2020届外研版高考英语一轮复习选修7学案：Module6TheWoeldsCulturalHeritage 15页

‎(一)课前自主学习 Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意 ‎1．agenda n．　　　　　　　 (事项)待办；待讨论 ‎2．bid n. 投标；努力，争取 ‎3．compromise n. 折中；妥协_‎ ‎4．directory n. 名录；指南 ‎5．discrimination n. 歧视 ‎6．evolution n. 进化；演变 ‎7．inhabitant n. 居民 ‎8．mankind n. 人类 ‎9．monument n. 纪念碑；纪念馆 ‎10．primitive adj. (人类或动植物)原始的，原生的 ‎11．catastrophe n. 毁灭性的大灾难 ‎12．beast n. 野兽 Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形 ‎1．fund n. 基金；专款 ‎2._guidance_n. 指导，引导，咨询 ‎3．honour v. 给予荣誉 ‎4．list v. (按某次序)把……列表，列清单 ‎5．maintain v．[纵联1] 保持；维持；保养 ‎6．status n. 法律地位 ‎7．undertake v. 许诺做某事；同意做某事 ‎8._subjective adj. 主观的 ‎9．thorough adj. 彻底的；全面的；详尽的 ‎10．sharpen_v. 使变锋利 ‎11．request n．[纵联2] 请求；要求 ‎12．enlarge v. (使)增大；(使)扩大 Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变 ‎1．preserve v．保护；保存→preservation n．保护；保存 ‎2．agreement n．协议→agree v．同意，答应→disagree v．不赞同→disagreement n．争论；不一致；不同意 [纵联3]‎ ‎3．invest v．投资→investment n．投资→investor n．投资者 ‎4．remains n．遗迹；遗体→remain v．仍然，有待→remaining adj.剩余的 ‎5．existence n．存在→exist_v．存在→existing adj.现存的；存在的 ‎6．exposure n．暴露；显露→expose v．使暴露→exposed adj.暴露的 [纵联4]‎ ‎7．contribute v．促成；捐助；贡献→contribution n．捐助；贡献→contributor n．撰稿者；捐助者 ‎8．awareness n．意识；认识；感悟能力→aware adj.意识到的；知道的 ‎9．propose v．建议；提议→proposal n．建议；提议 ‎10．absence n．缺乏；没有；缺席→absent adj.不在的，缺席的，缺乏的 ‎11．ignore v．忽视；不理；不管→ignorance n．无知；愚昧→ignorant adj.愚昧的；无知的 [纵联5]‎ ‎12．assistance n．帮助，援助→assist v．帮助→assistant n．助手，助理 ‎13．mercy n．任凭……的摆布→merciful adj.仁慈的；宽容的→merciless adj.残忍的；没有慈悲之心的 纵联1.“保持，维持”是关键 ‎①maintain保持，维持　　　　 ②hold保存，持有 ‎③remain保持，残存 ④preserve维持，保护 ‎⑤keep保持，保留 ⑥stay保持，停留 纵联2.“要求”知多少 ‎①request要求；请求 ②insist坚决要求 ‎③demand要求；需求 ④require要求，需要 纵联3.名词后缀ment面面观 ‎①agreement协议 ②movement运动 ‎③management管理 ④establishment建立，设立 ‎⑤development发展 ⑥advertisement广告 ‎⑦assignment分配，指派 ⑧statement陈述；说明 纵联4.名词后缀ure集合 ‎①exposure暴露 ②pleasure愉快 ‎③pressure压力 ④departure分离 ‎⑤failure失败 ⑥procedure程序；步骤 ‎⑦sculpture雕刻 ⑧closure关闭，结束 纵联5.“忽视，忽略”动词小结 ‎①ignore忽视；不理 ②neglect忽略，忽视 ‎③overlook忽视，忽略 单元话题——世界文化遗产 子话题1　物质文化遗产 ‎①sculpture n．雕塑；雕刻；雕像 ②statue n．塑像；雕像 ‎③construct vt.建设；建筑 ④remains n．遗迹 ‎⑤splendid adj.辉煌的；壮丽的 ⑥gallery n．画廊；美术馆 ‎⑦exhibition n．展览；展览会 ⑧historical adj.史学的 子话题2　非物质文化遗产 ‎①myth n．神话 ②legend n．传说；传奇故事 ‎③origin n．起源；由来 ④masterpiece n．杰作 ‎⑤Beijing opera京剧 ⑥papercutting n．剪纸 ‎⑦nonmaterial cultural heritage非物质文化遗产 ‎[学考对接·活学活用]‎ 高考采撷(一)　阅读中的词汇应用 ‎1．(2018·天津高考阅读D)If your awareness❶ is as sharp❷ as it could be, you'll have no trouble answering these questions.‎ ‎①写出awareness在句中的含义：意识；其形容词形式为：aware ‎②sharp在本单元的动词形式是：sharpen；其名词形式为：sharpness ‎2．(2017·北京高考阅读D)A machine with a specific purpose has another quality, one that we usually associate with living things: a wish to preserve❶ its own 　❷　 (exist)．‎ ‎①preserve在句中的含义为：__B__‎ A．预定　 B．保存　　C．坚持　　D．贮存 ‎②用exist的正确形式填空：existence 高考采撷(二)　写作中的词汇应用 ‎(根据汉语及提示词补全句子)‎ ‎1．(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)在周六上午9点至11点新成员将接受额外的指导。(guidance)‎ New members will_receive_extra_guidance on Saturday mornings from 9：00 am to ‎ 11：00 am.‎ ‎2．(2015·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)如果你想给我们报纸投稿，请在最后期限前把文章寄给我。(contribute)‎ If you want to contribute_to_our_newspaper,_please send me your article before the deadline.‎ ‎3．(2011·陕西高考书面表达)尽管高分在评价学生和他们未来的大学录取方面是一项重要的因素，但才智、精神、健康的发展，以及生活态度不应该被忽视。(ignore)‎ Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude_should_never_be_ignored.‎ ‎(二)课堂重点释疑 ‎1．remains n．遗迹；遗体；剩余物 ‎[记牢]‎ ‎(1)the remains of ...　　 ……的遗迹 ‎(2)remain v. 保持；依然；留下 remain＋ 形容词/名词/分词/介词短语 ‎ 仍然是 remain to be done 有待于……‎ ‎(3)remaining adj. 剩余的(只作前置定语)‎ ‎[练通]‎ 单句语法填空 ‎①It remains_to_be_seen (see) whether the news that a new library will be built in our school is true.‎ ‎②The guests came in, but she remained seated (seat) at the desk reading.‎ 补全句子 ‎③It_remains_unknown how users' data will be taken advantage of.‎ 用户的数据是如何被利用的仍然不明。 ‎ ‎④He bought a new pen with the_remaining_money.‎ 他用剩下的钱买了一支新钢笔。‎ ‎[用准]　remain可用作不及物动词或系动词，意为“剩下；逗留，保持；仍然”。用作系动词时，后接名词、形容词、介词短语、v.ing形式、v.ed形式等作表语。‎ ‎[写美]　翻译句子 ‎⑤(2014·安徽高考书面表达)第三；对你的未来保持乐观。‎ And_third,_remain_optimistic_about_your_future.‎ ‎2．contribute v．促成，有助于；捐助；贡献；投稿 ‎[记牢]‎ ‎(1)contribute to　　　　　 有助于；投稿；为……做贡献 contribute ...to/towards ... 向……捐赠；向……投稿 ‎(2)contribution n. 贡献；捐献；捐助 make contributions/a contribution to ... 为……做贡献 ‎[练通]‎ 单句语法填空 ‎①(2017·江苏高考)Located where the Belt meets the Road, Jiangsu will contribute more to the Belt and Road construction.‎ ‎②The scientist was rewarded by the government for having made such a great contribution (contribute) to the country.‎ 补全句子 ‎③More and more carbon dioxide is being released into the air, contributing_to_the_more_severe_global_warming_effects.‎ 越来越多的二氧化碳释放到空气中，导致更严重的全球变暖效应。‎ ‎[用准]　contribute to和make a contribution/contributions to中的to都为介词，后要接名词、代词或动名词。‎ ‎[写美]　翻译句子 ‎④(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)这部电影主要与我们学校的发展相关，它将极大地帮助我们学生更好地了解学校的历史，呼吁我们为学校的发展做出贡献。‎ The film is mainly related to the development of our school, which will greatly help us students know the school's history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our school's development.‎ ‎3．recommend v．建议；推荐 ‎[记牢]‎ 　　向某人推荐某物 recommend sb. as 推荐某人担任……‎ ‎(2)recommend sb. to do sth. 