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写作规范练3
Ⅰ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校最近忙于准备期末考试,学习压力大,一些同学有时还会发脾气。请你为学校英语报写一份主题为“Manage your emotion”的面向全校同学的倡议书。
内容包括:1.学生现状;
2.倡议的意义;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear fellow students,
It worries me a lot to notice that lack of selfcare caused by academic pressure has greatly influenced the emotion of some students.
Emotion plays an important role in your mood and health every day.It is the basis of efficient studies and good relationship with others.Therefore, I strongly advocate the idea of “Manage your emotion”.To achieve the goal, let's learn to strike a balance between
study and rest by healthy eating, adequate rest, regular physical activities and necessary communication.
Every small step counts! However busy we are, remember to care for ourselves!
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In a class I teach for adults, I recently did something “unpardonable”.I gave the class homework! The assignment was to “go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them.It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time.” Now that doesn't sound like a very tough assignment, until you stop to realize that most of the men were over 35 and were raised in the generation of men that were taught that expressing emotions is not “macho (大男子气概的)”.Showing feelings or crying( heaven forbid!) was just not done.So this was a very threatening assignment for some.
At the beginning of our next class, I asked if someone wanted to share what happened when they told someone they loved them.I fully expected one of the women to volunteer, as was usually the case, but on this evening one of the men raised his hand.
He appeared quite moved and a bit shaken.As he unfolded out of his chair, he began by saying,“Dennis, I was quite angry with you last week when you gave us this assignment.I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to, and besides, who were you to tell me to do something that personal? But as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me.It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say I love you too.”
“You see, five years ago, my father and I had a severe disagreement and really never resolved it since that time.We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at Christmas or other family gatherings.But even then, we hardly spoke to each other.So last Tuesday by the time I got home I had convinced myself I was going to tell my dad I loved him.It's weird, but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest.”
“The next morning I was up bright and early.I was so excited that I could hardly sleep.I got to the office early and accomplished more in two hours than I had the whole day before.”
注意:1.所续写短文的词数为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下画线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下画线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
At 9:00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work.
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It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad. ____________
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【写作指导】
◆文章主线
已知线索:
任务—这些话—很长时间没有交流—艰难的任务—表达情感—生气—我爱你—严重的分歧—避免交流—我的父亲……
可续写线索:
生气?目的?改变主意?艰难的任务?我爱你?父亲的反应?去世?
◆续写词汇
已给提示词汇:
assignment,those words,a long time,tough,expressing emotions,angry with,I love you,a severe disagreement,spoke to each other,my dad
续写可能用到的词汇:
purpose,change my mind,carry out,come over,soften,hug,a heart attack,pass away,message,don't wait to do,what if...
[参考范文]
At 9:00 I called my dad to see if I could come over after work. My dad sounded still angry with me even after such a long time,but he finally agreed, not knowing my real purpose of this visit.At 5: 30, I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell, praying that Dad would answer the door.I was afraid if mum answered that I would change my mind and not carry out my tough assignment.But as luck would have it, Dad did answer the door.I didn't waste any time—I took one step in
the door and said, “Dad, I just came over to tell you that I love you.”
It was as if a dramatic change came over my dad.His face softened.The wrinkles seemed to disappear and he began to cry.He reached out and hugged me and said, “I love you too, son, but I've never been able to say it.” Two days after that visit, my dad had a heart attack and passed away.So my message to all of you is:Don't wait to do the things you need to do.What if I had waited to tell my dad?
Ⅲ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus (校园)like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms,classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away.
But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.
There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend. It can
save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It's a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and it won't cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at collegeweeklive.com. While visiting an online college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit,it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.
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To ensure a brilliant college life, you'd better spare time to visit campuses to examine all aspects of your dream colleges,even if it may be costly.(要点1)If you live nearby, be sure to check it out before you apply.(要点2)Even after submitting applications, a visit can help avoid much trouble.(要点3)However, visiting the online college fairs at collegeweeklive.com, if not possible to see for yourself for lack of time and money, will be beneficial.(要点4)
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