2020届高考英语短文改错考前提分专练1 9页

‎1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ 增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。‎ Jim is one of my close friend. Two months ago, his mother buy a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard under the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.‎ ‎2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished.‎ ‎ Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.‎ ‎3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎   Arnold was painting his car while he heard what sounded like an explosion.He called 911 and then head toward the scene.A deadly collision was occurred between a truck and a school bus.One of the student,Miles,who managed to escape of the burning bus,was bleeding from a cut on his head.Arnold wrapped a towel tight around his head and then called his father,Gaylord Hill.The father asked to talk with his son,but the teen had trouble heard with the bandage around her head.Then Miles was airlifted to the Medical Center,which his father went to meet him.Gaylord Hill said when he had chance,he planned to call Arnold back and thank him.‎ ‎4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ ‎    Jenny is a Grade Two student. She was once very active and happy girl, but everything has changed before she started playing computer games. She doesn't play ‎ volleyball with her friends any much more. When she sits in the classroom, she has troubles paying attention to what the teachers say. She sleeps in class and she spends little time study. She becomes a complete different person. After school she usually stayed at the computer hall until it is closed. Sometimes her parentscan do everything to stop her. Every morning she feels very tiring after a night’s “busy working”. We feel very sorry to her.‎ ‎5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties his hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young at her age. Which impresses me most is Miss Zhang's way of teaching. She devotes herself to teach and prepares well for every class. Not only did she help us to understand ¨what", but she explores "why". She encourages us to think independent and have discussions among ourselves when we faced with problems. She is such a inspiring person with a strong sense of responsibilities, and we all respect and admire her.‎ ‎6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;‎ ‎2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Zhang Hua is a kind-hearted boy, who is always willing to helping others. Every morning he takes out of rubbish for an old neighbour who lived alone. Sometimes he takes a walk with her and tells her interested stories. Whenever he meets with someone in troubles. he will lend a helping hand. As result, he is high thought of in his neighborhood. Some classmates misunderstand him, saying he is a fool. Some even think she expects something in return. But he doesn’t care if they like him. In his opinion, helping others can not only bring him happiness and also make him grateful for that he has.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 答案以及解析 ‎1、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Jim is one of my close . Two months ago, his mother a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim study hard the help of the computer. To surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is we should use it wisely.‎ 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎2、答案及解析：‎ 答案：   ‎ ‎ My cousin, Daniel, is the most person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to success. His parents died in accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger , so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans  attend a business management course and start his own business three years . Daniel has a dream, he is working hard to achieve it.‎ 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎3、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Arnold was painting his car he heard what sounded like an explosion.He called 911 and then toward the scene.A deadly collision was occurred between a truck and a school bus.One of the ,Miles,who managed to escape the burning bus,was bleeding from a cut on his head.Arnold wrapped a towel around his head and then called his father,Gaylord Hill.The father asked to talk with his son,but the teen had trouble with the bandage around head.Then Miles ‎ was airlifted to the Medical Center, his father went to meet him.Gaylord Hill said when he had  chance,he planned to call Arnold back and thank him.‎ 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎4、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Jenny is a Grade Two student. She was once  very active and happy girl, but everything has changed  she started playing computer games. She doesn't play volleyball with her friends any much more. When she sits in the classroom, she has  paying attention to what the teachers say. She sleeps in class and she spends little time . She becomes a  different person. After school she usually  at the computer hall until it is closed. Sometimes her parentscan do  to stop her. Every morning she feels very  after a night’s “busy working”. We feel very sorry  her.‎ 解析：‎ ‎1. girl是可数名词.根据语境,用单数,冠词置于其他修饰语之前,故在very前加a。‎ ‎2. 句意:她曾经是一个活跃快乐的女孩,但是自从她开始玩电脑游戏以来一切都变了。since “自从……以来”;before “在......之前”。根据语境可知,应把before改为since。‎ ‎3. not…any more意为“不再 ”,是固定短语。句意:她不再与朋友一起打排球。故删除more前的much。‎ ‎4. have trouble doing sth.“做某事有困难”,是常用搭配,词组中的trouble是不可数名词,意思是“困难" 故把troubles改为trouble。‎ ‎5. spend…(in) doing sth.“花费 做某事”,是固定搭配,故把study改为studying。‎ ‎6. completely修饰形容词different作状语,作状语用副词形式。故把complete改为completely。‎ ‎7. 根据语境可知,文章主体时态是一般现在时,主语she是第三人称单数,谓语动词也用单数。故把stayed改为stays。‎ ‎8. 句意:有时候她的父母无法阻止她。根据语境可知,父母对于她玩电脑游戏无能为力。故把everything改为nothing。‎ ‎9. -ing形容词表示被修饰语的特征,-ed形容词表示被修饰语的感受。句意:每天早晨她感觉很累。此处说明主语的感受,故把tiring改为tired。‎ ‎10. feel sorry for sb. “为某人感到遗憾”。故把to改为for。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young her age. impresses me most is Miss Zhang's way of teaching. She devotes herself to and prepares well for every class. Not only she help us to understand ¨what", but she explores "why". She encourages us to think and have discussions among ourselves when we  faced with problems. She is such inspiring person with a strong sense of , and we all respect and admire her.‎ 解析：无 ‎ ‎ ‎6、答案及解析：‎ 答案：‎ Zhang Hua is a kind-hearted boy, who is always willing to others. Every morning he takes out of rubbish for an old neighbour who alone. Sometimes he takes a walk with her and tells her stories. Whenever he meets with someone in . he will lend a helping hand. As  result, he is thought of in his neighborhood. Some classmates misunderstand him, saying he is a fool. Some even think expects something in return. But he doesn’t care if they like him. In his opinion, helping others can not only bring him happiness also make him grateful for he has.‎ 解析：‎ 第一处:考查固定用法。句意:张华是一个热心的男孩,他总是愿意帮助别人。be willing to do乐意做某事,该用法是固定用法,所以helping改为help。‎ 第二处:考查固定短语。句意:每天早上,他为一位独居的老邻居倒垃圾。take out取出,该短语是固定短语,所以去掉of。‎ 第三处:考查时态。句意:每天早上,他为一位独居的老邻居倒垃圾。表示主要现在的状态,用一般现在时,所以lived改为lives。‎ 第四处:考查形容词。句意:有时他和她一起散步,给她讲有趣的故事。v+ing修饰物,v+ed修饰人,该空修饰名词stories,所以interested改为interesting。‎ 第五处:考查固定短语。句意:每当他遇到有麻烦的人,他会伸出援助之手。in trouble处于不幸中,该短语是固定短语,所以troubles改为trouble。‎ 第六处:考查固定短语。句意:结果,他在邻居中受到很高的评价。as a result结果,该短语是固定短语,所以as后加a。‎ 第七处:考查固定短语。句意:结果,他在邻居中受到很高的评价。be highly thought of被高度评价,该短语是固定短语,所以high改为highly。‎ 第八处:考查代词。句意:有些人甚至认为他希望得到一些回报。根据Zhang Hua is a kind-hearted boy,可知张华是男孩,所以she改为he。‎ 第九处:考查固定结构。句意:在他看来,帮助别人不仅能给他带来快乐,也能让他感激他所拥有的。not only…but also不仅...而且...,该结构是固定结构,所以and改为but。‎ 第十处:考查宾语从句。句意:在他看来,帮助别人不仅能给他带来快乐,也能让他感激他所拥有的。这里含有一个宾语从句,引导词在从句中作宾语,所以that改为what。‎ ‎ ‎