建议/劝某人做某事 recommend doing sth. 建议做某事 recommend that ... (should) do ... 建议……(应该)做……‎ ‎(3)recommendation n. 建议；推荐 ‎[练通]‎ 单句语法填空 ‎①The doctor strongly recommended limiting (limit) the amount of fat in my diet.‎ ‎②We recommend that you (should)_purchase (purchase) travel insurance on all holidays.‎ ‎③He recommended the young man to our firm, and it is because of his recommendation (recommend) that we have an excellent worker now.‎ 补全句子 ‎④I would like to recommend_Li_Hua_to_be/as the leader of the basketball club.‎ 我想推荐李华为篮球俱乐部的领导人。‎ ‎⑤I recommend_you_to_do as what he says.‎ 我劝你照他说的去做。‎ ‎[用准]　(1)recommend“推荐”，宾语可以是人或物；introduce“介绍”，宾语只能是人。‎ ‎(2)recommend的名词形式为recommendation，当它表示“建议，提议”时，其后的同位语从句、表语从句等要用虚拟语气，即从句谓语形式为“(should＋)动词原形”，有类似用法的名词还有proposal, suggestion, advice等。‎ ‎[写美]　翻译句子 ‎⑥(2017·北京高考书面表达)“长江之行”和“泰山之旅”这两条线路都得到大力推荐。‎ Of_the_two_trips_to_the_Yangtze_River_and_Mount_Tai,_both_are_highly_recommended.‎ ‎4．ignore v．忽视；不理；不管 ‎[记牢]‎ ‎(1)ignorant adj.　　　　　 不了解的，无知的 be ignorant of 不知道……‎ ‎(2)ignorance n. 无知 in ignorance of ... 对……不知道 ‎[练通]　单句语法填空 ‎①I was walking near to wave, but he stood there, ignoring (ignore) me.‎ ‎②Most people there received so little education that they were_ignorant_(ignore) of the law.‎ ‎③Some people always do everything they like, but are in ignorance (ignore) of others' feelings.‎ ‎[用准]　ignore为及物动词，意为“不予理睬，对……不予理会；忽视”，与neglect同义。其宾语常为sb.'s/one's advice/one's mistakes/traffic rules等。‎ ‎[写美]　补全句子 ‎④这篇文章讲述了今天很多人对他们的工作缺乏热情并忽视日常工作的重要性。‎ The passage states that nowadays a large number of people are not enthusiastic for their work and ignore_the_importance_of_ordinary_jobs.‎ ‎[词汇过关综合训练]　‎ Ⅰ.单词拼写 ‎1．What's more, the construction of harmony between mankind(人类) and nature is also important.‎ ‎2．Ms Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance (指导)．‎ ‎3．I am so honoured (荣幸) to be here today with all of you to talk about the mutual help.‎ ‎4．My hobbies help me maintain (保持) a mental and physical balance and make my life colorful!‎ ‎5．You should make thorough plans before you undertake (同意做某事) a camping trip.‎ ‎6．Teachers often tell us to try to avoid being subjective (主观的) and onesided when looking at problems.‎ ‎7．We gave our classroom a thorough (彻底的) cleaning before the National Day.‎ ‎8．Tom found his sharpener was missing when he wanted to sharpen (削尖) his pencil.‎ Ⅱ.单句语法填空 ‎1．Nobody is allowed to be absent (absence) from the training or be late for it.‎ ‎2．Knowledge makes humble while ignorance (ignore) makes proud.‎ ‎3．As the saying goes, “Fire and water show no mercy (merciful) to anyone”．‎ ‎4．Up to now, there are many agreements (agree) that have been reached.‎ ‎5．As we all know, it is a good idea to be exposed (expose) to the real language environment.‎ ‎6．I would make an effort to participate in such activities in the remaining (remain) years of my senior high school.‎ ‎7．The only existing (exist) problem is whether we can find this special wood in the forest in such a short time.‎ ‎8．I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance (assist) in my English learning.‎ ‎9．Modesty and opportunity are the contributing (contribute) factors for the girl's success in her career.‎ ‎10．At the school opening ceremony, our headmaster required us students to raise our competitive awareness (aware) in modern society.‎ Ⅲ.根据提示补全句子 ‎1．总之，人人都应该为节约用水做出贡献。(contribute)‎ In a word, everyone should make_contributions/a_contribution_to/contribute_to_saving_water.‎ ‎2．但是我强烈建议父母多关心他们的孩子。(recommend)‎ But I strongly_recommend_that_parents_should_care_much_about their children.‎ ‎3．被忽视了许多年后，这位小说家突然出名了。(ignore)‎ Having_been_ignored_for_many_years,_the novelist suddenly became famous.‎ ‎4．过多地暴露在阳光下对人的皮肤是有害的。(expose)‎ Being_exposed_to_sunlight for too much time will do harm to one's skin.‎ ‎5．我们已经采取了有效措施保护我们的文化遗产。(preserve)‎ We have taken effective measures to_preserve_our_cultural_relics.‎ ‎(一)课前自主学习 ‎1．of_vital_importance　　　　　 至关重要 ‎2．apart_from [串记1] 除……之外 ‎3．go_through 获准，经过程序；经历(受)‎ ‎4．remind_sb.of_sth. 使某人想起……‎ ‎5．contribute_to [串记2] 导致；有助于 ‎6．in_return 反过来；作为回报 ‎7．be_honoured_for_ 因……而受到尊敬 ‎8．at_the_mercy_of_... [串记3] 受……支配；任由……摆布 ‎9．in_case 倘若；以防万一 ‎10．get_involved_in 参与；卷入 ‎[同根短语串记]‎ 串记1.“除……之外”大集合 ‎①apart from ②except for ‎③other than ④aside from ‎⑤in addition to 串记2.“引起；导致”有因有果 ‎①contribute to 导致；有助于 ‎②lead to 引起；导致；造成 ‎③result in 导致；造成 ‎④bring about 引起；导致；造成 ‎⑤cause 引起；造成 ‎⑥result from 起因于 串记3.“at the＋n.＋of”短语一览 ‎①at the mercy of 受……支配 ‎②at the risk of 冒……的危险 ‎③at the mention of 一提到 ‎④at the cost of 以……为代价 ‎⑤at the age of 在……几岁时 ‎⑥at the rate of 以……的比例 ‎⑦at the sight of 一看到 ‎1．remove from　　　　　 　 从……移开 ‎2．for certain 确定地，确切地 ‎3．act as 充当 ‎4．cause/do damage to 对……造成伤害 ‎5．agree on 就……达成一致；取得一致意见 ‎6．in danger 处于危险中 ‎7．be listed as 被列为……‎ ‎1．Some areas are almost completely covered in weeds, causing_serious_damage.‎ 不少地方杂草丛生，破败不堪。‎ ‎2．The_site_is_extremely_expensive_to_maintain and it will cost between three and five million yuan to repair it.‎ 这个遗址保护起来是极其昂贵的，对其进行修缮要花费三百万到五百万元。‎ ‎3．They are a precious part of our cultural heritage — it_is_of_vital_importance_that_we_do_something.‎ 它们是我们文化遗产中极其宝贵的部分——因此我们采取行动就显得尤其重要。‎ ‎[学考对接·活学活用]‎ 高考采撷(一)　完形中的短语(补全句子)‎ ‎1．(2017·北京高考完形填空)She began to host “Big Bosses” lunches, where she would try to persuade local business leaders to contribute_to (为……做贡献) the cause.‎ ‎2．(2014·重庆高考完形填空)Ahmed reminded_me_of (使我想到) the abundant kindness in the world.‎ 高考采撷(二)　写作中的短语和句式(补全句子/翻译句子)‎ ‎1．(2018·天津高考书面表达)这个训练计划除了定期训练外，还包括参加各种活动。‎ The training schedule, apart_from_regular_training,_includes joining in a variety of activities.‎ ‎2．(2015·四川高考书面表达)作为回报我希望你能帮我学英语口语。‎ In_return_I_hope_you_can_help_me_with_my_spoken_English.‎ ‎3．(2017·北京高考书面表达)我很高兴得知你们将访问中国。(be＋adj.＋不定式)‎ I_am_pleased_to_learn_that_you_will_pay_a_visit_to_China.‎ ‎4．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)你了解唐朝基本历史至关重要，这将肯定对你有很大帮助。(be of＋抽象名词)‎ It is_of_vital_importance_that you learn about the general history of Tang Dynasty，which will be surely of great help to you.‎ ‎(二)课堂重点释疑 ‎[短语集释]‎ ‎1．apart from除了……之外(还有/别无)……‎ ‎[记牢]‎ take ... apart　　　　　　 将……拆开，拆分 tell ... apart 分辨出……‎ fall apart 破裂；断裂；散开 set sb.apart 使某人与众不同 ‎[练通]　用上述短语填空 ‎①Apart_from good service, the restaurant offers different kinds of traditional Fujian dishes.‎ ‎②He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town.‎ ‎③Rod loves taking clocks apart. However, he never manages to put them together again.‎ ‎④You can tell my twins brother and me apart by this mark on my face.‎ ‎[用准]　apart from作“除……以外”讲时，既可以表示“包括”之意，相当于besides；也可以表示“不包括”之意，相当于except；还可以表示说明整个基本情况后，对细节加以纠正，相当于except for。‎ ‎[写美]　补全句子 ‎⑤(2017·天津高考书面表达)除了我的学科学习之外，我还总是设法找时间学习我所感兴趣的东西。‎ Apart_from_my_academic_studies,_I always manage to find time for what I'm interested in.‎ ‎2．remind sb. of sth.使某人想起……‎ ‎[记牢]‎ remind sb. to do sth.　　　　　　　　提醒某人做某事 remind (sb.) that/how/what从句 ... 提醒(某人)……‎ ‎[练通]　单句语法填空 ‎①Passengers are_reminded (remind) that no smoking is allowed on this train.‎ ‎②Reminded not_to_drive (drive) after drinking, some drivers are still trying their luck, which is really dangerous. ‎ ‎[写美]　补全句子 ‎③(2015·广东高考写作)这个结果有助于你预测一些重大疾病和食物偏好，并提示你合适的锻炼方式。‎ The result will help to predict some major and severe diseases and your preference for diet and remind_you_of_suitable_ways_to_exercise.‎ ‎[联想]　其他“v.＋sb.of sth.”结构的短语还有：‎ ‎①inform sb. of sth. 　　　　 通知某人某事 ‎②rob sb. of sth. 抢劫某人某物 ‎③accuse sb. of sth. 控告某人某事 ‎④warn sb. of sth. 警告某人某事 ‎⑤cure sb. of sth. 治愈某人某病 ‎⑥convince sb. of sth. 使某人相信某事 ‎[句式集释]‎ ‎“be＋of＋n.”结构 ‎[教材原句]　They are a precious part of our cultural heritage — it is_of_vital_importance that we do something.‎ ‎[悟拓展例句]‎ ‎(1)His opinion is considered to be of great value.‎ ‎→His opinion is considered to_be_greatly_valuable.‎ ‎(2)The two ropes are_of_the_same_length.‎ 这两根绳子的长度是一样的。‎ ‎(3)She is looking for some girls of_an/the_same_age.‎ 她在寻找一些同岁的小女孩。‎ ‎[析用法规则]‎ 用法归纳 ‎(1)“be of＋表示抽象意义的名词”相当于“be＋该抽象名词相对应的形容词”，如value, use, help, importance, significance等。‎ ‎(2)“be of＋表示人或物属性的名词”，如size, color, height, length, age, shape等。用来描述人或事物的属性，在句中作表语或后置定语。‎ 注意事项 在“be of＋表示抽象意义的名词”结构中，该名词前面可以用表程度的词加以修饰，如little，no，great，much，some等。‎ ‎[背写作佳句]‎ ‎(1)(2015·四川高考)Mothers' labour is of a higher value than it is realised.(要点句)‎ ‎(2)Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help.(要点句)‎ ‎[词块、句式过关综合训练]　‎ Ⅰ.选词填空 apart from， go through， in return， contribute to， remind sb. of sth.， at the mercy of， be honoured for， get involved in ‎1．I buried myself in my studies. In_return,_I gained great success.‎ ‎2．You'll be in charge of your life instead of feeling at the mercy of it! ‎ ‎3．Apart_from confirming the date, you are supposed to sign your name on the paper.‎ ‎4．It is thought that motivation is the leading factor contributing_to language learning.‎ ‎5．We went_through a period when communications were very difficult in the countryside.‎ ‎6．She will be_honoured_for her work in promoting friendship between the two countries.‎ ‎7．More than 30 software firms got_involved_in the project.‎ ‎8．He was watching a film when the scene_reminded_him_of what he had experienced in France.‎ Ⅱ.根据提示补全句子 ‎1．他的作品在中国各地的美术馆展出，这使他闻名全国。(现在分词作结果状语)‎ His works were exhibited in art galleries all over China, making him famous nationwide.‎ ‎2．有了这个垫子，椅子坐上去舒服多了。(主语＋be＋adj.＋不定式)‎ With this cushion, the_chair_is_comfortable_to_sit_on.‎ ‎3．已经决定，学校运动会推迟到下周六举行。(it作形式主语)‎ It_has_been_decided_that_the school sports meet should be put off till next Saturday.‎ ‎4．我刚刚发现那天下午的班会对我来说非常重要。(be of＋抽象名词) ‎ I have just found that the class meeting that afternoon is of_great_importance_to_me.‎ Ⅲ.分步写作 假定你是李华，你的美国好友Jim对中国很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件简要介绍一下中华民族、中国的文化遗产现状和人们的遗产保护意识，并给他推荐一些可以参观的历史古迹和景观。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim，‎ How is everything going? I'm glad to introduce you something about Chinese cultural heritage.‎ ‎ 　 　 　 　 ‎ ‎ 　 　 　 　 ‎ ‎ 　 　 　 　 ‎ ‎ 　 　 　 　 ‎ ‎ 　 　 　 　 ‎ Hoping my introduction is helpful！Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 第一步：准确审题，理行文脉络，拟写作要点 本文是应用文中的推荐信。时态是一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称。根据题目要求可以概括成三个写作要点：要点1介绍中华民族及中国的文化遗产现状；要点2给好友推荐一些可以参观的重点历史古迹和景观，如北京和西安的历史古迹，杭州西湖，桂林山水，云南少数民族风情等；要点3说明人们的遗产保护意识。这三个要点都可以放在第二段中；首段要写明写信的原因(已给出)；尾段提出希望或祝愿(已给出)。这样写文显得思路清晰，层次分明。‎ 要点1－①：中华民族是一个勤劳智慧的民族。(intelligent)‎ The_Chinese_nation_is_a_hardworking_and_intelligent_people.‎ 要点1－②：说到中国的文化遗产，有一些被保护得很好。