【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达演讲稿写作指导例析（3页word版） 3页

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达演讲稿写作指导例析 在和谐社会里，人际关系中的互帮互助已成为我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以李华的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下：‎ ‎1．帮助同学——加深友谊；‎ ‎2．帮助老人——幸福；‎ ‎3．帮助病人——快乐；‎ ‎4．帮助别人的体会和感悟。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．人际关系中的互帮互助 互帮互助 help_each_other ‎2．帮助同学——加深友谊 加深友谊 strengthen_friendship_‎ ‎3．帮助老人——幸福 感到幸福 feel_happy ‎4．帮助病人——快乐 帮助住院病人 help_patients_in_hospital ‎5．帮助别人的体会和感悟 ‎①促进，提升 promote ‎②非常有用 be_of_great_use ‎③采取行动 take_action 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．我们都知道，互帮互助是我们生活的重要组成部分。‎ As we all know, helping each other is an important part of our life.‎ ‎2．我们可以从帮助别人中获得更多。‎ We can gain more from helping others.‎ ‎3．当我们帮助我们的同学时，我们可以加深我们的友谊。‎ We can strengthen our friendship when we help our classmates.‎ ‎4．帮助别人可以提升我们自己。‎ Helping others can promote ourselves.‎ ‎5．我乐于帮助有困难的人。我坚信这对于构建一个和谐美好的世界将非常有用。‎ I’m ready to help others in need, and I strongly believe that it will be of great use to build a harmonious and wonderful world.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用for example, and, in a word, so等衔接词串句成文 Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic.‎ As we all know, helping each other is an important part of our life. We can gain more from helping others. For example, we can strengthen our friendship when we help our classmates. We can feel happy when we help old people. And we can take great pleasure when we help patients in hospital.‎ In a word, helping others can promote ourselves. So I’m ready to help others in need, and I strongly believe that it will be of great use to build a harmonious and wonderful world. Let’s take action to achieve the good wishes.‎ Thank you for your listening.‎ ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua. I am so honoured to be here today with all of you to talk of helping each other.‎ In our life we often help others and also gets help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and others things, we can developed our friendship. If we give hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of happy. We can also give ‎ our helping hands to those who is suffering from illness, which it can give us much pleasure.I think we can get much when helped the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much best than receiving.”‎ 答案：第二句：of→about/on 第三句：gets→get 第四句：others→other; developed→develop 第五句：give后加a; happy→happiness 第六句：is→are; 去掉it 第七句：helped→helping 第八句：best→better