高考英语写作之建议信 3页

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 1 高考英语写作之建议信 建议信的正文一般分三部分： 1.首先表明写作意图；（必要时自我介绍） 2.然后写出具体建议及理由，要注意语气诚恳、委婉； 3.最后礼貌地表达希望建议被采纳的愿望。 开头套句： 1. I am delighted to receive your letter. / I am very pleased to hear from you. 2. From your letter I learned that you have some difficulty in learning mathematics. I am writing to give you some advice about it. 3. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on ... 4. Thank you for your letter asking me about studying in Australia. 巧用过渡句 Here are my suggestions. My suggestions are as follows. Here, I will share with you my suggestions. I will try to make some constructive suggestions. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on ... 主体：提出建议并阐述理由。 You’d better do … = You may/ might as well do sth… Why not do sth.? What/How about doing sth.? It is advisable to do…. It's even better if you could… I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... In my opinion, it would be wise to do ... It is high time that …did/ should do… / It is time to do … (When it comes to such a situation,) I would like to suggest that... (As for ..., )I suggest that you should ... If I were you, I would ... In my opinion… From my point of view… 巧用祈使句 1． 祈使句 Be ready to help others. / Have faith in yourself. 2． 祈使句 + 陈述句 Build up your confidence and you will benefit from it. Be easy-going and you’ll be popular with your friends. 结尾套语 1. In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. 2. I do hope you will find these suggestions practical / useful / helpful. 3. I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 2 过渡词 , , , , , Not only… but also 参考范文 Hi，Grown-up， As a student of your age，I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions. First ， it's advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better. There are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things. Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a “Grownup．It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking. Yours， Li Hua Dear Li Ming, It is a great chance to visit England. Just take the following points into account and you will find your vacation comfortable. First, you should adapt yourself to the basic rules of British traffic, such as driving and walking on the left. Besides, you’d better get into the habit of bringing an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Second, please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Also, remember to keep some distance when talking with British people since they don’t like to be too close to others. Third, every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend, you’d better make an appointment ahead of time. By the way, it is a good thing to bring a small gift. Last but not least, it is very impolite to ask questions about one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding. Have a good time. Yours sincerely. Jack Darwin 表转折 However/ but / while/ on the contrary/ on the other hand 表因果关系 therefore, / so, / thus,/ as a result, 表解释说明 that is, / that is to say, / in other words, / such as, / for instance, / and so on,/ etc. / 表时间顺序 meanwhile,/ at the beginning, / at first / in the end, / then, / later, the moment/ the minute / the instant/ immediately/ instantly / as soon as, 表递进关系 Firstly, Secondly,… Finally To begin with Besides, What’s more First of all In addition Moreover What’s worse,/ worse still Not only… but also 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 3 Dear Peter， I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, so you'll be able to learn from the teacher or practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever it is possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you will learn and remember Chinese words easier. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot of about China and help you learn Chinese. Please write to me in Chinese next time. Yours. Li Hua