(remain, preserve)‎ Referring_to_the_Chinese_cultural_heritage,_some_of_them_are_preserved_very_well.‎ 要点2－①‎ ‎：我推荐你先去北京和西安看一看，那儿有许多历史古迹值得参观。(recommend, historic)‎ I_recommend_you_first_to_visit_Beijing_and_Xi'an,_where_many_historic_sites_are_worth_visiting.‎ 要点2－②：除了这些历史文化遗产外，杭州西湖的美景、桂林景观也不容忽视。‎ Apart from the historical and cultural heritage, the beauty of West Lake in Hangzhou and Guilin Scenery cannot be ignored.‎ 要点2－③：云南省的一些村寨仍然保持着淳朴的民风。‎ Some_villages_in_Yunnan_Province_still_remain_simple_folk_customs.‎ 要点3：人们已经意识到与自然和谐相处至关重要。(be of＋抽象名词)‎ People_have_realized_that_living_harmoniously_with_nature_is_of_vital_importance.‎ 第二步：添加细节，文意更丰满，表达更亮眼 题目中的写作内容略显简略，为了进一步丰富文章内容，可以对要点进行适当拓展。要点1－①可以添加定语从句，点明中华民族对世界文明的贡献；要点2－①可以增加一个条件状语“如果你有机会来中国旅行”；要点2－③可以增加参观时可能有的感受；要点3可以使用独立主格结构来说明人们产生这种意识的原因。‎ 拓展要点1－①：中华民族是一个勤劳智慧的民族，为世界文明做出了巨大贡献。(用who引导的定语从句)‎ The_Chinese_nation_is_a_hardworking_and_intelligent_people_who_has_made_great_contributions_to_the_world_civilization.‎ 拓展要点2－①：如果你有机会来中国旅行，我建议你先去北京和西安看一看，那儿有许多历史古迹值得参观。(用if引导的条件状语从句)‎ If_you_have_a_chance_to_travel_to_China,_I_recommend_you_first_to_visit_Beijing_and_Xi'an,_where_many_historic_sites_are_worth_visiting.‎ 拓展要点2－③：云南省的一些村寨仍然保持着淳朴的民风，置身其中，会让你想起往昔美好的岁月。(介词＋关系代词引导的定语从句)‎ Some_villages_in_Yunnan_Province_still_remain_simple_folk_customs,_inside_which_you_will_be_reminded_of_the_good_old_days.‎ 拓展要点3：由于到处都在倡导新的生活方式，人们已经意识到与自然和谐相处至关重要。(独立主格结构)‎ A_new_way_of_life_being_advocated_here_and_there,_people_have_realized_that_living_harmoniously_with_nature_is_of_vital_importance.‎ 第三步：连句成文，排语句顺序，重衔接过渡 本文可采用“总—分”‎ 结构组织全文。由于要点句子内部使用了大量的状语和状语从句，所以句子间的逻辑关系按照要点的叙述顺序进行排列即可。要点3可以用nowadays把人们的遗产保护意识和前文衔接起来。‎ Dear Jim，‎ How is everything going? I'm glad to introduce you something about Chinese cultural heritage.‎ The_Chinese_nation_is_a_hardworking_and_intelligent_people_who_has_made_great_contributions_to_the_world_civilization._Referring_to_the_Chinese_cultural_heritage,_some_of_them_are_preserved_very_well._If_you_have_a_chance_to_travel_to_China,_I_recommend_you_first_to_visit_Beijing_and_Xi'an,_where_many_historic_sites_are_worth_visiting._Apart_from_the_historical_and_cultural_heritage,_the_beauty_of_West_Lake_in_Hangzhou_and_Guilin_Scenery_cannot_be_ignored._Some_villages_in_Yunnan_Province_still_remain_simple_folk_customs,_inside_which_you_will_be_reminded_of_the_good_old_days._Nowadays,_a_new_way_of_life_being_advocated_here_and_there,_people_have_realized_that_living_harmoniously_with_nature_is_of_vital_importance.‎ Hoping my introduction is helpful! Best wishes! ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua