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2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练
[一]
Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady with deformed hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me about some money. She said I hadn’t eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we go shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don’t even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.
【答案】1.I see an old lady see-----saw2.At the first 去掉the
3.Find out that that改成what4.Asked me about some about 改成for
5.I hadn’t eaten I 改成she6.She happy went happy 改成happily
7.Without think twice think 改成 thinking8.In a few day day 改成days
9.People don’t even people 后加who或that10.I hope to spreading spreading 改成 spread
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文,昨天晚上作者去超市的时候帮助了一位老妇女,让作者意识到我们应该帮助那些需要帮助的人。
【详解】第一处:考查时态。句意:当我正要进去的时候,我看见了一个手部畸形的老妇人喊我。根据第一句时间状语yesterday evening可知本文叙述过去发生的事情,要用过去时。所以要把see改为saw。
第二处:考查固定短语。句意:起初的时候,我很害怕但我决定走过去看她想要什么。固定短语at first意为“起初”,在句中做时间状语。所以要删除定冠词the。
第三处:考查宾语从句。句意:起初的时候,我很害怕但我决定走过去看她想要什么。句中what引导宾语从句并在句中做动词want的宾语,that在宾语从句
中不做成分。所以要把that改为what。
第四处:考查动词短语。句意:她向我要了一些钱。动词短语ask sb for sth向某人要某物;所以要把about改为for。
第五处:考查代词。句意:她说她从早上开始就没有吃东西。宾语从句的主语应该使用she与主句she said保持一致,所以要把I改为she。
第六处:考查副词。我给了她一些钱,她很高兴地去买了食物。句中应该使用副词happily做状语修饰谓语动词went to a food stand and had her food,而形容词通常做状语修饰名词代词,所以要把happy改为happily。
第七处:考查动名词。介词的后面通常要接名词代词或动名词做宾语,句中的介词without后面接了动词原形,所以要把think改为thinking。
第八处:考查名词单复数。名词day是可数名词,前面的形容词短语a few通常修饰可数名词复数形式,所以要把day改为days。
第九处:考查定语从句。句意:然而,还有一些没钱吃饭的人。定语从句的先行词是people,关系代词who/that指代先行词,引导定语从句并在句中做主语。所以要在People后面加who/that。
第十处:考查不定式。句意:我希望用任何可能的方法向他们传达善意。动词短语hope to do sth希望做某事;所以要把spreading改为spread。
[二]
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happy I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.
参考答案:
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles, I hoped I
friends
could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only
one which
one hundred yuan. I asked my father ∧ the money. But he said he could
加for
only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So
I
I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if
去掉the when
I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other
later gave
fifty. You can imagine how happy I was when I rode to school by on my own bicycle.
[三]
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day that I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. If my friend had not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I decided to learn to swim. I didn’t attend to any training class but learned it all for myself. And now I have no difficulty swimming at all. Because the way I swim looks awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.
短文改错答案
1.extreme改为extremely 2. swim改为swam 3. that 改为when
4. nearby pond前加a 5.one改为it 6. had 改为have
7. to删掉 8. for改为by 9. Because改为Though或Although
10. satisfying 改为satisfied
[四]
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customer at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure
that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steadily.
短文改错答案
71. that →where 72. but去掉 73. customer→customers 74. had →have 75. honest→ honesty 76. or→ and 77. using →used 78. becoming前加of或about 79. the →a 80. our→ his
[五]
I often went for a morning walk because the nature is at her best in the morning. The best place I like to go is the park where is not far away my house. In the morning, I can breathe the fresh air, hear the birds singing, but enjoy the beautiful sunshine. For the whole day, I will feel happier and more relaxing. My morning walk protect me from illnesses and improves my healthy. In my opinion, the morning walk is too healthy that I can’t love them more.
[六]
Some students don't like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you get on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you're having dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you're interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
答案
Some students don't like talking their parents often if their parents love them very much. Are you on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very if you can be friends. Here are some to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you're having dinner, going out for walk watching TV. Tell them something you're interested in, or ask them about their lives when they young. They love to talk about past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be , and your parents will trust you more.
[七]
I live in Shijiazhuang, capital city of Hebei Province, which is not far from Beijing. Today is my first day at Senior High school and I’m writing down my thoughts about it. My new school is very good. In my new school, the new teachers are very enthusiastic and the classrooms are amazed. The English class is real interesting. Our English teacher is Ms. Shen, her methods of teaching are nothing like that of the teachers at Junior High school. I don’t think I would be bored in her class. Today we introduced us to each other. There are sixty-five students in my class. Forty-nine of us are girls. In other word, the girls are three times as many more as boys. Tonight’s homework is a description of the street where I live. I’m looking forward to write it.
改错答案
71. theΛcapital 72. amazing 73. really 74. andΛher/whose 75. those
76. will 77. ourselves 78. words 79. 去more 80. writing
[八]
My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills,so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English,he shook his head,says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV,playing cards,smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed,he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college!
短文改错答案:1.graduate 后加from 2.the改为a 3.advising改为advised
4. so改为but 5.says改为saying 6.word改为words
7.this改为these 8.great改为greatly 9.去掉what 10.has改为had
[九]
Boys and girls, attention , please ! I have anything to say. It’s a good news that our school is going to hold a party in Saturday evening to welcome our Canadian friends . The party will be interested. You can dance, listen to music, sing songs and playing games. Would you like bring a gift? Then you can send it to them. However, write a few words to express your best wish. Everyone are welcome.
I hope you will have a wonderfully time. That’s all . Thank you .
答案:1)anything 改为something,2) a去掉,in改为 on, 3)interested改为 interesting, playing改为 play,4) Like后加 to, However 该为besides, 5)wish改 wishes, Are改为 is, 6)wonderfully改为wonderful
[十]
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum(流浪汉)in
toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. Under the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.
短文改错答案
71.去掉so 72.her改为him 73.say改为said 74.in toilet 中间加the
75.passing改为passed 76.told前面加was 77. immediate加ly
78.or改为and 79. mile加复数 80.Under改为With
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