【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题如何写记叙文的主体（6页word版） 6页

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达专题 如何写记叙文的主体 出现在读写任务型作文中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。‎ ‎1．写作步骤 概括原文―→衔接过渡―→描述事件―→发表看法 ‎2．过渡语句 ‎①This reminds me of the similar experience.‎ ‎②This story brings me back to an event many years ago.‎ ‎③I had a similar experience.‎ ‎3．注意事项 ‎(1)注意时态的运用。记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。‎ ‎(2)注意人称的一致性。要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。‎ ‎(3)篇章结构。通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。‎ ‎[审题谋篇]‎ ‎—————————————————————————————————————‎ ‎(2018·江苏仪征中学月考)阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ The Elephant and the Fly An elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree. A small fly came, flying and buzzing near his ear. The elephant waved it away with his long ears. Then the fly came again, and the elephant waved it away once more. ‎ This was repeated several times. Then the elephant asked the fly, “Why are you so restless and noisy? Why can't you stay for a while in one place? ”‎ The fly answered, “I am attracted to whatever I see, hear or smell. My senses pull me constantly in all directions and I cannot resist them. What is your secret? How can you stay so calm and still？”‎ The elephant said, “My senses do not rule my attention. Whatever I do, I get involved in it. Now that I am eating, I am completely absorbed in eating. In this way I can enjoy my food and chew it better. I rule and control my attention. When you are in charge of your senses and attention, your mind will become calm.”‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．以约30个单词概括短文的内容；‎ ‎2．然后以约120个单词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：‎ ‎(1)看完故事后的感受及启发；‎ ‎(2)描述一次你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的经历；‎ ‎(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎[审题]‎ 本文为寓言性短文，要概括故事的内容，就要读懂故事的寓意。结合题目要求“就‘专注’这一主题发表你的看法”，从而确定文章写作应围绕“专注”这一主题。审题时应做到：‎ ‎(1)定时态：本文在概括内容和描述经历时用过去时，在写打算时用将来时；‎ ‎(2)定人称：描述自己的经历用第一人称，他人的经历用第三人称。‎ ‎[谋篇]‎ 第一段：概括短文内容。‎ 第二段：衔接过渡语引出主题句。‎ 第三段：描述一次受干扰的经历。‎ 第四段：保持专注的打算。‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ ‎①An elephant was constantly disturbed by a restless fly, who wondered about the secret of remaining calm. ②The elephant revealed that calmness would be obtained when one's senses and attention were focused.‎ ‎③Inspired by what the elephant said, I realized the ability to focus one's attention is the key to success. ④Any person, if easily distracted, is unable to achieve his success.‎ ‎⑤This reminds me of what happened in my primary school. ⑥I once signed up for too many various afterclass activities. ⑦As a result, I didn't spend enough time on my studies. ⑧Consequently, I fell behind and failed in exams.‎ ‎⑨Since then I have known that one should focus on one thing before it is well done. ⑩As a Senior Three student, having set a clear goal, I will give priority to it, trying to resist any temptation. ⑪I'm fully aware that only with a determined mind can I achieve my goal. ‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．行文架构 ‎(1)概括短文内容 ‎　↓‎ ‎(2)通过衔接过渡语(Inspired by what the elephant said ...)引出主题：专注是成功的关键 ‎　↓‎ ‎(3)描述经历：自己初中时参加多种课外活动导致考试不及格 ‎　↓‎ ‎(4)打算：在高三阶段如何保持专注 ‎2．亮点词汇 constantly, obtain, focus one's attention, distract, sign up, consequently, give priority to, set a clear goal, achieve one's goal　‎ ‎3．亮点句式 句①含有who引导的非限制性定语从句；‎ 句②、句⑤、句⑨含有宾语从句；‎ 句③、句⑩使用了过去分词和现在分词作状语；‎ 句④含有状语从句的省略。‎ ‎[句式改写]‎ ‎1．用only 倒装句改写句②中的宾语从句 The elephant revealed that only_when_one's_senses_and_attention_were_focused_would_calmness_be_obtained.‎ ‎2．用强调句改写句③‎ Inspired by what the elephant said, I realized it_is_the_ability_to_focus_one's_attention_that_is_the_key_to_success.‎ ‎(2018·苏北三市高三模拟考试)请阅读下面短文， 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Puss, a mother cat, with her three kittens, had lived in the local cellar (地下室); but one day she thought she would carry them to the attic (阁楼)．‎ The servant thought that was not the proper place for them; so she carried them back to the cellar.‎ Puss was certain that she wanted them in the attic; so she carried them there again and again, five, six, seven, — yes, a dozen times; for each time the servant took them back to the cellar. ‎ Poor Puss was nearly tired out, and could carry them no longer.‎ Suddenly she went away. Where do you think she went?‎ She was gone a long time. When she returned, she had a strange cat with her that we had never seen before.‎ She seemed to tell him all about her great trouble, and he listened to her story.‎ Then the strange cat took the little kittens, one by one, and carried them to the attic. After this he went away, and we have never seen him since.‎ The servant then left the kittens in the attic, for she saw how anxious Puss was to have them stay there.‎ Wasn't the strange cat kind to Puss? This story should teach children to be ready to help one another.‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词对“乐于助人”这一话题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)读完上文后你的感受；‎ ‎(2)描述一件你亲身经历的帮助别人的事；‎ ‎(3)为什么要弘扬乐于助人的精神？‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；‎ ‎2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ 参考范文：‎ To have her kittens stay in the proper place — attic, Puss tried several times but was always stopped by the servant. Thanks for a strange and kind cat's help, she made it.‎ I'm deeply moved by what the strange cat did. He helped Puss selflessly asking for nothing in return, which made me think of what happened to me recently. It was on Monday morning, when several teachers attended our English lesson. Among them, a middleaged teacher sat beside me, leaving her wallet on my desk. But she forgot to take it after class. So I rushed out, gave it back to her and ran away.‎ As far as I am concerned, the spirit of being ready to help others should be advocated. Helping others is a traditional virtue in China. If you help others today, maybe others will help you in the future. In this way, we can construct a harmonious society.‎