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness "leukemia". He has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers, tried every means to save him.‎ Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.‎ So your help is badly needed. Let’s do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night.‎ Yours truly,‎ Li Hua Writing 5‎ 假如你是李华。本期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教Chris的授课，‎ 你决定给她写一封求助信。内容包括：‎ ‎1.告诉她你的困难；‎ ‎2.求助的内容(推荐一些听力材料、周末和她练习口语等)；‎ ‎3.希望得到帮助。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Chris,‎ I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【必背范文】‎ Dear Chris,‎ I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.‎ You know, I come from a junior high school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. That is why I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find it really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listening ‎ materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time? I think it can help me improve my spoken English.‎ I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua