【英语】2019届人教版高考一轮复习之作文专题：循序写作4 3页

第四周　整齐和谐的并列句 并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。‎ 一、常见并列句的类型及并列连词 类型 连词 并列关系(递进关系)‎ and, both ... and ..., not only ... but also ..., neither ... nor ...‎ 转折关系 but, yet, whereas 选择关系 or, otherwise, or else, either ... or ..., not ... but ...‎ 因果关系 for, so, therefore, thus 对比关系 while ‎①(2018·上海高考写作)Dedicated teachers are most popular among students not only because of their outstanding professional knowledge but also because of their devotion to the career of teaching.‎ 敬业的老师们受欢迎不仅仅是因为他们出色的专业水平，还因为他们对教育事业的奉献。‎ ‎②(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)The team will hold a range of activities, and some worldfamous players will be invited to give lessons.‎ 球队将举行一系列活动，一些世界著名的球员会被邀请来上课。‎ ‎③(2016·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.‎ 我知道你拍照好，并且总是想着为环境保护做些事情。‎ ‎[即时演练]　用适当的并列连词填空 ‎1．(2017·浙江高考读后续写)Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay.‎ ‎2．(2017·北京高考书面表达)You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.‎ ‎3．(2016·江苏高考作文)It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.‎ 二、并列句的常用句型 ‎1．both ...and ...既……又……‎ When exposed to stress, in whatever form, all of us react both mentally and physically.‎ 当面临压力时，不管以什么形式，我们所有的人都会从精神和身体上作出反应。‎ ‎2．either ...or ...或者……或者……；不是……就是……‎ ‎(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)If you're interested in it, you may either send an email to 12345@sina.com or sign up in person.‎ 如果你感兴趣，可以发送电子邮件至12345@sina.com或亲自报名。‎ ‎3．neither ...nor ...既不……也不……‎ In autumn, it's neither too hot nor too cold.‎ 秋天，天气既不太热也不太冷。‎ ‎4．not only ...but (also) ...不仅……而且……‎ ‎(2018·浙江6月高考写作)Firstly, not only can I speak fluent English, but also I have little difficulty communicating ‎ with foreigners.‎ 首先，我不仅能说一口流利的英语，而且和外国人交流也毫无困难。‎ ‎5．not ...but ...不是……，而是……‎ It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.‎ 对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进我们所做的工作中去。‎ ‎6．...while/whereas ……而，……却 Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful to reduce working pressure.‎ 有些人认为吸烟有害健康，而另一些人则认为它有助于减轻工作压力。‎ ‎7．祈使句/名词词组＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句 ‎(1)祈使句＋and＋陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)‎ Work hard and you will succeed.(＝ If you work hard, you will succeed.)‎ 努力学习，你就会成功。‎ ‎(2)名词词组＋and＋陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句，其中常含有more, another等词)‎ Another try, and you'll achieve success.‎ 再试一次，你就会取得成功。‎ ‎(3)祈使句＋or/otherwise＋陈述句 Seize the chance, or you'll regret.‎ 抓住这次机会，否则你会后悔的。‎ ‎(4)名词词组＋or/otherwise＋陈述句 More healthy food, or you'll break down sooner or later.‎ 多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。‎ ‎8．...when ...……这时……‎ ‎(1)sb. was doing sth. when ...某人正在做某事，这时……‎ ‎(2016·北京高考)Jack was working in the lab when the power cut occurred.‎ 杰克正在实验室里工作，这时突然停电了。‎ ‎(2)sb. was about to do sth. when ...某人正要做某事，这时……‎ Lily was about to study when someone knocked at the door. ‎ 莉莉正要学习，这时有人敲门。‎ ‎(3)sb. had just done sth. when ...某人刚做完某事，这时……‎ I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.‎ 我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。‎ ‎[即时演练]　用并列句补全句子 ‎1．他刚要走这时突然有人敲门。‎ He was on the point of leaving when_someone_knocked_at_the_door.‎ ‎2．正像我们所知道的，生气不仅有害健康，而且还严重影响人们之间的关系。‎ As we know, getting angry not_only does harm to one's health but_(also) has a bad effect on the relationship between people.‎ ‎3．是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。‎ It is not_what_you_had_done_but what you had said that annoyed your classmates.‎ ‎[综合演练提能]‎ Ⅰ.用适当的并列连词填空 ‎1.(2018·北京高考书面表达)First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.‎ ‎2．(2018·天津高考书面表达)I know you once participated in the Robotics Competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.‎ ‎3．I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing it, but I failed to pass the midterm examination.‎ ‎4．About 9：00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow's test when loud noises came into my room.‎ ‎5．Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.‎ ‎6．Not_only can students improve their writing ability in this way but_(also) they can strengthen their selfconfidence.‎ Ⅱ.用并列句补全句子 ‎1．首先，作为一名学生，最重要的是学习，因此，你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有效的方法。‎ Firstly, as a student, the most important thing is to study, so_it_is_necessary for all of you to build an effective method in your study.‎ ‎2．我们正打算动身，突然天下起雨来了。‎ We were_about_to_set_off_when it began to rain.‎ ‎3．找方法经常表扬你的孩子，你就会发现他们会向你敞开心扉。‎ Find_ways_to_praise_your_children_often,and you'll find they will open their hearts to you.‎ ‎4．它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。‎ It not_only_gave_us_a_chance_to_get_close_to_nature,_but also gave us relaxation from our study.‎ ‎5．因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。‎ So, from now on, let's not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.‎ Ⅲ.请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句。‎ 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。现在请根据以下要点给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件：‎ ‎1．未及时回复的原因；‎ ‎2．你暑假里的打算。‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Tom，‎ I've been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.‎ To start with, doing a parttime job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman. Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will help me make a great contribution to the society, and enrich my life.‎ By the way, what's your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua