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Section_ⅤWriting—__叙事类记叙文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主,要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言,使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。
一、基本结构
1.开头——交代清楚事件的背景。
2.主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。
3.结尾——呼应标题,发表感想、愿望等。
二、注意事项
1.标题:如有标题,标题一定要明确,能点明事件或主题。
2.人称:通常用第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:在叙事过程中,一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时,常用过去进行时,这样显得更加生动形象。
三、增分佳句
1.Although it happened three years ago, I never forgot the evening party.
2.Last week I had an amusing experience.
3.I was walking in the street when ...
4.When we arrived, they gave us a warm welcome.
5.At last, they saw us off and said goodbye.
6.We had a good time.
7.I learnt a lot from it.
8.If it had not been for Li Hua, I would have got wet through.
[题目要求]
假如你是李华,请根据下面五幅图画写一篇短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。
参考词汇:the Spring Festival Gala 春晚
the Lunar New Year Eve除夕夜
第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文是叙事类记叙文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一人称;
3.确定时态:主要使用一般过去时为主。
二、构思
开头:总述春节的概况。
主体:具体描述春节的经过。
结尾:提出自己的希望和期盼。
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.full_of_fun 充满乐趣
2.be_drowned_in 沉浸在……
3.admire 欣赏
4.set_off 燃放;引爆
5.celebrate 庆祝
6.look_forward_to 盼望
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.我们聚集在一起,吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。
We_all_gathered_around and had a big dinner.
2.然后,春节联欢晚会开始了。
The__Spring_Festival_Gala_followed_then.
3.据报道春晚相当精彩。
It_was_reported_that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful/really a hit.
4.许多明星都在舞台上露面,他们给我们带来了如此多的乐趣以至于我们都沉浸其中,欣赏他们的表演。
Many stars turned_up_on_the_stage and they brought us so much pleasure that we_were_all_drowned_in admiring their performances.
5.午夜时分,我们燃放鞭炮庆祝新年的到来。
The midnight saw us setting_off_the_fireworks_to_celebrate the beginning of a new year.
6. 黎明时,我们盛装打扮,挨家挨户的拜年。
At dawn, we_all_dressed_up_and_paid_a_visit door to door.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句1
We_all_gathered_around_having_a_big_dinner.
2.用全部倒装句改写句2
Then_followed_the_Spring_Festival_Gala.
3.用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3
As_was_reported,_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_was_wonderful/really_a_hit.
4.用现在分词作状语改写句4
Many_a_star_turned_up_on_the_stage,_bringing_us_so_much_pleasure_that_we_were_all_drowned_in_admiring_their_performances.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
The_Spring_Festival_was_really_full_of_fun._First,_on_the_Lunar_New_Year_Eve,_we_all_gathered_around_having_a_big_dinner._Then_followed_the_Spring_Festival_Gala._As_was_reported,_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_was_really_a_hit._Many_a_star_turned_up_on_the_stage,_bringing_us_so_much_pleasure_that_we_were_all_drowned_in_admiring_their_performances._The_midnight_saw_us_setting_off_the_fireworks_to_celebrate_the_beginning_of_a_new_year._Then_we_ate_dumplings._At_dawn,_we_all_dressed_up_and___paid_a_visit_door_to_door_at_dawn._We_do_hope_we_will_have_a_good_luck_in_the_following_new_year_and_we_also_do_look__forward_to_realizing__all_our_dreams.
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