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2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之九
[一]
Of all the teachers in my primary school, the one which impressed me most was Mrs. Huang. She was my 5th grade teacher. She was able to making learning fun and I liked her classes very much. Beside, she made me leader of many group project, which gave me confidence. It was with her help that I soon became top student in our class. Looking back on it, I’m very proud for having such an excellent teacher. The reason why I did so good was that she made me to feel confident, I am really grateful to her and I hoped one day I will become a teacher like him.
参考答案:
1.which →who/that. 2.making→make 3. Besides 4.project→ projects
5.∧a /the 6. for→ of 7.good→ well
8.to feel→feel 9.hoped→ hope 10. him- her
[二]
During the summer holidays, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowd, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after other. Then where came into view were fields with green crops. Before a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents’ house. Although I felt tired, but I was happy to see my grandparents, whom I have not seen for a long time. It’s really an exciting trip because it was the first time that I had taken so a long-distance train.
参考答案:
During the summer holidays, my parents and I paid ∧ visit to my
a
grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was
were
crowd, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggage and behaved
crowded
politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one
beautiful
hill after other. Then where came into view were fields with green crops.
another what
Before a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents’ house. Although I felt
After
tired, but I was happy to see my grandparents, whom I have not seen for a
had
long time. It’s really an exciting trip because it was the first time that I had
taken so a long-distance train.
such
[三]
The “white pollution” problem was caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, on which plastic shopping bags play an important role in China. About three billions plastic shopping bags are used every day, that rest in a waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Lucky, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demand that no stores and supermarkets should provide customers with free plastic bags after June I 2007. The rule will undoubtedly reduce use of plastic bags or promote the awareness of environmental protection. He is strongly suggested that everyone turns to cloth bags and shopping baskets.
参考答案:
1. was caused--caused 2. on--in 3. billions --billion 4. that--which 5. Lucky--Luckily 6. demand --demanding 7. reduce use: reduce the use 8. or- and 9. He--It 10.turns--turn
[四]
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of that Chinese and math will be test, the second day physics, chemistry, biology and English. Over the past ten months, they have been busy in preparing this examination. Besides listen to teachers carefully in class, we often work deeply into the night. Therefore, I believe it I can succeed. At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because I came to realize that Chinese and math was very easy and English is my favorite subjects. So I suppose I can get the good marks which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xia
参考答案:
1. that-which 2. test-tested
3. they-we 4. preparing ∧for
5. listen-listening 6. deeply-deep
7. it-that或去掉it 8. was-are
9. subjects-subject 10. 去掉the
[五]
Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,
that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
参考答案:
1.all改为both或删除all 2.about后的a改为an或one
3. interesting改为interested 4. that改为which
5. earlier改为early 6. 删除for
7. Beside改为Besides 8. informations改为information
9.came改为comes 10.pick前加to
[六]
In the summer of 2017, I was admitted into YunYang Senior High School, where I began my school life as a senior student here. When the first term was over, I was luckily chosen as one of the member in BoYa Class. Having spent half a year study with top students together, I now find that I’ve made a very sensible decision to study in this famous school. Our teachers, who is learned and considerate, impress me with their academic performances and noble character. Not only do the students in my class have great dreams, and they are also smart and diligent. Besides, the extracurricular activities are entertaining and colorful. I will never forget the wonderful moments that I spend with my classmates after school last term. The School Soccer Match held at the end of the second term was great success, for it enriched our life and left us students with ease. With the new term approaching, I promise to me that I will be totally devoted to my study, working even hard than before.
参考答案:
71. 去掉here. 72.member改为members 73. study 改为studying 74.is改为are 75。and改为but 76.when改为 that/which 或去掉 77. great 前加a 78. with 改为 at 79. me 改为myself 80.hard改为harder.
[七]
Of all the teachers in my primary school, the one which impressed me most was Mrs. Huang. She was my 5th grade teacher. She was able to making learning fun and I liked her classes very much. Besides, she made me leader of many group project, which gave me confidence. That was with her help that I soon became top student in our class. Looked back on it, I’m very proud for having such an excellent teacher. The reason why I did so good was that she made me to feel confident. I am really grateful to her and I hoped one day I will become a teacher like her.
参考答案:
Of all the teachers in my primary school, the one which impressed me most was Mrs. Huang.
that 或who
She was my 5th grade teacher. She was able to making learning fun and I liked her classes
make
very much. Besides, she made me leader of many group project, which gave me
projects
confidence. That was with her help that I soon became /top student in
It a
our class. Looked back on it, I’m very proud for having such an excellent teacher.
Looking of
The reason why I did so good was that she made me to feel confident.
well 去掉
I am really grateful to her and I hoped one day I will become a teacher like
her.
hope
[八]
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum (流浪汉) in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police.
When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.
参考答案:
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet.
But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a
him said
bum (流浪汉) in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person.
the passed
But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the
was
toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police.
immediately
When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they
and
closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog,
miles With
the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.
[九]
Dear Alice,
I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting
last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a
holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or
practicing my English as well. We’ve been often dreamed of talking face to face
with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation by that time. Perhaps we could go out to
do some sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily
参考答案:
1.去a或改为some 2.win——won 3.pleasing——pleased
4.went——go 5.staying——stay 6.place——places
7.or——and 8.Dreamed--dreaming 9.at——on 10.could——can
[十]
Music and songs play an important part in our daily life. For an example, it can bring us pleasure and make us happy. Besides, they can help us improve our learning efficient. I fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me back into the time when I am loved and cared for Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood when was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten.
参考答案:
Music and songs play an important part in our daily life. For an example,
it(they) can bring us pleasure and make us happy. Besides, they can help us improve our learning efficient(efficiently). I ^( am) fond of listening to songs and music very much, but (and) my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me back into the time when I am(was) loved and cared for^ (by) Grandma. What's more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood when (which) was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow(fellows). In a word, once enjoying( enjoyed), the song will never be forgotten.
did
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